FF:You complete me-2!!!P62,pg145+imp msg on pg150 - Page 9

Originally posted by: 123pritha

congratulation for the new thread

hey,

thanks...!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: rinky70

hey soumya loved it

sweety,

thanks...!!!! 😛...

i dont see your comments that often these days... busy haan????

Originally posted by: VJ-LNMDJ

Hmmm... waiting for the farm house 😉!

lovely !

VJ

hi VJ,

sorry!!! i had to change the location.... 😉

Soumya,

nice update as always.. I really liked the way you carried them to resort... At first I thought that you will make them stay at farm house that night..but I liked your gradual proccess dear... now we can see more Xrated moments.. since you have told us the every night Maneet will be togather ..I Love the matured, practical and caring Maan.. yaar how can he control that much.. she was reaqdy to give in....

Originally posted by: sravani899

soumya dear wah

let me tell u that 195 pages yaar last thread and i thought u will allow it till the completing of 200 pages but no

no problem this we will make upto 200 pages what u say dear

congratulations for the new thread dear

and its party time as u opened new thread and i have completed 800 posts so lets party soumya

back to the update dear

wow nice conversation between maneet loved it dear

so he wanted to settle few things right its great idea my maan

so removing part of dupata that covered her bump wow maan so the preggy issue and the baby is no matter to u right soooo adore u maan haila

so maan wants to make geets work easy right so sweet maan

what is this dear he is abt to kiss her and what did u do let him kiss his lady love yaar

"Maan, main aisa insaan ke saath kaam karti hoon, jinke gussa bhi extremes mein hoti hai, aur pyaar bhi".wah kya dialogue hai yaar

geet biting her lips oh no geet dear the biting of ur lips - copyright is reserved for maan i know i am geting x-rated but kya karo i get distracted at these incidents ha ha ha

so geet brave girl that u wanted to be independent ha so good

so u want to afford all ur requirements on ur own i expected this from u dear so nice of u yaar continue my dear geet and thank u soumya as ur the best and thanks for not changing the flavour of geet which i like mosts kuddos soumya

maan respects her self respect good going maan

between these lines are most liked ones

"Thanks maan. I'm glad we cleared that up. I do not need any financial help from you. As long as I have you by my side, I am confident enough to scale any heights".

Geet started laughing. "maan singh khurana cheeze bhoolne laga, yeh kab se?"

"jab se tum meri zindagi mein aaye ho!" ye ley again sarcasm he will never bhi out of his character right

yeh lo har ladki se jealous hona teek nahi geet par kya kare maan par vishwas hai par baki ladkiyon par nahi u r correct geet dont trust any girl espesially me ok ha ha ha

wow so he is solving the problems which she is abt to face right so great maan

oh no emotional atyachaar geet stop it dear as u got new life and a person who loves u from bottom of u heart so cheer up dont cry my poor cry baby

wah beech sadak mein romance such mein maan besharm ho gaya hai

ya geet ne usse besharm kar diya hai lol

yeh kya no kiss oh no

maan imitatin geet "Maan aap bhi Na!" and making geet laugh

and giving back her lines "aise mat dekho, mushkil ho jaata hai". ha ha ha

lines cracked me like parking place for romance

ye lo not leaving any place and any chance for romance yeh to hona hi tha

"tuo, aap chahte hai ki main yeh sab farmhouse mein karu?theek hai chalo phir andar" and pulled her hand and slowly made her stand. Geet looked at him in horror, "now, what was he upto? This man never fails to surprise her".

soumya i know u will never fails to surprise us ha ha

chalo i started accepting the break i mean where u stop the update its nice as it creates suspense and anxiety dear i love it

take ur own time dear

i hope u come up with a blast

dear what is the hata kate nawjawan is doing here i think he is partner to sasha am i right soumya

ur r great and excellent dear in writting ff and loved it

love u alot soumya

sravs

hi sravs,

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thanks honey...!!!!😛 well i thought i could probably wait till 200 but i should be breaking the rules, u know. i already exceeded 150 long time back, so u know it was time to start a new one...!!!

anyways, congratulations to u too.... !!! 👏 now moving to ur comments...!!!!

lets see what u've written and if i can add any more....!!! 😉

yes, though this part was not XXX rated, it had a flavor of everything, from romance, to humor to seriousness...!!!!! and maan had to clear geet's education issues because time is running and dev and naintara could come back any time into her life....

only romance will make things boring and the story is not going to be going any where..!!! 😃... so i had to bring this angle into the picture..!!

i'm glad u loved it and yes geet being independent is the essence of the story. when she has maan telling her constantly to be independent , to be strong and practical , she cannot afford to ignore his words can she??? he's not telling her something that in impossible or difficult to do..!!!

and maan will always be maan... sarcasm aur gussa nahi chodega... well, hold on geet ko bhi nahi chodega..!!!😆

romance ke liye, jagah nahi chodi in logon ne..!!! outhouse ko koi jagah nahi chodi, lawn mein, phir office mein, sadak pe u know during the rain, aur ab car parking area may be.. ya ni farm house also..!!! next update u'll find out hotel suite ko bhi nahi choda.... 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

and about Kapil, lets see what role he has to play... as of now he is positive and maan considers him decent and all that u know... as the story progresses i 'll see how his character can be useful...

thanks honey... love you and ur comments....!!!!! muaz...... muaz......

(i hope u dont mind, i stole ur emoticon...well only for u//.... 😉)

Soumya

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

hey soumaya ...........i loved thi spart hope the new guy kapil is not negative entry ...............
nd the best line was


Geet smiled. "Maan, main aisa insaan ke saath kaam karti hoon, jinke gussa bhi extremes mein hoti hai, aur pyaar bhi".



i loved it thank you y:)

hi anu,

i'm not sure what role kapil has to play as of now...!!! lets see....😉... i'll think of his character as the story progresses....

and thanks for choosing a fav line.... the line u chose is my fav too..... 😛

glad u liked it....

Soumya

Originally posted by: sweetcherry96

first of all. congratulations honeyy............... for ur second thread.....⭐️⭐️

now come to ur update......

it was soooo lovely and nicely written as usual.............👏

please continue soon.......... m waitng eagerly.......😊

( in maan's style... jitna chahoo waqt le lo par kal tak updte kardena..)))😆😆

😆 😆 lo, maine baat maan li... update bhi kar li...!!!!

thanks honey...!!! 😛

😆

Soumya,

you really brought in Kapil's character and I didn't notice it.. I was busy on imagining MANEET.. Is he going to be another DEV??... nice .. with romance only the story will be boring .. drama should also be there.. and when are you planning to launch DEV and NT??? ...thank god.. Dadi knows all the truth so misunderstandings won't be there.. or are you planning to surprise us ???..btw, pls don't bring Kapil and Dev track togather :)..

waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever

Superb.. amazing.. mindblowing.. incredible.. outstanding.. fabulous update sweety ..!!

even though I said all these words ... they are nothing compared to your creativity jaanii ... loooved this update soo much .. haha it was so funny when maan was like geet's tears *water tank) always leaks anywhere 🤣 ... n den geet was like "instead of this huge farmhouse, you found a parking area to romance with me" 🤣 🤣 .... awesome work jaanii ... cant wait for da nxt update!! hope itz soon!

-Mahi ❤️

hi mahi,

thanks for all the synonyms honey....!!!! 😛....... and ur next line flattered me and put me on cloud 9.....!!!!! thanks ...

glad u liked the line..... !!!

is ur name really mahi?????? if it is then u must be having lot of fun, when the back ground score keeps playing for maneet... right???

Soumya