Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 92

di u r evil....that is all have to say for now! 😆

i need to gather some thoughts....i need air.....and then i will come back and write more 😉

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

LOVEit ...LOVE it....LOVE it!!!!!! OMG....this is great...loved how you used bits of the new promo too. I Hope that on Monday we such a ROCKING episode....CVs.....come and read this scene....we want it go like this!!!!

Thanks babes...

i had promised a scene on strip tease..then saw the promo..and added that..bit..

now i have the party scene..it is like after they get married, the staff is welcoming them.. and that is the party... in my scene..so the photo intergration is the continuation...what say? over the weekend!!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

LOVEit ...LOVE it....LOVE it!!!!!! OMG....this is great...loved how you used bits of the new promo too. I Hope that on Monday we such a ROCKING episode....CVs.....come and read this scene....we want it go like this!!!!

Few people thinks that Maan will let on the people of the office that the Baby is his.....is that where you are heading??

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Thanks babes...

i had promised a scene on strip tease..then saw the promo..and added that..bit..

now i have the party scene..it is like after they get married, the staff is welcoming them.. and that is the party... in my scene..so the photo intergration is the continuation...what say? over the weekend!!

Neki aur pooch pooch...I a already holding my breath for it....so don't make me wait too long....otherwise I may turn BLUE!!!😆

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

di u r evil....that is all have to say for now! 😆

i need to gather some thoughts....i need air.....and then i will come back and write more 😉

Eh hahahahahaha... that is my evil laugh for you...

and you had better write a long reply..mein ye..tukde..nahi..accept karoongi...

fabulously written.....

Lovet lovet lovet wating for ur update and thanks for pm

awesome continuation of the striptease! but please finish it or else I will die from curiousity! please please please continue soon!!!👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: yasu09

fabulously written.....

waiting for next part eagerly.....

if the pre-marriage scenes are this heated....

i'll make sure i have a bottle of cold water beside me....

for when i read ur version of after marriage scenes...lol

Yas...You should keep a HUGE bag of ICE...one bottle of water will not nearly be enough!!!😆☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Nice. You picked on the scene really well. But honestly, I feel the ending was a bit rushed. Maybe it was getting too long? I would have loved to read how they both read each others expressions in silence...how they wondered what the other was thinking...how they wondered what would happen now that the truth was out. For the first time I felt you enhanced on the acts than the emotions....just a thought..please don't throw jootis at me.

If you have a non-UA version of this, send it along....