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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
i read your both updates they are very beautifully written.
i love when Maan feel jealous of Rohan. kab yeh suna ga dil kai baat ...
cute part of pani puri .

you are great

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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy...
awesome update...
awww maan is jealous...
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 13
The day next was simple and relaxing...at night when geet was cooking at kitchen ..suddenly the power was gone...due to some reason inverter also not working...

Geet hastily tried to light up a candle ..as she was making something on d oven...and it seemed overcooked...as well she was chopping some vegetables at the same time...

Aaaaaaah......!!!

She had cut her finger..

Kya hua geet ....maan rushed in ....hearing her scream..!!

he found her rubbing her finger which was bleeding ..rushed to her ...and put her finger in his mouth ....

Geet was taken aback by his act....

Kat li na....geet tum koi kaam dekh ke nai kar sakti ...ankein diye hai na bhagwan...yeh kya kar lia.....ab kya hoga...first aid box kaha rakkha hai..khun bhi nikal raha hai.... maan was anxious ..

Sir...choti si chot hai...she was startled by his concern.

Maan still had her finger in his mouth ..she was looking in his eyes...he looked up at her ....both looked in each others eyes...the candle was the only evidence of their feelings...she didn't know what is it ...what she is searching in his eyes...which was shimmering in d soft glow of candle light..

http://www.songs.pk/sehar.html

[guys please download the 2nd song of it ..wil just take 2 mins but u will be able to feel the rest]

Maan looked in those ocean deep brown eyes.....which were fixed in his ...as if want to ask something....searching something..and afraid of something ..like a afraid deer ...a sense of unknown pain he could feel in them...a silent plea......

Maan : bohot Dard ho raha hai...?

Geet : nodded in negative....not able to speak..still her eyes fixed in his eyes.she was blank....

He moved towards her slowly ....while she moved backwards...he wished to take her pain away ....wished to speak up something to her ....wished to hear something from her silent trembling lips...those were apparently silent ...but asking so many difficult questions to him..........

The answers are difficult to find geet ..

Dil to hai bejubaan.......

Dil ki sunao na....

Batein jo dil me hai....hoto pe lao na...

Sham ho ya seher ho.....

dil me tum har peher ho...

Sathiyaaaaa........................................

Palke jhukao naaa......

Najrein churao na.....

Dil to hai bejubaan.....

Khamoshi ii yeh ......keh rahi hai ....

Baat hadh se.. badh rahi hai....

Sathiyaaaaaaaaa......

Geet felt a unknown sensation running through her spine.....as maan's lips touched her finger ...she didn't know what it is....she never felt before in her life..the care the affection was reflecting from his eyes.. made her numb....she didn't know....why she longed for it...she doesn't know ..why she wanted maan to be there ...

But ......this is not right ....!she thought

she drew her finger back to her self..

She didn't know why it happned ....she didn't know why it is not right ...it was something disturbing her very much ...she turned back to him .....

Geet ...he neared her ...calling her softly from her back...

He wished to hold her ...and turn her back....he wished to crush this innocent pegion in his broad chest ....can hide her forever from all pains of this world..he wished the world to stop in this very moment ....he wished a prayer ....a silent one to his god....who had been always a deaf to him...but he prayed a unknown desire....again...

She closed her eyes....as she had goosebumps hearing her name dat escaped his lips...as if she desired to hear it from him only ....she felt herself sinking

She was feeling numb....

What is happening ..? why he is always there for me?...what is it written in his eye....why cant I read it ?....or if ..i don't want to read it .....

He touched her hand which was resting on the table..she looked again at him...

Lost in the eyelock....

U know...i don't like that rohan.............maan whispered..he felt like drawing her close...very much close to him ...but something was there stopping him...he was in a pain....of what .....???

Geet was looking at his eyes..searching something ....unsure why she feeling an urge an unknown urge....for what ...?she didn't know.....she was afraid...but longed for him ...

She looke away slightly turning him back......stil her hand remained in his...

She knew ...dat he was jealous of rohan...but deeper inside she didnt accept it ....why ..?

dil to hai bejubaan.....

dil ki sunao na....

batein jo dil me hai .....

hotope lao na.....

sathiyaaaaaaan............

palke jhukao na.....

najrein churao na......

the light came back....as well their senses...maan let her hand go from his grip....and slowly walked out without looking at her ....

if anybody stopped him to see in his eyes...he would have noticed the pain of craving in them...

maan felt that she is not responding ....she is not understanding what he is going through...may be she never thought about me....bas mai hi.....he clenched his fist ...mai aisa kuch nahi karunga....why I kneeling down in front of a woman....again...maaan stop ur self......u cant get anything u want in life..she doesn't want you ......she doesn't feel for you the way you do.....may be she thinks you just her boss....may be just a good friend....may be just a friend...ya fir...doing just her duties....

but .what is it haunting me....mai kya chahta usse...kiu bar bar mai behekne laga hu....i cant lie myself more....i m falling for u .......he shut his tired eyes in despair ...maan singh khurana falling for u geet.....a drop of tear tickled down kissing his eyes..

geet was deadly silent ...her mind had stopped working...whats happening with me....and whats happening with him....this is not the maan khurana she knew...

she felt her legs very much weak to carry her weight ...she slowly sat there on the floor...resting her back on the kitchen table....exhausted by the turmoil in her mind...still trying to comprehend whats going on...!

oye geet yeh kya ho raha hai......sir is changing.........!!ohh my god...!!why didn't I notice it before.....he seemed to have no control over himself.

her vision became hazy...a drop of tear moisted her lashes..she didn't know why ....she felt her throat choked.....an unknown fear was filling her senses.

i have to be sure if sir is seriously thinking something different about me.....she had to find out the truth ...without letting maan know about it ..she decided .

she got up ..completed cooking ...still lost in thoughts..

she had to get it out from him...without letting him know...but how..?

babaji ....madat kar do meri....she looked up in the air..only one she had always complained.never lost her trust on god even after so many odds.

Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dear i loved each & scene of your this part. happy to see their feelings are changing.it is getting emotional i am waiting who will say first.
marvelous update
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
here goes the update....i hope u wil like it ...waiting for ur responses..
plz go through and reply guys..i m egarly waiting....
precap
the truth behind the curtain revealed....she moved.....
away from him or to him ..??????????????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved ur update❤️... thnks 4 pm yaar😊... jaldi update krna... 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
What an interesting turning point Reet.........loved but I love the stubborn MSK than the one who will be giving in to his emotions for a lady first...does nt matter whether it is Geet herself......u proved ur excellence once again...thanks a ton.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful now pls add TERI DEWANI TRACK maan is looking killing in dat sequence so want to imagine before dat on aired..

thank soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for updates n pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update.maan know his feelings towards geet.hope geet also understand her feelings.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg that was so good
i cant waitr for da nxt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
thanks for da pm

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