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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Thanks -Parisa- and queen_ali😊

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

wow...i like your version of truth revelation....it is intense..but then..Maaneet have that effect on us is it not...

i loved it...

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311578

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: rushtrip
wow...i like your version of truth revelation....it is intense..but then..Maaneet have that effect on us is it not...

i loved it...

This coming from an amazing writer herself makes me wanna write more...
BTW, did you read both parts?

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Posted: 15 years ago

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no just the one..oh there are two..i am daft..i did not see..

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311578

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: rushtrip
no just the one..oh there are two..i am daft..i did not see..

Awaiting your response

Edited by dolphinUSA - 15 years ago

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Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

OMG just loved it!! Wish Maan's reaction is the same here and OMG what a coincidence Pee loon playing in the promo as well😲, hope this is a sign that things will turn out in the show lie they do in ur OS, loved it!!! glad i caught this one as well, u write brilliantly!!

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311578

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Originally posted by: desigirl_18
OMG just loved it!! Wish Maan's reaction is the same here and OMG what a coincidence Pee loon playing in the promo as well😲, hope this is a sign that things will turn out in the show lie they do in ur OS, loved it!!! glad i caught this one as well, u write brilliantly!!

Thank you very much😳
I love Pee loon and whenever I listen to it, only Maaneet come to mind and I have no idea why. So the last part was crafted to incorporate the song. 😊

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ansah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

so nice...so touching...

read both the parts and must say they are amazing and so are u

loved it....

keep writing 👏

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311578

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ansah
so nice...so touching...
read both the parts and must say they are amazing and so are u

loved it....

keep writing 👏

Awww thanks so much😊
You can read my other OS too...follow the link in my signature😊

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Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

this OS was amazing...i really lyked how u linked pee loon into the scene

at first i thought u wrote this last week or something but then i looked at the date n i was lyke She is gooood lol

hope the bus scene happens at the train station tmr