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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sridevi27
The first tear that was caught in her eyelashes for far too long made me bite my tongue, count to hundred before I utter angry words. Her frantic heart beat, which she thinks I cannot hear or feel, gives away her fear when she finds out that I have arrived after a long trip. When I lean into her whenever I speak with a lady friend, I can feel heat radiating from her and she leans into me ever so slightly, sharing my own personal space, as if she always belonged there.

I love that para...

Thanks Sri :-)

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Superb...👏👏

Thanks!

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Amerra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

wow!! amazing as usual!!

wow sookie ur tooooooooooooo creative!!

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Amazing is the word that comes to my mind after reading this !

It's a silent and a calm post ....the way u've reflected maan's pov and thinking and level of maturity is indeed beautiful ! Yep it's also true order comes after chaos ...

At times I too do the same ponder in the silence of night I guess many of us do that and find solace in the tranquility of night !

I love to read your stories and don't even think twice who the main protagonist is coz they simply leave me spellbound !!

And hey not fair you forget to pm me half of the time...it's me who has to rummage thro' your post to find the ones which I've not read !

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Maneetforever
wow!! amazing as usual!!
wow sookie ur tooooooooooooo creative!!

Thank you very much!!!

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Do not Tell

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

-d- now don't ask me what I am doin

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

I am late here.

Silence before storm. Silence after storm. Whatever it is, its just how we see it. I know its off hook from the contest here.

Awesomely written S. I could so very well visulaize both of them here. It was subtly simple.