Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 93

Originally posted by: yasu09

fabulously written.....

waiting for next part eagerly.....

if the pre-marriage scenes are this heated....

i'll make sure i have a bottle of cold water beside me....

for when i read ur version of after marriage scenes...lol

ah yasu...

will write..of course..but you know...i curb myself..here...i have...written..more passionate scenes before..but..after the thing about...content...i try and only take it up to the kiss...

may be...i shall try a little more..

AWESOME👏👏👏OMG I LOVED IT A LOT👏👏and now waitibg for MAANEET wedding😉vrushali u r A JANU🤗.

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Yas...You should keep a HUGE bag of ICE...one bottle of water will not nearly be enough!!!😆☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

LMAO...

Originally posted by: yasu09

LMAO...

ok so that's a large ice pack....10 1litre bottle of waters.... and a fan....

i think that should be enough to keep me from getting over excited...or fainting...😆

One large ICE CHEST (cooler) and a large WINDOW fan should suffice!! LOL!!!😆😆

Originally posted by: rushtrip

ah yasu...

will write..of course..but you know...i curb myself..here...i have...written..more passionate scenes before..but..after the thing about...content...i try and only take it up to the kiss...

may be...i shall try a little more..

hun all your readers here are loving ur updates regardless of how x-rated it is...😆 well considering how besharam us maaneetianz are.....

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Nice. You picked on the scene really well. But honestly, I feel the ending was a bit rushed. Maybe it was getting too long? I would have loved to read how they both read each others expressions in silence...how they wondered what the other was thinking...how they wondered what would happen now that the truth was out. For the first time I felt you enhanced on the acts than the emotions....just a thought..please don't throw jootis at me.

If you have a non-UA version of this, send it along....

no non UA written..i am sure..you can make out..i have..diverted after the promo... i saw..and integrated that into the scene..

i will write the answer to why..over the weekend..to...explore the emotion..i understand..if it felt a bit rushed..it think this one is more than 2k words..

OMG!!!

Will you be adding symbolism too? It adds to the depth of the scenes and emotions...Aaah weekends would have killed me..if it wasn't for your updates buddy.

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Bring it on!

sure thing..sunday will be my fun day...

You give me a mini heart attack there..