Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10** - Page 12

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Will read all in a go now. I am glad to see so many to read after coming back from a short break.

I'll be here soon.

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Hey NJ!!!!!!!!!

How and when will you understand that how much I missed your reads. - awww prathi, you have no idea how incredibly sweet that is of you to say, after the painfully delaying writer i always tend to be! *hugs* - its awe-freak-some to have you back!!!

Wow!! That was a very pleasurable one to read on. Reading it all in a go was really exciting. Maaneet just rocked all through. Subtle yet very romantically tuned. - haha! drawing inspiration of storyline from austen can amount to nothing that's not romantic! - are you watching this show btw?!

What I absolutely love in your writing is that even the minsicule reaction in the characters is delivered to us in detail. So much that I start visulazing the whole read. I must say, you have given an added flavour to the leads.- you probably are watching then! yayyyy you prathi, to like the writing! its always fun trying newer characters!

Enjoyed reading it and hoping to see more coming here.

Originally posted by: Pebblez

*ducks from all the jootis, chappals and gallis thrown her way*

Sorry sorry sorry! Kaan pakar ke sorry hota yaaaar...do din se mujhe computer naseeb nahi ho raha sahee se, and then I thought ke tere iss 'short' story ko khatam kerne mein jitna time mein lungi, utna time main mujhe itiiiiiiiiii galian parengi :P to behtar hai, aik aik ker ke comment thokti jaun :P

So yeah...you know, the beginning of the part, where the whole 'boat' scene was introduced reminded me of this one scene in A Suitable Boy, which, of course, was on a totally different dimension..but it took me back to the visual imagination of that point..I particularly liked how you moulded in their 'bachpan ka pyaaaar' into the story, right away in the first part :D and the full names exchange was delightful, it's something i have been becoming accustomed to kafi arsay se :P with a few people...but thats another thing..

I have said this too many times...your attention to detail for every single thing, right down to the strength of Maan Sahab ke muscles with the oars :P everything is so perfectly put out, and event hough sometimes I might want to omit the details, but in reality they sum up to make an almost close to reality image in the head :) that's your strength of writing!! I loved Geet and Maan's interactions, the slight angst Maan held at her foolish plans, her determination to prove she had been right :) all of it was amazingly put in!!

The exchange of words between the two was fun to read..even though I have been quite out of touch with the drama and half the people in it, i dont even know..yet it was a pleasant read and I am jumping onto part 2 to read more :)

See you soon, here :D cheeers!!

Kiran

Nasu,

...If like this evening, the evening of his own life would find her around or not, by his side or fatefully rent asunder...

... And Adi... why he'd be crazy to even consider me knowing I'm close friends with his Hitler incarnate boss!"...

Alright, so when I started reading this fic, I decided to compile my favorite lines/phrases/dialogues in my comments but then as I read further, I was so totally engrossed in it that I totally forgot abt doing so and wen I started doing it, I got only this far before realising that I loved each and every word that you've put in. So, I've already told you a million times that I'm totally crazy about your writing style and skills but still, everytime I read an article/one-shot/fic by you, I just don't fail to be amazed! You've got a super-duper lexicon, an outstanding writing style and a unique, engrossing way to weave words into sentences. I don't in the least bit regret that my net ditched me wen I'd started reading the first part of this fic bcoz then I got so busy wid other stuff that I could come back to this one only after you've completed it and I'm really grateful for that coz I don't think I'd have had the patience to wait even 24 hours till your next update.

It was simply UNPUTDOWNABLE!!!

And yes, I really regret that this piece couldn't make it in time to the contest bcoz it deserved to be there and amongst the emerging winners!

Nabzy's right! You're totally on an outstanding level when it comes to writing!

I loved the charachterisation, description and dialogue of every charachter. The drama quotient I think was apt considering it was Maaneet!😉 You so brilliantly portrayed Maan and Geet in a totally different style but ruining their essence (not)!

So, I could go on and on about your writing but I'd definitely say one thing: YOU HAVE MADE ME A PERMANENT FAN OF YOURS!!!

And that means, forget not, to PM me abt your next bit of writing irrespective on whosoever it is and also that I want a full-fledged Maaneet fic from you, soon or else, I'm starting a petition for the same and I'm sure ample people will be happy to join in. AND! I yet have to find time to read all the other stuff by you which is yet awaiting me. (oh but I'm still greedy for Maaneet by NJ 😉)

cheers,

Tia

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear very nice story................liked it very much................reading first Maaneet ff so far......................can u gimme all the ffs u have written till date????????????? i think i have read Newton's Laws was ur ff..............loved it very much...................

Originally posted by: nisha.munim

NJ!! :D

I was expecting this to be super brilliant, and it went way, way beyond my expectations! It was such a delight to read your ff. I was entirely engrossed the whole time. You write so, so beautifully. Your descriptions are so detailed, without being tediously so. I could picture everything so perfectly. And the whole flow is so smooth. And the words you use are so apt, and so powerful. And I am running out of words myself now. lol. This was so breathtakingly awesome! I loved every single bit. I am a huge, huge fan of yours! :D

Thank you very much for this! Really.

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Nasu,

Finally, I read your fic and here's what I have to say...

:...Adi with his trademark low laugh which was like a lurching scooter engine running on reserve residue oil and Tasha with a vigorous nodding of her fashionably empty head...

...If like this evening, the evening of his own life would find her around or not, by his side or fatefully rent asunder...

... And Adi... why he'd be crazy to even consider me knowing I'm close friends with his Hitler incarnate boss!"...

Alright, so when I started reading this fic, I decided to compile my favorite lines/phrases/dialogues in my comments but then as I read further, I was so totally engrossed in it that I totally forgot abt doing so and wen I started doing it, I got only this far before realising that I loved each and every word that you've put in. So, I've already told you a million times that I'm totally crazy about your writing style and skills but still, everytime I read an article/one-shot/fic by you, I just don't fail to be amazed! You've got a super-duper lexicon, an outstanding writing style and a unique, engrossing way to weave words into sentences. I don't in the least bit regret that my net ditched me wen I'd started reading the first part of this fic bcoz then I got so busy wid other stuff that I could come back to this one only after you've completed it and I'm really grateful for that coz I don't think I'd have had the patience to wait even 24 hours till your next update.

It was simply UNPUTDOWNABLE!!! - lol - and you were saying something about my lexicon?!!! which definitely falls short of inventing such pleasantly, flattering words 😆😆

And yes, I really regret that this piece couldn't make it in time to the contest bcoz it deserved to be there and amongst the emerging winners! - right, you mean if i'd cut like 2/3rds of it or something to fit the word limit?!!! and of course, if i'd not been so busy procrastinating 😲 i'm glad you like it so much though tia - and that's what!

Nabzy's right! You're totally on an outstanding level when it comes to writing! so is she herself, and you too missy, so the modesty can be well skipped now!

I loved the charachterisation, description and dialogue of every charachter. The drama quotient I think was apt considering it was Maaneet!😉 You so brilliantly portrayed Maan and Geet in a totally different style but ruining their essence (not)!

So, I could go on and on about your writing but I'd definitely say one thing: YOU HAVE MADE ME A PERMANENT FAN OF YOURS!!! - nahhh, u know me better than that don't cha tia?!! no fanships for the nazis 😆

And that means, forget not, to PM me abt your next bit of writing irrespective on whosoever it is and also that I want a full-fledged Maaneet fic from you, soon or else, I'm starting a petition for the same and I'm sure ample people will be happy to join in. AND! I yet have to find time to read all the other stuff by you which is yet awaiting me. (oh but I'm still greedy for Maaneet by NJ 😉) sigh! i shall write, but i'll miss reading your comments if you don't make a come back for a while :| i totally hope you do! if you need a word put in to your boss-to-be, tell him what a fun talented writer u are and how much people miss u, when ur not around! - i can vow for it 😃

cheers,

Tia

Originally posted by: anufa

its awsummmm!!!!!


loved iT!!!!