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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Very true Opti, each one of us are different.. I think thats the fundamental truth we have to accept and not force others to our mold of thinking/behaviour.. Thats when life gets unbearable.. I am glad that ur friend was able to accept and their relation grew stronger.. It also shows her strength of love and acceptance!! Coming to changing ur reader's mindset - THATS QUITE AN ACHIEVEMENT!! Even if one person is inspired by ur writing and changed the way they think/behave - that is wonderful compliment for the writer 👏👏👏

I have noticed something - Some life experience are always behing ur stories... I love how u make people think through stories- Isnt Geet trying to do the same 😉

Yes, Rev, each one of us is different. How boring life will be if all of us are the same. I try to give some message through my fics but there is always the fear that I may end up sounding preachy but then that is a peril I would have to live with. Coming to Geet, I love the story so far. They have mixed romance with messages. Hope they don't ruin it by taking the beaten path of endless unions and separations of the leads or bring in some undigestable twists. The last show I was really in love with was Kayamath but they ruined it pretty badly and made us all look like fools by throwing some unbelievable trash at us. Towards the end we just wanted the show to end so that what little good memories we had of the show we could still hold on to.

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Opti

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl
nice one dear..luvd it..and ya i havnt read this b4..lol..and omg u used my invented word too-'maaneetified'..ROFL

Yep, I used your word. I guess I should have acknowledged your contribution to the Maaneet dictionary. Will remember to do that next time.

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

To be true I don't read much of maneet work....and if I do read..I rarely comment I'm a silent reader in this case !

But today I came across this os of yours and I'm compelled to comment !
Yep, it's true a relationship is not only based on what you share and what you don't coz every relation has it's own beauty ! If, I don't share one aspect of my life with someone close doesn't mean I don't love then no! I sincerely liked maan's pov and geet's understanding nature ! The way you've explored and explained the dynamics of relationship's is amazing !

Obviously if you love someone from such a long time....you do know them....and it's not always the time that matter's it's your maturity and understanding that matters in the relationship !

Sadly today people fight over these issues and break up...and change their partners like t-shirts and it's not only applicable to teenagers but people in mid 20's....30's too....

I really liked the way you wrote this os...it's beautiful !! :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Opti

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
To be true I don't read much of maneet work....and if I do read..I rarely comment I'm a silent reader in this case !

But today I came across this os of yours and I'm compelled to comment !
Yep, it's true a relationship is not only based on what you share and what you don't coz every relation has it's own beauty ! If, I don't share one aspect of my life with someone close doesn't mean I don't love then no! I sincerely liked maan's pov and geet's understanding nature ! The way you've explored and explained the dynamics of relationship's is amazing !

Obviously if you love someone from such a long time....you do know them....and it's not always the time that matter's it's your maturity and understanding that matters in the relationship !

Sadly today people fight over these issues and break up...and change their partners like t-shirts and it's not only applicable to teenagers but people in mid 20's....30's too....

I really liked the way you wrote this os...it's beautiful !! :)

-Fatima

Thanks Fatima. Sorry for the late response. It is only now that I read it. Yes, if you love a person, you accept them in totality and not expect them to change their basic nature. Every relationship has its place and if the partners respect that of each other there should be no problem. Marriage is a partnership which involves adjustments and the reluctance to adjust is what leads to a lot of break up. Glad you could appreciate the message I tried to convey through this fic.