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salma

@starchase

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

OMG JAZ that was fantastic.👏 I loved reading and every bit of it:) U have writtenit beautifully!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hope something like this happens soon on TV ...

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hayeeeeeeeee!! Jaaani..u killed me in the early morning yaar!!

Kya story hai!! Waaah!

The emotions that u wrote..babes..hayeeee..i could so imagine them 2 w/it!! and the dialogues were the ones that killed me!! hehe!!

Loveeeeeeeed it!!!

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Do I like this?

I LOVED THIS ❤️
OMG Jaz, what a story! 😊
The dialogues, the scenes, the descriptions...perfect, mindblowing, fantastic!!!!!!!!! 👏

OMG please please please continue writing, and continue to send me PMs! 😃

This was great, the perfect after-scene after yesterday's sad and dreary episode! 👍🏼

You brought my spirits back up girl! Thanks! 😊

-Anisha

Edited by starstruck2 - 14 years ago

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

TWIN!!!!!!!!!

OMG OMG...that was just absitively posilutely fantastically awesome!!!...i had no idea you wrote soo well dude...it was just beautiful and soo touching!!!...you captured all their emotions perfectly in the dialogues...it was like i was watching the actual episode...i think this was one of the best OS I have ever read and you know that means something, considering how many i read😉...wish this could happen in the real episode too but wow, what a twist...i never thought about maan finding out the truth that way....hopefully, this is long enough for you to write more😆...thanks for the pm!!!...omg seriously, how could you think it wud bug me? *gasp*...from now on, i expect to get more!!😉

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

speechless dear... i love the way you write .

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Jaz awesome yaar.... beautiful... U portrayed every emotion so well...

simply superb...

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

awww JAZ , that was awesome and so beautifully written 👏
I wish something like this happens in the serial ... that would be awesome.😍
The hug at the end was very much needed
Loved the OS 👍🏼
btw I loved this part "Maan Singh Khurana ne piche hatne ke liyeh, khabi kadam aage nahin badaya," he said in the same hushed tone. WOW ! 😃

Edited by Innocent02 - 14 years ago

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

OMG OMG OMG!!After readin tht i ACTUALLy wished tht this shud happen but i knw it wont,Anywa,u rock girl...m just speechless,m like wat shu i say?m just lost fr words!!!Awesome,Fab,Splendid.....!!!!