FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 34

Loved it...Please post the next one soon!

maan - holds her hand ..yeh kya kar rahi ho geet..tum mera gussa in pe kyo inkal rahi hoo

maan - geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..?
geet - aap uth gaya..(she continued working)
maan - geeeet tum yanha kya kar rahi ho(strin voice)
geet - ji main nashtha ready kar rahi thi..
maan - doctor ne tumhe rest karne ko kaha hain..
geet - nahi I am fine now....


maan - why geet tum mujhe se itna door kyun ja rahi hoo..
jitna mai tumhare kareeb aana chatha hoon..tum uthna hi door ja rahi hoo..
tum pas nahi aathi thi ..samjh gaya tha ki tum sharmathi hoo..
aise door javoo ghi to main kaise sambhal aapne aap ko..

in part 76

maan takes his plate & goes to krishs room
geet was feeding krish..he stands next to her & feeds her..
geet turns in suprise...
geet - aap..? main baad main kaa loonghi..
aap kaa lijiya..
maan - he still continues to feed her...(she takes a bite)
geet - aap ko office ke late ho raha hoga
maan - nahi..main aaj office nahi jaa raha..ghar se kaam kar rahoon hain
geet looked away..she felt spicy..maan quickly passed her water..
she sipped & looked at maan..wondering why is he doing all this
hope jald hi sub thek ho jae. for maneet future track

i dont know whom ia m feeling bad for geet or maan.. awesome update muskaan... keep on goin

awesome update muskaan.. keep on goin

You have become a total sadist Muskan. Why do you want to hurt one or the other of this couple.Make them happy. Please yaar.

Jaya

wats wrng wid geet

mujhe samajh nai aata why her emotions are pent up in her mind
she should really open up

awesome update Muskaan

maan - tum chathe ho to we shall go to drop him...
she snaps her dupatta from his hand & leaves..

part 77

maan did'nt know wat pleased her anymore..nothing seem to make her happy or sad
only thing she tressured the most was krish & he will be leaving next week
geets silence was killing maan...he knew she had to break down or..this distance
will spoil their relationship further...

priya was leaving to london...priya came to geets room..
priya - I am leaving back today
geet looked at maan..& then looked at priya
maan did'nt know how to explain any thing to her..questioning looks!!
geet - di aap ko jane ki zaroort nahi hain...
& she leaves out of the room...priya holds her hand & pulls her back..
priya - nahi geet aaj nahi...
i can't forget you in my life since you presented me the most memorable moments
that I could only dreamt off..thanxs dear..
on ur 4th anniversary night u left maan to me..
i understood the compassion in your eyes..
u gave us so many days togather..but all we needed was couple of hours
kuch lamho ki khamoshi thi...kuch paloo ka gila..
& then we spoke for an hr or so & he spoke only about you in those one hr
unke sabdoo main ek hi naam gunjtha tha..geet geet aur sirf geet
i realized how well you have merged in his life...
kis hadh tak sama gayii ho uske dil main..zindagi main..
jab hame aapni jaan se pyaari koi cheese ko khona ka dar lagtha hai..to hum
use lekar aur bhi possessive hogathe hain...kyun ki hume darr rehatha hain
koi use tehz na phuncha de...koi aur uska utna khaiyal nahi rakhega..
jitna hum rekhsakthe hain..
but we will be at peace if we realize that they are in more safer hands than us..
main us sukun ke saath yanha se jaa rahi hoon..
geet - but di u love maan..(maan looks at geet in pain)
priya - hain bahut pyar kathi hoon..Maan se..
aagle janam main bhi pyar karna chathi hoon...har janam main..karna chathi hoon
lakin priya benkar nahi..geet benkar...maan ki geet benkar..un main samana chahthi hoon
geet looked at her ring..& looked confused
priya - yeh ring maan ne nahi de mujhe...maine tumhari tarf phena le..
jis tarah tumhare ring main..maan likha hain..
aur maan ke ring main geet....maine aapne ring me maan aur geet likhwa liya hain...
priya hugs geet & leaves..
geet looks at maan...he stood speechless..looking at geet..
geet eyes still looked away..maan did'nt want to justify his act or words..
it would only confuse her more..

geet went to krishs room...
she helped him pack his stuff & also collect the notes
for the days he had missed classes..

when she came back..and saw maan sleeping..she changed & lied down on her side
maan - geet (maan turned towards geet)
geet - ji...(she turned the other side..facing her back to him)
maan - tum mujh se kabhi kuch kyun nahi kahthi..
geet - ji..
maan - tum mujhse naraz ho?
geet - main kaise..aap se naraz ho sakthi hoon..
maan turns her towards him...his hand holds her shoulder...other hand pushes her curls
geet looked confused & disturbed with his touch..
maan pulls his hand away from the curls..
maan - please geet...tum mujhe jitna gussa karna hain karloo
jitna bura bhala kehna hain kah loo..
lekhin please mujh se aise door muth javoo..
geet i am really sorry ..please geet mujhe maaf kardo
main tum se door nahi rah saktha...please tum mujhe jo bhi saja dena hai dedo
tum jo bhi kaho ghi main karoonga
please geet...please..aise chup math raho..
geet closes maans mouth with her hand...
main aap pe gussa nahi ho sakthi maan...(she pulls her hand back feeling his breath)
maan - kyun geet..itna paraya kardiya mujhe..
geet - nahi maan...main aap ko aapne se alaag nahi kar sakhthi..(she looks into his eyes restlessly)
maan - phir kyun nahi kuch bolthi mujhe..
geet - kaise kuch kehdo aap ko...
maan - kyun geet (maan holds her from her arms in pain..oozing out of his every word)
geet - aap se jada mujhe takleef hogi..
maan - kyun geet..kyun mujhe se itna pyaar karthi ho..
geet - pata nahi maan...(she cuddles into his arms)
jab se aap ko jana hai...sirf aap se pyaar hi kiya hain..
kabhi aap se, khabhi aap ke ehsaas se, khabhi aap ke pyar se
bhut koshish ki aapne aap ko rokhne ki..
lekhi rokh nahi paayai..
maan - phir mujh se itne door kyun jaa rahi ho..
geets tears roll down from her eyes..(maan could feel her tears touching, wetting his chest)
pata nahi kyun..lakin main aap se door nahi jana chathi...(maan kissed her forehead..)
mujhe apne se door math jane do...please..& she cries...
he knew geet was drifting away because of her insecurity...she is still very hurt deep within..but her love for him..is not letting her express her pain..her love is just so pure & sacred..he knew the
ermerging distance between them will kill her more than it would hurt him...he knew he has
to make her fall in love with him all over again...forgetting..all the bitterness he has
given her again & again..over the years..and he will do any thing for that..he held close..
maan - main tumhe kanhi nahi jane dongha...tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri..samjhi tum..sirf meri..

precap
planning a trip togather...

plz do reply... love muskan

Yay!! First to post a comment. Great going, Muskan. Honestly, I admire how fast you update your FF. I really struggle for time on mine!!!

Originally posted by: premmukti4eva

Yay!! First to post a comment. Great going, Muskan. Honestly, I admire how fast you update your FF. I really struggle for time on mine!!!

But I am enjoying it and I am glad that Maan has managed to break the ice with Geet once again. Ab sab acha hoga na?? ;)

thanxs dear..glad u liked it...maan i working his way out😉

Originally posted by: premmukti4eva

Yay!! First to post a comment. Great going, Muskan. Honestly, I admire how fast you update your FF. I really struggle for time on mine!!!

But I am enjoying it and I am glad that Maan has managed to break the ice with Geet once again. Ab sab acha hoga na?? ;)

thanxs dear..gla u liking it...