OS: Truly...Madly...Deeply

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Kashish

@thesaint148

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

JAZ this was one of the best things i have read on forum in a long time. You have left me speechless with your amazing expression and brilliant portrayal of Maan's Pure love and geets heartfelt emotions. Love indeed is one of the most beautiful feelings God has instilled in humans.

Well done JAz ... you really rock 👏

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

That was so beautiful. It almost got tears to my eyes. Thank you!

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FSM-93

@FSM-93

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

WOW jaz awesome....sooo sweet.... 😊 ....expressed rilli well I mean expressing in words is moStly difficult u did a great job and if u decide to ryte more plzzzz do pm me....=D

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Julie

@JULIEL

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

that was truely awesome!!! loved reading it!!!

Edited by JULIEL - 14 years ago

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sana

@Sananya09

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Wow! CV's should read your post! and learn a few things 😆

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hi Jaz,

This was very beautiful! True Love. Hopefully, he won't judge her in the show.

-Sona

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

wow speechless is the word for the story.
loved it totally
do continue
bye sumi

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Roshni

@Roshni.

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

JAZ!!!!!

I'm speechless! This is so beautiful and wonderful!

Reserved for long comment!😳

EDIT - I'm back

You are an awesome writer Jaz! I did not know it before!

Starting with - I really loved the way you portrayed his feelings, it was so natural. I prefer it your way showing that Maan has already come to know and clear of misunderstandings.

Next, I enjoyed how Maan was eavesdropping - that was obviously not the usual Maan Singh Khurana does, but I like this hatke style.

Next , Geet calling Pinky was fun! It actually resulted in the better way!

OH! My Maan SIngh Khurana is the best! ☺️ I love the way he confronted..In fact I loved everything he did! 😳 😍 You just showed him very well and I have really no words to express!

But then, then she felt him tenderly kiss the top of her head, and she knew he did. And just like that, nothing else mattered. Nothing else was important. Nothing else but her baby and the man she come to admire and respect – the man she'd inevitably come to love…truly…madly…deeply.

The Best conclusion I've ever read! I am so in love with this!

Please Please do write some more OS! ☺️

PS: I think comment bahut zyada lamba ho gaya!😳

PPS: I love this song by Savage garden! ☺️😳

Edited by Roshni. - 14 years ago

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Dimple

@-Dimple-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Jazz first of all thank u for m\reminding me of this........warna i would have missed such a beautiful scene!!

you wrote it so perfectly........ahhhhh i so wish ye sab itna aasan hota