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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

awesome.what i can say .realy sookhie your inner thoughts are reflecting the calmness before big storm.really beautiful. yes sometime relationship brings maturity,a sense of security , alghthness in your heart and reason to change yourseif. i am not able to find any words to describe your writeup. but yes it is very heart touching .

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Jenifer.
Wow. I, err, well...wow.

At loss of coherent speech at the moment but just want to say that I haven't read something this good in ages. I love how you've penned down Maan's thoughts, it indeed feels like the calm before the storm.

Aaaaaand that's about all I can manage to say at the moment but before I shoot off, I will surely be checking out the link in your siggie box =D

Thank you so much Jennifer! Glad you found this good! :-)

Maan is a good character to write on... even though the entire series is shot from Geet's point of view, or at least that's how it started.

:-) Sure, check out the links there... you will find few series and handful of OS... mostly AR :D

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

My dearest Sookie ..... 🤗 ...

This one touches the heart ..... bullseye ... !!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I'm at a loss for words..... usually I ramble on .... this time .. I need to collect myself and come back ....

Thanks for posting this !

Your "Sigh !!" ... at the end summed it all up !!!!

🤗 once again to an awesome writer - A Magician with words !!!!

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Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

The first tear that was caught in her eyelashes for far too long made me bite my tongue, count to hundred before I utter angry words. Her frantic heart beat, which she thinks I cannot hear or feel, gives away her fear when she finds out that I have arrived after a long trip. When I lean into her whenever I speak with a lady friend, I can feel heat radiating from her and she leans into me ever so slightly, sharing my own personal space, as if she always belonged there.

I love that para...

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sananya09
You are an AH-MAZING writer!! 😃 Do you have any FF's? 😆

Thank you! Yes, I do have FFs but they are all AR!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: aarathikb
very well written.liked it a lot.

Thank you aarthi...glad you liked it...

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: zerro
Ur writing is irresistible.Yes. D moment i c u have written something my heart leaps!i am a fan of whatever u write.coz. Whatever u write is magic.❤️❤️❤️

Thank you soo much!!! Wow...I am very happy to see the comment :-)

Again million thanks!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ash08
Absolutely beautiful. 👏👏
Maan's reflection of this thoughts and actions, talking of beginning and endings, calm before the storm - awesome Sookie.

Thanks Ash... Yeah..one last hurrah before all hell breaks loose :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
awesome.what i can say .realy sookhie your inner thoughts are reflecting the calmness before big storm.really beautiful. yes sometime relationship brings maturity,a sense of security , alghthness in your heart and reason to change yourseif. i am not able to find any words to describe your writeup. but yes it is very heart touching .

Thank you very much for the comment!!! I now don't know how to respond to your kind words...

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rusha4003
My dearest Sookie ..... 🤗 ...

This one touches the heart ..... bullseye ... !!!!

👏

I'm at a loss for words..... usually I ramble on .... this time .. I need to collect myself and come back ....

Thanks for posting this !

Your "Sigh !!" ... at the end summed it all up !!!!

🤗 once again to an awesome writer - A Magician with words !!!!

Thank you so much Usha, for your comments :-) Glad you found this to your liking :D
Well, I have a bad feeling about tonight's episode - not because the story demands it, because that's how television generally works... If Maan and Geet are normal tonight, then... :D :D

Thanks!!!!