FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190

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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1061

That was superb! Maan was jealous......go on.....he needs to be tortured some more.....am enjoying his insecurity....😉😆......can't wait to read the next part......do continue soon.

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Sana

@Vintagepeach

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1062

very nice
plz update the nxt 1 soon😳

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Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1063

😃 Maan jealous with a CAPITAL J eh? 😉
LOVE it.... 👏 👏 👏
That's what you get for neglecting Geet for 4 years (right???) 😛
Sorry for commenting after such a long time... 😊

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Keertee

@Keertee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1064

precap
Maan defintly Jealous..with a capital J... WOW so looking fwd it please dont make me beg you...update :))))) Just kidding take your time.. you know what addiction does to you :)

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Bahaar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1065

wooooooooooooow

now this is called what i wished for lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng loooooooooooooooooooooong ago. i wonder if i were geet, whom would have been the man to choose🤔hmmmm maan or Armaan🤪

now get energized nd update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Reena Varghese

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1066

awesome. thnks muskan . i soo wanted to see maan being jealous... u made my wish come true....imagining how possessive he'll be once he comes to know tht she is his wife.... why cant dadi arrange a party where she introduces geet as her bahuu?? update soon..

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VJ-LNMDJ

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1067

Hi,

due to my own constraints , I am not able to read most FF's , but I just read your part 40 (almost in isolation - I have read only few of your very early ones) , and liked it very much 👍🏼..... I like the way you keep a simple nice flow to the story ... and in this one about Maan getting jealous is too good..and the way he says - just because someone doesnt show emotions doesnt mean they dont have any... was so touching ... so much like what Maan wud actually say....

thanks , and keep writing , I do hope to keep catching up ...

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1068

loved the update ............ Maan so JJJJJ......
i hope arman help them both to come close

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Saz

@Chotii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1069

muskiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ok, after a pm i felt it necessary to Still come and comment too so u know exactly how much i lvoed the last two parts..
firstly, the heated moment between maneet (when geetccomes outta the shower in a robe).. muski that was passion at its best! believe me.. i was blushing so hard lol as well as feeling super happy that maan actually DID that!! lol uffffffff u done a fantastic job in depicting every movement and emotion they were feeling.. little things just made that a complete *wow* moment for me.. i was totally blown away..! one of ur most well written parts tooo =D
also.. the moments following their little passionate situation.. gosh that was Dramaaaah!! loved em - and also the mentioning of geet covering her bruises../maan-bite ;) lol with her dupatta = wonderful touch to the whole part - gosh i love u for that part it was deeelightful!!!
now coming to the previous part awwwwwwwwwwwww i love how jealous maan gets.. even though he doesnt show it - and yaar am a huuuuuuuuge fan of armaan so i love seeing him in this heheh - but as i told ya earlier that i really didnt want anything to happen between geet-armaan cos she belongs to maan and nor could i bare seeing a heartbroken armaan, so thank u soooo much for showing a beautiful friendship between them instead!!! ur sooo awesome!!! all these incredible parts make me sooo eager for u to continue real fast - however, until u do update i just indulge in all the gorgeous recent/previous updates of urs! keep it up - u are immensely talented and i just wish u continue making us super happy with ur absolutely stunning updates!!!
sooooo much love!!!
Saz
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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1070

thanxs each one of u...I really could not thanx each one of u enough..I am very very

delighted & trying hard to get more intresting parts...

maan - u really seem to know him pritty well(that came like a taunt)
geet felt it..but preffered ignoring....

part 41

next day maan was working out in his gym
he was running on his trid mill...his abs were perfectly curved & toned..his strong arms were pushing faster & faster the air to & forth..the sweat was flowing from his forehead..down his sharp jawline his face was stiff & cold..the thought of armaan & geet hugging, armaan cupping
her face...holding her from waist..all this was hitting him
every time the thought flashed he just increased the speed..
he did'nt know wat is bothering him...& why was it bothering him
so much..he did'nt want geet in his life..then why armaan & her
togatherness haunted him so much..
he stopped at once & stood panting very furiously...he stood there
wondering ...then he decided wat ever it be between them he is not
going to let geet effect his life..anymore..he just pulled out the
bandage that she had tied & got ready ..

in the office geet had called armaan & said that she is fine with maan
doing the project..armaan came to meet maan
armaan - goodmorning maan
maan - hi buddy..(maan was not expecting him)
armaan - actually geet called & said she was ok with u doing this project
(geet called..maan was stuck with that..part..he avoided thinking abt it)
maan - umm!! ok as u please
armaan - ok I have called the investors meeting today as scheduled
hope ur ok..
(waise bhi aaj kal mera zindaghi main jo bhi horaha hain geet ka marzi
se hota hain..& frowns..maan mummers to himself)
armaan - maan yaar are u ok...
maan - yah I am fine..I have hire a new architect for ur project
armaan - yaar main meeting tuk free hoon..so I will catch up with geet..bye
maan - uumm!!

maan watches armaan going & meeting up geet ..
he looked at geet she was delighted too...maan noticed
they were chatting & laughing...
maan closed the blind fold & closed his eyes...I am not going
to let this happen..to me..she is no one...

armaan - geet wat is happening to ur Mr.Lover
(she was little withdrawn but pretended to work)
geet - nothing yaar sab kuch...she paused(maans lips feathering
her neck flashed in her mind)..Its been the same ..
armaan - geet are u fine..
geet - tears rolled down her eyes...
armaan - geet I have not seen u so emotional before..
are u sure woh Mr.lover is not using u..
geet - snaps back...wat rubbish..please don't talk about things
when u don't know..
armaan - immediately holds her hand (maan just crossed then..his heart felt pinched by the sight) please I am sorry..I was just trying to help

Investors had come & maan came to call armaan..
maan - I guess the investors are here
armaan - lets go geet
geet looked at maan for approval..(his eyes where not talking to her )

geet - nahin armaan..it won't be fine
armaan - geet u have drafted the project it will be good if u be there
please I am sure maan won't mind..right maan
maan - wat ever..& left to conference roon
they walked into the conference room.. armaan pulled geet & made her sit next to him..
maan was vey restless & getting irritated..

geet noticed maan getting irritated..his response to the investors
was not his usual way..he was lossing it..he even disapproved with armaan once..after the meeting was over..armaan left with investor discussing further details
geet - maan aap yeh kya kar rahain hain
maan - why wat happened?
geet - why are doing this? u said u wanted to do it for armaan ur friend
and now ur...
maan - u are very concerned about him?
geet - why won't I be? I dragged him back into all this..
I knew it u can never get emotional with ur profession
that is why I had refused it at the first place...
nothing matters to u more than ur profit...
maan clucthes her arms & pushes her against the wall..
maan - shut up..just shut up..
(he was almost touching hers lips ..they could feel their breath on each other
they were reminded of the that intense movement they shared..how his lips feathered
her neck, that passionate hug & their hearts skipped a beat)
she closed her eye & pushed him away..
geet - mujhe to aap chup karo doge..but.u will lose ur friend in the bargain
& walks out
maan pulls her back with a jerk..she almost falls back on him..
he says in pain...its all because of u...
geet - wow..now every thing comes back to me great..ever since I have joined the office..
I have tried my best not to bother u.....but wat ever I do..it never seem to please u...
any way u don't have to really worry about me...friday is my last day here...
u won't have to put up with me after that in office..
maan was hurt..he snaps back
- so u can easily join armaan full time now...(he knew he spoke too much)
geet pulled away her hand & left the place hurt

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geet & armaan misunderstanding

next part 42 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32602833

I hope u are liking the flow ..just loved all ur responses

please do suggest..if there is anything I need to include

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago