OS - Out comes the Truth...part 2 page 3 - Page 6

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

@ venusgem - did you read both parts? I am confused...do you like my OS or do you like me😉

Let me know what stands out most according to you....

I do have feelings for you, I love you. But I cannot do this to you. You deserve to be with someone better, someone more pious, someone purer than me. I have scars all over my body and soul.....
u brought tears to me....😭

Originally posted by: venusgem

I do have feelings for you, I love you. But I cannot do this to you. You deserve to be with someone better, someone more pious, someone purer than me. I have scars all over my body and soul.....
u brought tears to me....😭

I know, this piece was a bit emotional. And to come to think of it, I think she does think of it that way. It's just that she doesn't say it out loud. When I think about her, all I see is a bubbly girl trying to hide her broken heart, her scarred soul and her excruciating pain, she tries to suppress her emotions lest she becomes weak. I hope I did justice to her situation.

to her as well as to me... u shouldn't write like this..to make us cry....uffffffffffff WOW. :)

Originally posted by: venusgem

to her as well as to me... u shouldn't write like this..to make us cry....uffffffffffff WOW. :)

Where there is love, there is pain😊

Love and tears go hand in hand.

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Where there is love, there is pain😊

Love and tears go hand in hand.

ishq kaa dard hai..dard hai isq kaa....meri dhuniyame aake...mathjaa mathjaaaaaaaaa
i love that song...perfect for maneet when he goes to vacation...maybe i will start singing for geet.

baap re baap...more than 2000 viewed this..wow..yaar kiyaa jaadooo hai...viewers outnumbered your post counts even :) congra...
aur is thread kaa most loyal fan is Venus :) Award me...if not i will cry...

Originally posted by: venusgem

baap re baap...more than 2000 viewed this..wow..yaar kiyaa jaadooo hai...viewers outnumbered your post counts even :) congra...
aur is thread kaa most loyal fan is Venus :) Award me...if not i will cry...

Yes, you get the award.
Aur Venus ki biggest fan is dolphin😊

Ohhhh

Beautiful OS..............Very well written.....I want Maan To strangle Dev ..GOd i hate that man so much...Keep it up !!!

Originally posted by: -honeydew-

tumhe bahut maza aata hai na? kisi aur ko dard de kar ... kisi aur ke aankhon main aansoon dekh kar ... fir se rula dia ...!!! hai raam...!!! kaisi ladki ,, bhagwaan!! nirday ...!!!

but seriously... after this you have lost all rights to even claim you cant write ...!!

it was soo soo beautiful ... !! esp the part where he walks off... btw .. a few lines ... made come up with a new thought ... which i shall post shortly ... thank you ... you rock...🤗

keep it coming in!!

love,
niha

phir se rula diya? who what when where why how?
You know even I am beginning to think I can write - but not stories. I think I can read between lines, analyze things and write emotions much better than story plots.

you rock too babes!