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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
always remain with ....


THE STORY SO FAR:-

Maan told Geet "tumhare mere beech itna fasila kyun?"
Come to me...
tell me why...
because i want to tell you that i really missed you today but i did want to hug you tonight for making you special...because your everything.
Nothing beyond you.

(Maan says to Geet)
Geet you have melted my heart tum meri ho!!

(Geet says to Maan) Sir, but I want to go...

Don't tell that, be with me, I want to live only with you darling forever!

Trust in my eyes.

(Geet says to Maan)how u make me feel ..is beyond control and my heart beats really fast only for you.

When you're near...I lose control!

(Maan says to Geet)
Geet, you know that I will not be able to survive without you but if you become mine I promise to always remain with ....
Edited by anju7777 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

(geet says to maan)

sir but there

(ppl give the story some twist😉........it will gona be the longest romantic scene ever...😆😆😆)
Edited by RIVER - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
(dadi comes ) Maan Sameera has
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
but not intentionally 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
(geet shocked, and says to maan)
who is sameera?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
like a samosa(couldn't it be 'like Sasha')😆
But due to
her greed for
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@JhankaaR000: i thought the story needed some comedy. it was getting tooo intense😆
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left her in
Edited by neezy4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Isn't it too fast...
He met Sameera...
He loved her...
He left her....
All this in a month time, when they actually were college friends...😆😉
All this must be going in Geet's head....😛

Ok....I'm giving the next one.

Geet asked Maan, cutting between his words,

"Why is Sameera
Edited by JhankaaR000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Dadi answers this to puzzled Maaneet-
"Because she repents
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

THE STORY SO FAR:-

Maan told Geet "tumhare mere beech itna fasila kyun?"
Come to me...
tell me why...
because i want to tell you that i really missed you today but i did want to hug you tonight for making you special...because your everything.
Nothing beyond you.

(Maan says to Geet)
Geet you have melted my heart tum meri ho!!

(Geet says to Maan) Sir, but I want to go...

Don't tell that, be with me, I want to live only with you darling forever!

Trust in my eyes.

(Geet says to Maan)how u make me feel ..is beyond control and my heart beats really fast only for you.

When you're near...I lose control!

(Maan says to Geet)
Geet, you know that I will not be able to survive without you but if you become mine I promise to always remain with ....

within your heartbeat till I die and so for now ,I shall hold in my heart you as close as nothing comes between us ever...

(geet says to maan)

sir but there

And there's knock....

(dadi comes )
Maan Sameera has hurted u alot but not intentionally ,Sameera is here

(geet shocked, and says to maan)
who is sameera?

(Maan said)
Not to worry...,she is only my collage friend whom I loved like a samosa but due to her greed for material things i left her in
her own world a month after that, we met in Newyork and ...

Geet asked Maan, cutting between his words,

"Why is Sameera here,if you don't love her????

Dadi answers this to puzzled Maaneet-
"Because she repents that she didn't mean to hurt me, or that
u r closer to me then she was to

Edited by RIVER - 15 years ago

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