FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 141

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Soumya!

Superb update, yaar😊 I really enjoyed the interaction between Maan & Daadi...poor guy, he was trying so hard to keep her happy and still be with Geet.😆

This was by far my favorite lines:

"daadima, good morning and I love you!" he said excited.

Daadima looked at him and said, "Let me guess, you cannot tell geet this so you told me!"

I can totally picture this being used in the actual show. Update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very Nice update.. Plssssss no Barries between maneet cos of pregnency...

waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 hehehehehe,...............this was a cute update i totally loved it , cho chweet bechara maan , dznt even knw wat he is syng nd to whom dadi ke samne pol kholega .....

hehehe................thank you love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic as always soumya...

Daadima looked at him and said, "Let me guess, you cannot tell geet this so you told me!"


dadimaa.. you don't know your grandson.. ask him where he was last night??? 😉😉

"Badmash" said daadima pouring some orange juice in to her glass. "waise maan aaj aapka koi appointment nahi hai na? Why don't you go to our farmhouse and take a look at the renovation work there son?"

You wanna c your old MSK ??? .. if not, then pls don't make him stay away from Geet..

"poori duniya mein, yahi ek insaan mila tha mujhe pyar karne aur shaadi karne ke liye".

true NT, it been said that matches are made in heaven .. and you guys and perfectly made for each other..

He said, "These days, the two women in my life only listen to me or forgive me when I kiss them or hug them or pull geet clos…" and stopped realizing what he was saying. Daadima gaped at him with mouth wide open.


Soumya, dadimaa kya, even my mouth went open reading that.. i really loved the way you presented it..

"After reading all the information you gave me, I also researched some stuff online. I realized accounting, auditing and taxation is something that would really interest me. I also spoke to pinky's dad who is also a CA. Plus, this involves a blend of theoretical education and practical training, which run concurrently for a period of three years and would equip me with knowledge, ability, skills, and other qualities required of a professional accountant".

are you a CA??.. You seems to know CA stream a lot..

Finally soumya, I really loved the way you have protrayed Maan's character till now.. Their car scene, I loved each and every line.. both of them are madly in love but still when important matters come, Maan knows how to control his emotions. Even if his lines doesn't contain honey, sweetheart, sweety etc, all of them were sweeter than anything in the world.. his love, concern, passion etc was visible. Like looking into Maan's eyes shows us the intensity in the real series.. your each and every word gives us the same feeling...

waiting for your next update ...




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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyyy sweet part.
Lovee the chemistry between dadima and maan.
Hope to read next part soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Atlast u pmed rght Afsha😉😆😆
Nice update
Liked the way Geet said Ullu to Maan n Maan hearing all this also wast angry😆😆
Pinky was fab here
Maan n Dadi'd convo was shweet
Dadi can read Maan i thk
Maan also strted blurting out thgs lik Geet kuch zyada hi effect ho raha hai😆😆
Maneet going to Farm house all alone oye hoye
Wat does Maan wanna talk abt Geet's pregnacy
Hop nthg serious that leads them apart
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉😉wow..lovely..looking forward to their tanhai in the farmhouse..
plz update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey di Great part Plz continue soon Eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue cant wait to read da nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago

oh it was a nice update.....

love the relationship between dadimaa and maan.....she is a cute daadi....
waiting for next updateeee
reva

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