Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 99

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: deniac

Vrush, shivani n Nags hv written so much bout ur post, that mere liye kuch likhne keliye bacha hi nahi.... btw was the first one to read ur post.... u had just posted it... but my IF was giving probs...not letting me like or reply anything....

here i am now to compliment u on ur writing skills... i hope the CVs are as creative as u r.....
waise did u visit Mishti's thread on FB.... Bri wrote there that CVs if they rnt creative enuf shud read IF writers like Rush.....
well brilliant story...
am greedy... want more ...more ...more....



Thanks...Gouri..

i shall go there..i did write a comment on page 5
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Vrush ...yeh tune kya kar diya yaar ........mind blowing writing yaar ....u know something i went back in time ....it reminded me of the time when i was pregnant .... 😳 and those lovely moments with my hubby .....just love the fact that Maaneet are together and happy ...they both deserve it .... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG girls...

i am still in heaven..so no replies... as yet... i shall write to all..
for now...thank you thank you thank you...

chopra...i know.i am crazy..will work on the link in the next..one..you will see how going forward will link the past......
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww what a beautiful, and of course super hot update lol
ok i have to admit... i am like one of ur biggest fans.. as in lovvvve what u write here, and in another thread that i cant quite remember the name of.. but basically am not sure if i've ever commented yet and let u know that i'm stupidly a silent reader! I normally catch all ur updates via my phone and its just such a frustrating task to try n comment on ur post through my fone so i normally dont do it.. but today i read this on my comp and was just bursting to comment..! this is not only about ur current udpate, but about alll the pieces of writing in this thread. MY GOD u are effin brilliant! i love ur writing style, all the ideas and everything ur updates.. all of them have something different about them.. they can be fun, emotional, touching, super romantic, super hot, super cheeky and just sooo enjoyable and an incredible read Every time! I love like every scenario u'v created, cos u depict everything really wonderfully. I cant actually say theres been a single part that u'v written and I've not liked it.. ufff how do i express to u how awesome i find ur work??? I fall in love with maneet, maan, geet sooo much more in ur writing. It's always a treat to read and man, i just wish u continue to do so.. and simply because i love to read ur work which is so damn lovable, i genuinely wish u like stay happy forever with tons of romance n things to smile about in ur life. i dont mean to sound silly, its just that i love reading ur stuff! it always puts me in some sorta happy mood lol lovvvvvvvve imagining maneet enact these scenes in my mind.. ur a great writer!! keep it up =D
lotttttttts of love,
Saz xxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG ur writing is just wow, caught up with the last few updates on the itouch, but just had to come and comment!!! ur writing is just wow👏, so different and the emotions u capture just wow, waiting for more, if u have a PM list, do PM me!!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

Part 1 Circle in the sand

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Well first off di....as usual u did a phenomenal job with both of the character....amazing symbolism as always! It is amazing to read something and seeing the double meaning to it....it makes the writing more beautiful.....and just wonderful to read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Loved how u wrote the scene on how both of them would react......it is real.....it feels like i am seeing a continuation of the show....it is not easy to write scenes on a couple unless u understand them well enough to put their reactions...actions....on paper.....writing.....and di......u just know what u r doing!! The main reason why i love reading ur scene is because they are real.....and i have fallen in love with maaneet that if i read anything different out of character i don't like it.....because the cv's have sketched their characters so brilliantly.....u may have not written or created their characters, but vrush di.......u understand them soooooooooooo beautifully!!! U understand maan more than he understand himself...as well as Geet!!!! I really really hope u have posted this on FB.....i loved how it was written....and i would to see it on screen.....would be lovely to see my di's work on screen.....and hell i would be damn proud!!!! I am already proud of u di....not because the cv's have already used ur scenes.....but because u r an amazing writer.....u r beautiful and bold di!!! Simply amazing!!!

thanks for the pm....and the beautiful outstanding scenes.....ok this time i made sure i tried not to repeat much, think i have done well!!! Well i know u won't take the tukde.....but at least accept this right?? 😉

Luv ya di ❤️🤗



-Shivani



i deleted some parts of your quote..for..i am going to write..a small reply...and it would take up yet another page..tum aur mein baatein kar sakte hein without taking up space i am sure...

ah thank you for writing a long reply..i love reading your replies...and isiliye kaha tha..that i dont want scraps of replies i want the whole nine yards..

thanks girl..
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a beautiful and serene update. Most people think that making love during the later phase of the pregnancy is cumbersome...but that is such a misconception. You have written it beautifully, the involvement of the lovers, and the baby, who form a full family.....very sweet. Like JES said, muje bhi apne din yaad aagey......pregnancy is beautiful time in one's life, provided you have the love your life with you every step of the way!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Vru .... loved it to the core .... it was such an awesome one which had all the ingredients - love ...passion... family bonding and so on.... every time I read the updates that you write .... I more fall in love with your writing .... the love making scene was awesome .... you made me remember my days too .... as usual u were awesome vru ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww the last scene was too cute, i can just imagine how protective maan will be of the baby too and the rest of the update was very passionate and sensual. I think u have def proved a point there.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heaven is a Place on Earth – Part 2

Maan had been ogling his wife all evening. He could not take his eyes off her, he had wanted to make love to the minute he had seen her in the Saree, black with white sequins that winked at him every time she walked or moved, his body thrumming in reaction as if she had slithered her body against his. He had been fantasizing ever since he had put that dangling ear ring and he had even told her his intention in no uncertain terms. They had shared glances all evening which he had ensured would remind her of his words. He knew they had mastered the art of talking with eyes to a fine level. He smiled his lopsided one in self derision at the devilry within him. But Geet brought out the best and the worst in him.

He remembered that day one year back when he had pulled her back from leaving him in a huff, proclaiming that she was going to live on her own and that he did not need to marry her in pity.

He again smiled at his devilish attitude at assuming his right where she was concerned. He had always done that but that day he remembered clearly. Oh he was right, they were nowhere near finished and he was not letting her go now that he had made her agree to marry him. He knew it had been a split second decision but he knew the answer where Geet was concerned in his gut. He knew he will never let her go more than few feet away from him.

She was pregnant with someone else's child but he was he had been shocked not that she had given herself to anyone other than him but that she might have loved someone enough to do that. Hearing her story had been like a knife twisting inside him inch by slow inch. He now knew what black rage meant. He was going to find the guy and kill him, he had silently vowed to himself. He was going to make sure that he tortured him the way Geet had been tortured by her own brother for no fault of hers. He had felt his protective instinct come to a level where he could have smashed anything that dared lift a finger at Geet, let alone touch her. And his marriage proposal had been just that.

He had connected the dot as she had relayed the story to him, the land, the Amritsar visit everything. He had understood her even better now. He had understood her hesitation, her instinct to run. He knew he will have to assure her with words and even though he was not into saying too much he knew he will have to tell Geet more often than not how much he loved her.

He had done just that. He had pulled her close and told her "Geet, tum mujhe chor ke jaane ki sochna bhi mat, baat to bahut door ki hai, mein tumhare saath poori zindagi bitana chahta hoon."

Geet had squirmed trying to exert her pride even though she had not tried to move away. Her eyes had always told her the truth and then they had told her, "Hold me" and he had done just that. He had taken her in his arms and held her tight and said, "mein tumse pyar karta hoon Geet, bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhare har Ansh se pyaar karoonga. Mein darr gaya tha Geet, ek second ke liye, kahin tum ehsaan maan kar to mujhse shaadi nahi kar rahi ho? mein ye bardaasht nahi kar sakoonga." And had squeezed her in his arms letting her know what it meant to have her in his arms. He had let know without words how much he needed her. Geet had then cried and he had melted even more, he had never been able to see her tears. He had then told her they were getting married and he had then moved heaven and earth to get it organized the next day. He also ensured that this rushed wedding would not be anything like her last, he was going to do it in court, in front of the magistrate, make it legal so that she had that assurance of him being hers, legally as well as body and soul.

They had come to the office after the wedding and had found it all decorated and congratulations waiting for them from the staff. He had been surprised and had asked Adi what was going on when Adi had informed that Daadi had told them about the wedding.

He had smiled at his Daadi's deviousness. But yes he was too happy to be mad at anyone that day. He had started a new life with Geet that day and today was another beginning for them.

He had changed into shorts after the party and had gone to the adjacent room as Geet had gone to change her clothes in the dressing room to check on their son Ansh, who was sleeping peacefully. He had not been able to resist touching his index finger against his cheek and Ansh had woken up whimpering. He had then lifted him out of the crib and held him close and rocked him to see if he will fall asleep but Ansh had other ideas, he had fisted his hair as he had held him crook of his neck and cooed to him and was not letting go, so he had decided to take him to their bed. It seems their son was determined to share the parents' bed yet again. He had found many a night one of them picking him out of the crib and keeping him in middle to sleep making a protective circle around him. Ansh, he thought, Geet had insisted on that name as he had told that to her on the day he had proposed. Ansh was part of Geet that he was going to love as a whole; they were his complete whole, the mother and the son.

He had drifted into a slumber waiting for his wife to change with his arms around Ansh and only woken up as he had felt a blanket come on him. He knew it was Geet as he could inhale her perfume combined with her unique fragrance that told him she was around even with eyes closed. He had put out his hand to stop her from going to the other side based on the jangle of her bangles and had pulled her so that she toppled onto him.

"Kahan jaa rahi thi?" he asked not sounding sleepy at all. Geet looked at him as he had turned before she had landed on him and had wound his arm around her waist as she was awkwardly sprawled on him.

"Kahin nahi jaa rahi thi, uss taraf bas, sone kyon ki aap so rahe the." She had gently taken Ansh from within his circle and settled him in his crib without Maan realizing or waking and had decided to let him sleep and had spread the blanket on him thinking they had all their life to make love when he had turned the tables on her and pulled her.

"Hmm," he said nuzzling her and then pulling her over him and tumbling her so that she was on her back and him leaning over her. "Aise thori na sone doonga. Kuch dogee nahi mujhe apni saal girah pe?" He teased her mercilessly. Geet looked at him wondering what would she do, she had not bought him anything, and she had been wondering but had not found anything worth giving.

Geet then answered cheekily, "aapko kis cheez ki kami hai, sab kuch to hai, jo ab mujhse maang rahe hain?" trying to divert him by trailing a finger on his jaw.

Maan caught her finger in his mouth as she trailed it on his lips and alleged, "Par mujhe jo chahiye sirf tum de sakti ho na," holding her wrist and kissing her finger one at a time with every word he spoke.

Geet blushed and replied, "aapko kya chahiye? Babaji koi kahe inse ki itna jyaada lalchi hona achcha nahi hai." teasing him right back.

Maan laughed and leaned even closer a mere millimeter from her lips and before he kissed her, he demanded, "mujhe ek beti chahiye." And swooped down to capture her mouth not waiting for her answer.

He then slowly made love to her reaching new heights, new beginnings, their forced restraint now thing of the past and they pleasured each other with kisses and touches that made them shiver and writhe in passion and abandonment that they had kept in check for a long time.

It was like making love for the first time, relearning each other and letting their passion have a free reign to explore and experiment the way they had not before. Maan and Geet avowed their love as they reached their peaks and slowly came back to earth after tasting the piece of heaven that was their, only theirs.

Maan knew he had found his heaven here on earth, right here next to him.

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