FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i jst read all those update u have sent bout 8 updates
and it was amzaing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part!...
beautifully written!......it was soooo touchy!....
really love toilet scene!....geet really feels cold!...
glad that maan started knowing geet!....
its good to see that everything is going right!....and that geet is also ok!....
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part..Maan gave really good gift to Geet..after hearing that i can't loose you..Geet never run away form him..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely dear. The one who is not ready to use the loo just because the kamood will be cold will have rain dance? that too in the mid night @ shimla. Great dear.Great creativity. Keep up the good flow. update the next part really soon.
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

muskiiiiiiiiii

u always surprise me with ur updates...
the commode sequnec was hilarious........it had me in splits......i was like yeh kahaan se aa gaya...........but loved it...........cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
fabulous update as usual..................
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that washroom scene was too hilarious geet feeling winter that cumod fear is with me also
its really embarrassing but what to do its cold in winter
and maan birthday was so special
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.. enjoyed the surprise.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - tum geet...tum hi to ho jise khuda ne bhi sirf mera liya banaya tha..
tum kyu nahi mile mujh se phele... kyu mujhe apne se door rakha itne saal
geet was lost in his words...she looked in his eyes...maan kissed her eyes & said
happy birth day geet..thanxs same to u..& she smiled..

part 82

maan got up early & arranged for breakfast ..
got a rose for geet...when she opened her eyes..maan kissed her
& said happy birthday princess..& gave her coffee..
krish - dad ...mom coffee nahi pasand karthi..
geet - nahi its nice..I like it..(she sipped)
maan - I have been always getting coffee for u..
geet - nahi.. seriously loved it thanxs(maan pagali ho tum)
he went out for a jog & came back got ready..when he came back he noticed
geet & krish were little dirturbed mood
geet was getting cranky & annoyed..lossing her temper every now & then
maan(wispers to krish) - kya hua?
krish - I am leaving tonight na..isliya..mood thoda khrab hain
maan - yeh thoda karab hain???
krish - jada main..we cannot stand here..dad..things will be flying outside the window..
geet stares at krish...
maan definitly did'nt want to be in her bad books today...
he did exactly wat she said...even that was annoying her...
by afternoon she was little better...

maan had arranged for lunch....he booked the best resturant in the town &
got the interior done with flowers & ordered special menu ...
maan & krish reached the venue first..
krish - wow dad really wonderful..(he checks the menu)
too good fantastic!! but dad
maan - but ...why..wat happened?? is there anything missing
krish - aap ne sab non-veg order kiya hain?
maan - why...(krish pulls his ears close to his mouth )
kris - mom Vegitarian hain...
maan - wat??? lekin wow to cook!!!
krish - woh cook karthi hain kyun ki aap aur main kaathe hain..
she does'nt like the taste..woo to soya chunks bhi nahi pasand karthi...
maan - thanxs god there is mushrooms..
krish - no no..mushrooms to unhe dikhana bhi nahi..
maan - kyun? woh to vegitarian hain
krish - she hates mushrooms..woh use frog ka ghar kehthi hain...
maan sat down holding his stomach..he could'nt stop laughing..frog ka ghar!!!
geet walked in...saw maan sitting in the floor...
maan got up at once..still controlling his smile..krish sat innocently on
the chair..looking away..geet looked suspeciously at them
geet - kya hua?
maan - kuch nahi...lets order..
geet - lehkin..yeh sab..
maan - tum yeh rehne do...we are ordering..
he calls the waiter & orders for few veg dishes
mean while geet serves them & then she sees mushrooms..chi chi babaji frog ka ghar
maan laughs & stops..looks at geet..she stared at him...&.. then at krish
geet - tum loog mera mazak uttarahe ho?
maan - nahi geet..aise koi baath nahi hain..
geet - mujhe nahi kahana tumhare saath..
maan - please sweet heart..gussa mat karoo..
krish - maa please...
geet - tum log khaloo..waise bhi ..aap ne mera liya to kuch order bhi nahi kiya tha
main to bin bulaii mehmaan hoon...
maan - geeeeeeeeeet..(shouts)
geet(fumbles & snaps back) - aap mujhe daraoo mat..
krish - dad kuch karoo warna challijayghi..
maan - kya karoon..iska gussa to saathve asmaan pe hain..
geet ..geet sunoo..
geet - mujhe nahi suna
maan - krish aaj hostel chala jayaga..phir tum yeh lunch miss karooghi..
krish kai liya to ..please(krish makes a baby like face)
geet runs out & breaks down crying..
maan - sweetheart..please (lifts her chin..holds his ears with both the hands & says sorry)
I arranged all just this for u...tumhe aach nahi laga..
geet - nahi..
maan - acha ji & hugs her...(she hits him on the chest..)aaa geet..deehre
geet - itne bhi zoor nahi mara maine...
maan - main to tumhare liya chilla raha tha...mera dil main tum rahthi hoona..
geet looks at him & smiles..& hits again..yet slower...
they have lunch ....maan & krish ..still smile every now & then looking at mushrums..

latter in the party..all krish's friends had come..
geet came looking for maan..
geet - challiya sab aagaya..cake cut karna hain
maan - kitna cake cut karvooghi tum...
geet stared at him...ok..ok..maan said
maan was taken a back to see so many kids playing & loud music
maan held geets hand tightly...
geet - babaji ab yah jawalmukhi fataga!!!
maan - i am just cutting the cake & leaving...
geet smiles..krish makes them ware a birthday hat..
they cut the cake...maan thanxed every one..& goes to the room
as he goes to the room...pulls the hat & smashes it on the floor
he pulls his tie & throws it away walking up & down..geet stood next to
the door scared ..& wondering..wat next is he going to smash..
he walks to her & she closes her eyes..he hugged her tight....
with all his anger...she was chocking could not breath...hugs her until
his restlessness settles...geet could barely breath..she stood shocked..
maan let go of her.. breathing normal..& pulled his hair back..
maan - pata nahi tumhari baat kyu nahi suntha hoon
geet - ji?
maan - tumne mana kiya tha na mujhe
geet smiled..!!
maan - phir bhi...it was all so ...uff!!
geet smile again..maan - stop laughing at me..
geet takes the cap & keeps it on his head...itne bura nahi lagthe
maan - geeeet!!!!(geet leaves & enjoys the party with krish)

after the party..all the kids leave to school geet & maan
go to drop krish..geet put a brave face untill krish walked into the hostel
then broke into maans shoulder cring...maan could'nt take her tears..it really
hurt him more than he expected it to hurt...geet remained silent on their drive back
it started to pour..on the way...maan carefully drove..on the hilly, slippery roads
when the reached the cottage...geet got wet while walking in...
she went on in the garden to feel the rain...maan got the towel & stood mesmerised
looking at his angel...she looked beautifull...her dress was completly drenched &
sticking on to her..the wet dress was making her look even more desirable..
there was so much emotion, passion, longing...the night..the raindrops were alluring his desire..

he looked away..she streched out her hands & turned around..
she looked happy..

her happiness was his wish..all he wanted ..maan walked closer..sensual flirtatious thoughts
excitement rised as he felt her closer and closer.. he saw the rain
gently gliding through her face..his face and down..soaking their soul..raindrops
were like lyrics of passion on his skin ..the cool breeze blowed her scent into his senses
making it even more difficult to hold back..geets wet sparkling white skin sparked the
pilot light of his eyes ..the touch striked the match that light the fire in him..
he closed the distance between their lips..raindrops kept falling upon lips as he kissed
and drank every raindrop that fell upon her body ..there closeness reminded her of khushi
geet moved back & held and cluchted her stomach in pain for the first time ..&
ran into the room...maan looked at her & understood she was thinking about khushi..
he sat down pulling his hair behind with both his hand...he sat there untill the rain stopped....
he went in saw geet sleeping with tears trails on her face..
that added to his selfhatredness & anger...

precap
maan getting drunk

part 83 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33269270
thanxs for all ur replies & suggestion...glad u liked the update..trying to make this one long
hope u liked the pics too..just tried ..I am not all that compy savy love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
het maan geeting drunk ab kya hoga well i like the whole geet krish and maan conversation luv it muski
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow musky ...........best update
👏 , i knw it sounds weird but i loved wen geet cried for khushi she really needs to express her feelings ........


wow maan geetng drunk ,wow agn i am so excited
[:D/] that disco vala maan is still in my mind nd now in ur update he will be more rocking ,yepiiiiiii...............so dreamy


thanks yaar 🤗

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