FF: Hum Tum for Hamesha (part 6 pg 11)

Hey there galz.....Yeah it is me Shaila....
I am here with my FF that i was supposed to start long ago but due to confusion about the plot,it got delayed and I am really sorry about that...

As some of you have voted earlier in the topic that I had posted for you to choose which story you'd like to read, you might be surprised that actually I mixed all the ideas to make this story...I really wanted to do 2b) from there but 5 was the winner...However I didn't do 5 as I thought there are quite a number of people who are doing that...I thought I should do something more original.

Okay I know that some of you are wondering what the hell I am talking about,so here's the link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1456635

Okay enough of my bak bak,I should just start already.....Hope you enjoy......

Characters

Geet - Mother of Muskaan, Rahul's best buddy,has left Maan 2 years ago for his own good and works as a receptionist in Sanjeevni. She lives in Rahul's house with Rahul's mom,Raima ,Rahul and Muskaan.

Rahul - Geet's best friend,secretly likes her,helped her a lot,works as a doctor in Sanjeevni and is very fond of Muskaan.

Maan - Angry young man who loves Geet and thought that she cheated him about the baby and Dev but later on found out the truth.Hasn't found Geet yet.

Raima Aunty - Rahul's mother,as good as Geet's mother,loves everyone.Basically a good woman.

The rest of the characters are usual...

''Geet,puttar uth jaa!! 8 baj gaye...jaldi kar hospital nahi jana hai?(after 5 minutes)
Arey Geet to kab kharrate legi..Jaldi se uth jaa nahi toh main tere upar thanda pani dal dungi.....
Uthi ki nahi?(after 5 minutes with a pail of cold water)''exclaimed Raima Aunty,trying to wake Geet up from her deep slumber. However Geet doesn't respond.Raima Aunty always gets annoyed by this daily routine of hers.

''Kya hai aunty,bas 5 minute aur....sone do na!!!''mummers Geet in her sleep.
''Dekh Geet,main sach mein dal dungi tujh par...Main teen tak ginungi? Ek,Do,Tee..''Geet springs out of bed and hugs Raima Aunty.''Good Morning,Aunty...princess kahan hai?''asking about her Muskan, her baby.

Raima - Wo bhi uth gayi hai,jaldi se tayar ho ja..tab tak main nashta banati hoon.
Geet - (taking clothes out of her wardrobe) Woh Rahul ka baccha kahan hai? Usko jagaya?
Raima - Geet...bacchu aaj woh tujhse pehle tayar bhi ho gaya hai...
Geet - Hain?Woh tayar bhi ho gaya?(spins around the room like a tornado to get ready and takes a shower quickly)

After 15 minutes, Geet is ready and heads down to the dining hall...
Geet - Darling,tu kab uthi?Mama ko kissi de...(feels saliva on her cheeks)
Muskan - Mama..chow mein kha lo(in her baby language)
Rahul - Arre Muski, tu mama ko kya chow mein de rahi hai...is moti ka peth nahi bharega...mujhe de (carrying Muskan and her noodles on to the couch)
Muskan giggles and feeds Rahul some of her breakfast..Geet gets jealous
Geet - Accha Muski?Rahul chachu kya aa gaya tu toh mama ko bhool hi gayi...jaa main tujhse baat nahi karungi..(trying to show fake anger to the 2 year old)
Muskan - Nahi mama...I love you....
Geet carries her baby and teases Rahul.
Raima - Accha ab masti ban karo aur nashta khatam karo,kam pe nahi jana hai
After their breakfast had finished,Rahul and Geet left for Sanjeevni, where they work.


To be continued later today or tonight...

So people...how is it so far?
Okay? This is my first ever FF so please guide me..
I know this part is kind of boring but I need to start off like this...


Precap -- What has happened in the past 2 years?

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Open to comments and criticism...

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Hope you enjoyed....
With lots of love,
Shaila 🤪

Hey guys,please suggest a nicer title for my ff...was in a hurry so I just wrote this....
Enjoy and pls comment...
Is it that bad?

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

This is WONDERFUL! 😃
I really like how positive all the characters are so far... ⭐️ I wonder, is Geet still in Delhi?
Please update asap and add me to your P.M. List if you have one 😊

Yes she is but Maan hasn't found her yet...you will get to know why in the upcoming parts.....

Thanks...you're the first one to reply to my FF...
I will pm you from now onwards whenever I update,okay?

You don't know how much ur message means to me...I thought no one is interested in my FF...was about to cry then I saw ur reply...really lifted my spirits..⭐️
Thanks again
Bye...

ps:Can you get ur friends to read too?I need loads of feedback....😃

its very nice, n different.. i like reunions.😉.... but i wish rahul was married or somthing.. i don't like the part that he secretly like Geet....so there wouldn't be no heart breaking later...😉 jus my opinion.. pls add me to ur pm list... n pls upload sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn .. i read ur FF earlier but i couldn't reply it back coz i couldn't log in at my work... sorry i was late.. 😔 don't worry.. ur FF is nice..👏. different than the other, not that i don't like others.. i luv everyone's FF... so much talented ppl... i can't even write a sentence like you guys do.. so jealous...😆 keep it up... n pls pm me... wen u update...

Originally posted by: smiliey

its very nice, n different.. i like reunions.😉.... but i wish rahul was married or somthing.. i don't like the part that he secretly like Geet....so there wouldn't be no heart breaking later... jus my opinion.. pls add me to ur pm list... n pls upload sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn

don't worry,the secretly liking part is not really a big thing....it will just deepen their friendship in the future....and i have added you to the pm list already....
thanks for replying 😃

Arre yaar, aise fanfics likhegi, to mera kya hoga? 😆 😛

Seriously, good fanfic. The whole 'saliva on the cheeks' part could just be 'Geet felt Muskaan kissing her cheeks". As for Rahul, I hope he doesn't turn negative later...very sweet first chapter and I loved the emotions!

PM list mein daal, mein notes le rahi hoon. 😛

hi shaila,

i told u i will not be able to come and comment before afternoon but had to do it before that..well!!! u did not leave me a choice did you???? 😉

great start honey...!!!! 👏.... hey, muskan is geet's daughter's name???cool... that's the case in my update too,...!!! and geet works in sanjeevani????? 😛 has she not come across dr. armaan yet????? 😳... lol...jokes...it s really nice honey...!!!

and maan geet away for 2 years??? hmmm... interesting.. cant wait to read how they meet and get back together...!!!!!!

update soon sweety...!!!!

soumya

i want to be added to the pm list.
looking forward to the nxt update.

hi shaila..lovely