FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Muskaan , great yaar... loved it a lot.. btw, y did you gave us a small one... starting wiritng on the next part sooon and we want MANEET love scenes..:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Muskaan , great yaar... loved it a lot.. btw, y did you gave us a small one... starting wiritng on the next part sooon and we want MANEET love scenes..:)

actually if ur are ok with a real small update on Maaneet then i could do that
...supposed to be that any way!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

if i cud jus make u sit n write all day i wud hav done that.........lol

all the 3 parts r written so well................maan has 4gt tht he's married grrr he needs whackin now.............he has not done anythin wid sasha..........jus rumors.............awaiting 4r next part it's gonna be interesting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
awww wen is maan gonna start noticing geet
poor geet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Awww Geet......she is going through so much......when is that idiot Maan gonna notice her.....hmph! Lolz......but I love Dadi and Krish......they are always there for her......waiting for the competition.....Maan as the judge......it was all great......do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

geet is dressed in smart in a white salwar khameez..
its the intercollege competition...today


Part 9

Maan dressed in Black suit.. not really formal though..he had his first three buttons open on his shirt.....Geet was not aware of maan being the judge...
the entire college was waiting to have a glims of Maan Singh Khurana
he steps out of the car..girls just start drooling over him..

Geet and her friends were in the seminar hall checking the last few mins update..
pooja gets a mms- she just faints..
kavya & smriti are like wat happened!! she shows the pic taken by her friend
they say wat the Fish..!!!!no way.!!. they go like check out his bare chest man!! wow!!
geet not aware of wat they are talking about!!!!
they seem to take little longer than usual..drooling epsi..geet snatches the phone and sees the mms...it was Maan in black suit.. stepping out of the car..his wide chest was really HOT in there.. she gets pissed off... where do u get all this crap from!!!
Pooja- aparantly this crap is the Judge
geet just drops down..maan is the judge...
she looks at the pic again..she wonders wat is maan wearing...why is he not buttuned up

properly.. when he knows he is coming to a college
wify gets seriously angry this time...she walks straight into the principle room ...she was really fuming ...looks around for maan cannot find him.. she turns back..to bump right into him...
she loses her balance and maan holds her waist ...and pulls her up..she lands on his bare chest..she was panting so furiously maan could actually feel every blow of breadth on his chest.. geets eyes were closed all the while..
maan was tickled with every touch of hers..as she opened her eyes..maan could feel them opening slowly..they moved back..
they had that eye contact...maans eyes twinkled with joy to have found her.. but geets eyes were fuming...maan wondered why so much of anger ??? maan was still holding her waist.. he slowly let go and moved back...

geet moved forward..maan was shocked..he tried to move back..but still wondered wat was geet upto.. geet eyes were fuming....her fumingly questioning eyes..maan was trying to read the question..he just realizesd
she was really close to him now...before he could say any thing..geet buttons the shirt.. and tucks his shirts colar and leaves..maan stood totally mesmerized ...

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this was just on demand..shall continue the presentation latter

love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😉aww i like it
so wify
cant wait for da nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
thanks thanks thanks much Muskaan :)

Luv uuuuu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣.....Wifey is getting possessive......lolz.......great scene......just too cute.......he was happy to have found her.......hmm......something's cooking.....lolz......loved this angry Geet......only she can mesmerize and tame him......lolz......you go, girl! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
I loved it. Way to go Geet!!! So wifey of her to button up his shirt. Please continue soon muskan I am eager to read more.

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