Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 97

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

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will talk more of this when i come back from the gym!!

My dear Vrush ....i dunno what to say ...the update was wonderful ..and ur predictions are real good as well....everytime i read something you've written i'm left craving for more and cant get those scenes and lines outta my head ...all i can say is keep writing more ....u dont know how eagerly i wait for ur posts .....especially on weekends..... 😊

Read all the scenes in one sitting and gosh they were hot! How do you write such stuff, would love to have a peek in that brain of yours, need to go and drown myself in a tub of ice to cool Down.

Now that's what I call perfect! It brought me tears....it sounded so real. My heart went out to Geet. Wonderful!

@nargis- yaar what a script!!! Yea yea sure...i would not mind learning tai chi!!! i would most likely faint as soon as i enter his lessons!! 😆.
How funny is it that u guys know me so well??? OMG....funny part was i was getting ready to go to the gym too when i read ur "script" 🤣....i was like woah......be a friend like pinky...but instead eating all day in the office...i would run around in the office like the wind....possibly shift the winds in such a way where both and Maan and geet would not be able to stay away from each other! 😳!! Awesome...so when are u three going to make this show??? Tell me now....so i can be ready to get into my character!! 😉 Oh yea make sure that i can kick Tasha and Sasha's as* as well please....i soooo want to for what injustice they put on my sister like friend geet 😆!

Ok so.....now that i am ok.....thoughts are not running around in my head....i decided to come and give my lambi si comment to my darling....cute oh so awesome di!

Part 1 Circle in the sand

😳 i love hearing what is going in Maan's head!!! All the time in the show i have guess what is maan thinking right now?? I have to play the guessing game by looking at his expressions....by looking at the way he stands....thank god.....more like thank vrush di i don't have to dig too much into Maan's head.....because di does all the digging for us all 😛....the whole time from the beginning of the episode till the end.....we only saw Geet's POV......her uneasiness for Maan....her concern.....how angry and scared she was that he had not done anything to fix his wounds....and so she had barged in without even thinking what others would think in that meeting room....

oh my....if this was the old maan...who did not know of his feelings for Geet.....this barging in thing would have been so negative!! I don't even want to think of what he would have said to geet!!

Anywayz back to the scene....😆 i loved how u described that to him everyone else would be annoying....but when Geet talked.....the whole world didn't matter......he enjoyed her bak bak....and he was soooo patient! 😳 I love it di.....it is like watching the whole episode again except this time we are watching it through Maan's eyes....thoughts 😳

Well we already knew what was running through Geet's head.....but i loved how u have written that the world did not matter to geet when she was with maan.....because miss HP express didn't seem to notice that there were a whole bunch of workers sitting in the meeting.....it was as if there was only her and Maan in the world.....👏

Enjoyed how u have described how geet felt when she saw Maan getting hit by that bullet....how it was worse then being held under that sword 😭.....amazed at how u described that her world would be destroyed if anything would've happened to maan....her maan.....at that moment her eyes only searched for maan......and so after finding out that Maan had gone to the office....without caring of she looked....she ran to the office!!!! 👏

Brilliant with how u noticed that shy look geet had the moment everyone left the meeting room....and then even amazing was that maan noticed her change!!! Time to take advantage huh maan!!??😉

Amazing how u have written down the naughty side of Maan....how he enjoyed Geet being comfortable with him.....and how he teased her with that killer smile assuring her that he was fine...and if she didn't believe he would show her 😳 ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
such a naughty side of him!!! Now i feel like rewatching that episode!! ⭐️
For us just watching maan smile in that fashion we knew he was being naughty...but it is amazing to see that in writing....because then the readers can use their imaginations....and di u know me very well....my imagination is wild....and these days they have sky rocketed because of ur scenes!! 😆
I am going to have to put my imaginations on lock down as soon as possible...or else in lectures i will be drooling and imagining maaneet....instead of taking notes😉
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....no no....seductive maan needs to go in a lock up.....he needs to be arrested for driving all of us innocent seedhi sadhi ladkiyan's pagal!!!!😆

Di....u know u really really really really are evil......the main reason why i could not write after this scene was the "Maan Geet....striping.....table"!!!! Ok u get the point right??? I can't even right the thing in full sentences 😆
Wow wow....omg omg....killer.....and magical at the same time as well as a torture scene......the part where Geet touches maan....i trembled........i was like oh man.....how hotttttt can a man get??? Forget looks.....Maan is such a fricken sweeetheart....him just being goodlooking is a package deal 😉
Ahhhh thank god i wasn't the only who noticed that geet had slowly looked down in the show and quickly had looked up!!! That reminded me of the scene when Maan and geet discovered that they both were in the same bedroom that night....and both ran to get their respective cover ups.....maan tryin to fix his shirt....geet quickly putting her duppatta on.....and then slowly peaking at Maan 😍
I went back and rewinded the scene a gazillion times....to see if i wasn't seeing things....but not only was maan naughty....Geet too is equally guilty!! We sooooo caught her.....😆not that i blame her ⭐️
Loved how Maan says "wahan nahin yaha" 😆 in ur scene i can hear him say that all passionately in my ears......damn di.....ur scenes are toooo real!!!! I can see everything in front of my eyes....even the kissing.....the table waah waah......kya writing hai aapki!!!!! 😳😳😳

Now to the kiss......need I say anything about it???? 😛 Just out of this world.....just ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wonderful......and just beautiful!

Loved how maan finally without saying "I L U" easily said that he wanted geet to be a real fiance!
How he had the right to kiss her!! 😳 In the starting Geet came to his meeting room...and yelled at him just like a wife.....because she thought she had to right to.....and now this time Maan kissed geet because he had the right to! Lovely di!!!! I am impressed every minute lolz second!!

then the big bang......geet was right....before this relationship went any further....it was the time to tell maan the truth......the minute geet broke the news.....i loved how u described maan undergoing the turmoil......how he jumped to Geet crossing the line....to immediately the smart Maan who knew that geet can't do anything wrong! 👏 Just like the show....of course because i feel u are a cv of the show.....knew what Maan's character is like......intelligence.....and i loved how he kept quiet to listen to geet!!! 😳



It was beautiful di.....it was heart wrenching the last bit......Geet's life was getting back on track....she again started to dream..she felt that she had gained everything "Maan" he was her world....and the moment she revealed the truth....she felt that she lost everything!!! 🤢

But of course....our intelligent munda....immediately asks geet to marry him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then of course u ended the part with WHY?? THEN SHIVANI ANGRILY BROKE HER GLASS WINDOW!! 😡 No i didn't....but felt like to! 😆

Part 2 Circle In the Sand

😭 ego clashing??? Geet did we get hit on the head or something??? Did we forget that maan asked u to be his real fiance before u revealed the truth???? 🤢

Maan....did we forget what Geet's eyes spoke??? her running in the office like a mad woman worried about u??? Ahhhhhhhh i love these to the core.....but i hate it when they say the wrong things to each other....they love each other sooooooo much....geet thinking whether he "really loves her" when the man just asked her to be his real fiance..??? Maan thinkin that all of the things he did for her....she is thankful for and because of that she will marry him????😡 😆

Sometimes i feel like taping both of their mouths....tying them and making them sit facing each other....while i tell them "Maan...geet loves u dearly.....unconditionally....do u not see how she wanted to leave ur life so that u would find someone better than her??? Do u not see how much this woman loves u??? Gratitude??? ahahahahaha acha chutgulla mara tumnay! 🤢

then to geet "u ding dong....i love u....i love u a lot......but so does this man....of course my love for u and his love for u is different.....one thing i have to tell u yaar.....THE MAN REMEMBERED WHAT COLOR DRESS U WORE IN THE OFFICE THE FIRST TIME U MET (IN THE OFFICE)!!!! Why would he care to remember that??? Need i say more??? 😆😆😆

But tooo bad that i can't tie them up....

of course both throwing the same question at each other!! 😆

I also love how u described Geet telling the rest of story.....when she was talking about her life....what had happened i saw the lovely innocent geet....who fought with her parents innocently...not wanting to leave them......that innocent girl who enjoyed seeing dreams...enjoyed whatever was in her life....and then BOOM all crashing down the minute she is taking her pheras.....surrendering herself!

I loved how Maan knew that geet did not love that man.....how can she??? The marriage was forced!!!!😭

I was proud of Maan.....to think of geet as a strong woman....i loved how he felt that geet had not only stood up for herself....but many other young women like her who were going through the same as she did! 👏

First ha.......phir then na!!! ARARARARARARAAAA DI.....(in guju) u r EVIL!!!!!! 😆 Ok so ur torturing us!!! I like it!!! 🤣
A fight??? hahaha ok nothing knew between the two! Great......Geet pissed....and now Maan has toooo confess di!!!! he has to......to show her that he loves her......she confessed in another way.....but i think they need to just hear ILU.....then they will get calm......because all of the other ways they have expressed their love wasn't love right?? Of course.....because they still need to hear those three words!!!! Great.....wonderfull awesome.....nice way to leave us during the weekend di....beautiful!! 😆

Of course.....maan has to grab Geet's wrist.....a good thing though......now what will happen???? Di u r driving us all nuts!!!! Not cool at all......he is not finished we see that.....but when will u finish posting the next part??? 🤣 I am going crazy with laughter.....wow so desperate aren't we???

Well first off di....as usual u did a phenomenal job with both of the character....amazing symbolism as always! It is amazing to read something and seeing the double meaning to it....it makes the writing more beautiful.....and just wonderful to read! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Loved how u wrote the scene on how both of them would react......it is real.....it feels like i am seeing a continuation of the show....it is not easy to write scenes on a couple unless u understand them well enough to put their reactions...actions....on paper.....writing.....and di......u just know what u r doing!! The main reason why i love reading ur scene is because they are real.....and i have fallen in love with maaneet that if i read anything different out of character i don't like it.....because the cv's have sketched their characters so brilliantly.....u may have not written or created their characters, but vrush di.......u understand them soooooooooooo beautifully!!! U understand maan more than he understand himself...as well as Geet!!!! I really really hope u have posted this on FB.....i loved how it was written....and i would to see it on screen.....would be lovely to see my di's work on screen.....and hell i would be damn proud!!!! I am already proud of u di....not because the cv's have already used ur scenes.....but because u r an amazing writer.....u r beautiful and bold di!!! Simply amazing!!!

thanks for the pm....and the beautiful outstanding scenes.....ok this time i made sure i tried not to repeat much, think i have done well!!! Well i know u won't take the tukde.....but at least accept this right?? 😉

Luv ya di ❤️🤗



-Shivani

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Awesome Nags and Shivani, u gals are giving soo many ideas for Vroom to choose from..

But would she treat us like the CVs do and give us a googly 😉😆😆..

@Nags- I thot sat was family time.. Itna lamba posts?? U r only thinking of Maaneet this weekend eh 😆

Rev...waaki aaj meine kuch ziyaada MANEET ke bare mein socha!!!😆

WOW..now i am greedy..I want more..

👏👏👏awesome as always👏mindblowing lovely update👏realy want to see MAANEET married after truth came out😊