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@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

i hope i havnt missed neone....in a big hurry .....i dn wanna miss geet ...

thankx a lot ppl for ur warm support ...

here goes the next part of geet ....

part 2

Half an hour passed…..maan opened his door a little ….peeped outside….where is she….?kahin sachmuch bahar to nahi chali gayi…?maan silently came out …its almost dark downstairs…coming close to the stairs…he looked down for her.

A smile of fulfillment spreads over his worried face…..seeing her curling herself in a ball in d sofa….he remembered…she feels cold in d ac….the house is centrally cooled…

Taking his kambal he neared her to the sofa….covered her fully by it he sat next to her…..seeing her sleeping peacefully in d sofa…

Arre aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Main paani ke upar tarne lagoon...

Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de
Behne de ghanghor ghata behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai behne de nadiyaa ki tarah

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki jeena hai toh pyaar mein...
Deh kahi bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein,

Maan reached to touch her locks kissing her forehead…her innocent face…dawn's soft creamy rays started reaching her skin…like his touch ……unaware of his should's and shouldn't' s………….unaware of the egoistic world of his……maan singh khurana coming out of his shell…..surrendering himself to her……only to her …….for the first time……he couldn't control himself more….his lips curved in smile of content ….seeing her sleeping peacefully grabbing the kamval….

Beh jaa beh jaa, hai saagar ka kehna,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai nadiyaa ko behna

Beh jaa beh jaa, hai saagar ka kehna,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai nadiyaa ko behna,

Maan u r changed…..he swallowed the realization….geet …..miss hoshiyarpur express…..the only girl he felt concerned for ….after his dadima…sleeping in front him ….safe and sound…..he didn't dare to ask himself….why he himself feeling so content seeing her….he didn't dare to get the answer…..he just wanted avoid the dilemma as of now…though he knew the time is coming very fast …..letting loose all the feelings….he just cant control more….he just don't want to control…..like he didn't want to control when he caught her dupatta this night ….. he just didn't want to let her go …let the moment go …..away from him……he may lie to everyone….even to geet ….that he want's her to stay away from him……but how far ..? he cant lie to himself……

Love is a feelings…that grows double triple….even 100 fold…if u try to suppress its growth …the most powerful force created by god …Mr Maan Singh Khurana…..wise….egoistic…arrogant woman-hater cant go beyond destiny …..his destiny is this girl…GEET..

Maan took a deep breath……he crawled to her face…as if going to kiss her forehead…he can feel d scent of her hairs…its addicting ..he closed his eyes….he bent downward…..to touch her forehead….admit it …………………..

Patte se tapakti boond ki aawaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapk aur gum ho jaa,

beh gaya beh gaya.
Jo rah gaya rah gaya.

beh gaya beh gaya.
Jo rah gaya rah gaya

Behne de mujhe behne de..

behne de mujhe behne de….

. Behne de mujhe behne de..

behne de mujhe behne de…..

behne de ghan ghor ghata….behne de pani ki tarah

sagar me ja girna hai…..behne de nadiyan ki tarah………….

As he was about to reach her skin…she moved a little in the sleep….that was enough to awake maan in his senses…..he stood up with a jerk..

Gasped for breath…..started moving backwards……keeping his gaze fixed on her face…he clenched his fist ….shut his eyes in despair….

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya,
Tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya,
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon,
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar doon.

Moist eyes…….gasping for breath…as if he is sinking in d sea of love…trying hard to keep himself alive……stood there rooted resting his back in d table..he muttered….

Geet…………..!!!

Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aate hai,
Dil ke chullu mein bechare,
Doobkiya gote khaate hai,

Beh jaa, beh jaa, Chal tod kinaare ko,
Beh jaa, beh jaa, dhar le majdhaare ko,

Chingaari uda ke raakh se, ek boond gira ke aankh se,
Chalne ka ishara kar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya bhar gaya...

He turned his back to her ……fled towards the kitchen….

From what u r trying to fly away maan…..? u idiot ….nobody could ever do that….nobody could escape d grasp of love….u cant escape from love….

Writer chuckles…imagining the scene……

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@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

guys...i gotto go..i will be late for geet ....c u in 1 hour.......will be expecting replies....byee n take care

ciao

love

maanmeet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

This is really good! Please continue!

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Nadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

wow excellent dear loved it

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Aleena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

great ff.

plz add pm in pm list

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

just loved ur update yaar... jaldi se update karo.. cant w8.. to read.. u r just awesome yaar..an awesome writer.. 👏 👏

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Rituparnaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

That was simply brilliant...........oh its such a good piece of expression!!!!!!!

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Pickachu

@pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Veryyyyyyyyy beautifulllllllllllllll part.Waiting for next part.
Thanxxx for the pm.

fatima

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@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

thank u readers........

i really didnt expct such a warm response...

u guys r too good.....

so i m being good to

i will be updating the rest now....

love u guys ...love u loads....

maanmeet

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@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

part 3

Maan splashed cold water in his face'.as if feeling the cold touch of the truth '..but not ready yet ..he shook his head'..water dripping from his shiny hairs'sun is touching his face gently with his rays''it 5 at morning '.

Maan decided to think about some work'decided for having a cup of coffee for himself.

After sometime sipping it he decided to go out '.not wanting to face her as she will be waking up soon'.sipping the last sip of d coffee he smiled'.even this cup of coffee has a memory with her '..what not '.he smiled at himself'.

Stood up 'brushing the hair with his fingers'he started heeding to the door'.not daring to look at the sofa'.reaching the door he opened it silently trying not to make any noise'..that can awake her '.before closing the door behind him he could nt stop himself too look inside again'.a glimpse of her '

He came out '..facing sun's bold rays'that slowly 'very slowly becoming prominent on his face'.

He slipped in the car '.ignited the car '.and let his hand drive it carelessly '.after sometime finding himself infront of the office ..

His trance broke at the salutes of the securities'..

Accha hi hai'..kamse kam kuch kaam kiya jaye..kal to kuch kaam hua hi nehi'.he stepped inside'.its 5.30 am in the morning ''the securities were dead seeing him there at that time'but he is maan singh khurana'the king can do nething he wants'

He started finding the files yesterday he was looking for'..stepped into geet's room'.

Her blank chair'..her pain stand'.he felt her presence in the room'looked nervously around him'

Confident maan!!'.u r not trespassing her bedroom'he muttered himself..huh'!!...apne office me aakar apne hi secretary se darta hai'shame on u '..!!

As time passed by 'he came engrossed in the files'.he started working on them'

On the other side geet woke up with a dream''maan sir drawing her close by holding her dupatta'.she woke up with a jolt'..hyperventilating '..!

Huffff'sapna wich vi dusht danav'oye geet tenu ki hoya '.oda asar tere dimag te kuj jyada hi chad gaya'.geet reassured herself'realizing where she is she was about to stand up..

But seeing the rapper on her 'she became astonished'sir was fighting for this na'.so how come its on me...?she stood up..

Aahh'..meri kamar '.!!she moaned holding her waist 'because of the short space in the sofa'her back started aching 'and also because of the effect of pregnancy'.as soon she remembered about the last night '.she started abusing his boss drving her out of d cozy room'all nervousness gone in new enthusiasm of abusing maan'..khotee..nalayak'.bandar kahika'..stopped suddenly at the fear of his'..kahi sun to nahi lega na'.haye babaji meri raksha karna'..

Little did she know'Baheguru has sent maan to her only to rescue her from all odds of this world'

She creeped upstairs'.in d search of dusht danaav'.(read 'her' dusht danaav)

Seeing his blank bed'.she sighed a breath of relief'.she came downstairs..in search of him'.searched every nooks n corners of the house'.no sign of his'

Lagda hai 'bhaag gaye'..mereton pareshan ho kar 'she giggled in fun'.but dreadful at thought next moment '.if he goes to dadi ma'.and tells her everything how she locked him out 'ohh babaji'..meher karo''menu ki pata si'.woh dusht savitry mam da pota haiga'.she really didn't want loose this job '

Jo hoga dikha jayega..pehla menu jordi bhukh lagi hai'.she heeded to the kitchen'.in search of some food'

Seeing everything available there..she excitedly started making aloo parantha..forgetting everything about all her probs around'

Back in the office'.its 9.30am'.maan still working '..he checked the clock and all around'.nobody appeared till now''what to do with this office'..as he last day announced that he is again going for the camp'.every body is relaxed,'..

In utter disgust ..he stood up'.decided to leave the office grabbing the files'.useless people'.muttering under breath.

(****aye haye'maan ji'.ki gaal hai..!! '.sabto useful toh toddi GEET hai na'..!! aur sareya da tenu ki karna..useful ho ya useless'!!geet de aanto pehla yehi useless log todda office samhalta si'.now a days'tenu GEET de fever chada hai ..tan te tu office da chakkar kat reya hai''*****)

His car trailed in d high way before sasha can reach him by her catwalk'.miaao'she didn't notice maan had come to the office today'.

Maan back there on his way 'stopped in front of a mall'..as he hadn't found any of his cloths and belonging last night '.he decided to buy some necessary things '

(chakdey Mundeya'!!! So tuci geet de kol wapas jaan lagge'!!tuci aaye to edda si'kade odi shakal nai dekhoge'.hun tuci wapas jaandi soch re ho'..maan u r surprising the writer more n more'')

Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago

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