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kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update!! The convo. Between maan and dadi was cute lol...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

ssoumyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaa!!!

kitni kharab ho tum!! 😭 kal kyun nahi update kiya!!
last part itna jaanleywa tha😍---uskay baad itni lambhi break! "bohot na-insaafi hai"😆😆
cumin bk to this bit--as usual awesum!👏

Buh ohoooo😲---maan ney dadi ko upset kerdiya!! How dare he say no to her!!😆 Buh bechara—he had a valid reason too!!😉😉😛 Buh lmao---maan is maan—he noes his ways outa problems😉---very well😉😉😉—hehehe---

And oh shyt---geet ka baby bump already!! 😲🤢Nahiii!!! How will everyone at work react to that?? Wat if they think its maan's baby😲😲---oh my---not gud not gud!!!🤢

Buh soumya ---I think there next part is goin to be realli realli yummy😉😉---*gets x-rated thoughts* ----I am predicting maaneet hafin a small misunderstandin waali fight over the baby issue aur phir farmhouse main uhum uhum kerkay fight ko patch up karaingay!!😆

Wooooohoooooo!!! Luks like m gonna get sum more surprises from soumya's x-rated side---🤣🤣🤣🤣

Okies my fav dialgoues:😃😛😉

"geet, I'm not all surprised. Tum hosh mein hote hue hi kuch bhi bhol dethe ho, tuo neend mein yeh sab kehna tuo maamulisi baat hai" and giggled.

Hosh main geet aik gaali thori bolaygi!!! 4-5 sey kaam ki toh baat he nahi kerti!!!😆

Buh awwwie!! My baby noes his baby soo welll!!! 😆😆 M glad he aint pissd off at her anymore fer swearin at him!!⭐️

Such a sweety pie (walnut wala)---😆

He said, "These days, the two women in my life only listen to me or forgive me when I kiss them or hug them or pull geet clos...." and stopped realizing what he was saying. Daadima gaped at him with mouth wide open.

Hahahaha----wat a yummy way of askin fer forgiveness!!! laykin yay har kisikay bass ki baat thori hai!!
maan kay hug sey toh pathar bhi pegal jae!!!😍😍😍😍😍

Soummmyaaaa dekho tumne ….ummmm *thinks of an example* …haaan!! Jaisay machli ko paani sey bahir nikaltay hai---aur woh idhar udhar ulta phulta hoker tarapti hai….waisay tumne hamara haal kiya kal update nahi kerkay!! 😕😭🤢🤣🤣

Sochooo!!!!! Becharay hum!!!😆😆😆

Abh dekho itni khatarnak example deynay kay baad tumhara farz hai kay tum jaldi jaldi jaldi update kerdo!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
plz plz plz!!

Muaz muaz muaz!!

Love u tonssssssssssssssss!!!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update soumya. ooh farmhouse. lets see what happens there.

P.S. u didn't reply to my pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy.i just read ur whole ff...
i cant say how amazing it was..it was reallly nice!!!..
n it has made me laugh sooo sooo much!!!
i was wondering how do u do it..think of all these parts..ur sooo good!!
like really love soo many parts!!!
can u add me to ur pm list??
P('',)
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was a nice convo. b/w maan and dadi
can't wait for maan and geet to be alone in the farmhouse 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Great part
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nice update... luved the convo between maan n dadi... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586



hmmmmmm, so many things in your update!!! 😃,...... dont worry i like it..... !!!!

oh, i get it, ur mind WAS innocent... awww .... sorry honey for taking away your innocence...!! i did the same thing to geet too...!!! 😉..... and that she's getting more XXX rated than maan....poor him..!!!! she actually unbuttoned his shirt.... 😆

omg omg.... really palo!!! 😲..... i just kept it to a kiss and you went up to pregnancy.... yea ur innocent and bhola mind.....🤣
well u know, they have not even confessed yet and i'm already made them do so much... and now the shaadi thing is a little too far away..!!! let yes, i'll consider what u said then...😉....

. but dev and NT still exist on this planet u know.. i have to pack them off to Jupiter first and oh yes, sasha to pluto...!!! and then maneet can get spend their pre marriage SR on moon!!!! lol....!!!! 🤣

glad u liked the jeeju-sali jodi...!!! they're gonna rock...atleast maan has someone to support him after he gets married to geet, cos daadima is not going to support maan....😆

thanks palo...love ur comments and ofcourse you too...!!!!!

and about the update, write a longer comment next time and u get more maneet ....!!!! 😉



hahaha lolz i like ur plans for dev and NT and as well as sasha ... haaha whenever i read ur maaneet filled updates i alwasy forget that these soo called ppl even exists but since they're gonna be leavin planet earth soon so all is good 👍🏼 lolz and by the way the ki fark phenda comments was totally based on/due to😉 my scientific knowledge .. lolz kya karu science ki jo student hoon :P ahaha lolz

so i absolutely loved this update too .. haha so the wake up call hilarious hahaha i love geet n her gaaliyaan kabhi dusht daanav toh kabhi ullu... lol.. maan is goonnna be luent in deis swear words soon enough... lolz i love how they still fight though .. lolz i thnk the fightin keeps their passion alive ahahah ... lolz maan and daadi parts are like always awesome ... haha poor daadi had a slow moment and didn realize maanz stubborness was all b/c that he wouldn get to see geet... lolz haha then maan blames geet for his own restlessness and his daadis anger hahah poor guy soo in love ... <3 ... lolz all daadi had to say was take geet wit u as well and maan goes all happy happy ahaha .. they are just too adorable ahaha ... i love when maan hugs n kisses daadi to get her to forgive and his line after that .. about how all the girls in his life don forgive him unitl he comes close to them oh hoy.. 😆

so finally we had some face to face geet maan scenes ahah lolz i love how in the car maan jst takes her hand and holds it while they are driving and then his concern for geets education is choo sweet!! and geet had decided to become CA hahah good choice that way she'll be able to help maan run the company .. lol u'll have an mba and ca educated person runnin the company jst wat u need !! and ohhh the pregnancy talk is brough up again ... but geet has nothin to worry bout ahah maan is A-okay with baby :) but i wonder wht hes gonna suggest to her regardin pregnancy hmmm...

and i see that i'm being blackmailed in to writin longer comments..but its okay yaar.. for more maneet i'll even take that the blackmail *dramatic sigh* haahaha jokes :p by the way when are they gonna like confess their love to each other ahah 12 kiss to hoye gaye aur kya chaahiya.. lolz i'm waitn for their love confesssions!!!! lolz .. maybe the farmhouse will be a perfect place for such a confession .. and if the confession comes witha marriage proposal even better 😉😉 but jst confessio bhi chale ga 😛

so i think i have officialy wrote a long comment so know i need a maneetilcious good update !!! 😉
Edited by sweet_charmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Soumya,
Just wanted to congratulate you on a thoroughly enjoyable FF .. i have really enjoyed your updates..
could you add me to your pm list too please?
thanks so much!! xx😛
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Posted: 14 years ago



how r u Soumya


update is


"kya? Maan ka phone hai?pehle nahi bata sakti.(how cute) Aur yeh kya tumne receiver ko cover bhi nahi kiya. Ab mera band bajayega woh" and snatched the phone.



"woh main neend mein thi aur maine kuch bhi bhol diya".

"geet, I'm not all surprised. Tum hosh mein hote hue hi kuch bhi bhol dethe ho, tuo neend mein yeh sab kehna tuo maamulisi baat hai" and giggled



"daadima, good morning and I love you!" he said excited.

Daadima looked at him and said, "Let me guess, you cannot tell geet this so you told me!"


"daadima ko itna gussa aa gaya? Sab is geet ki wajah se! Pareshaan karke rakh diya mujhe."
Agar aise chote chote baton per aap maan ko phone karenge tuo maan ka importance badh jayega dev".

He said, "These days, the two women in my life only listen to me or forgive me when I kiss them or hug them or pull geet clos…" and stopped realizing what he was saying. Daadima gaped at him with mouth wide open.


"achha, afternoon, "geet" ko leke jaana, farmhouse".

"Kyun daadima?" asked maan surprised.

"kyun? Shaadi karne ke liye aur phir honey moon ke liye- don't you think farm house is a perfect location maan?" KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

"Mr. Khurana, aaj kal aapki secretary itni important hai, ki aap uske bina kahin nahi jaate. Isiliye. Shayad hume yeh pehle hi kehni thi ki aap geet ko bhi le jaaye. But, my age does not allow me to think that fast!"


"After reading all the information you gave me, I also researched some stuff online. I realized accounting, auditing and taxation is something that would really interest me. I also spoke to pinky's dad who is also a CA. Plus, this involves a blend of theoretical education and practical training, which run concurrently for a period of three years and would equip me with knowledge, ability, skills, and other qualities required of a professional accountant". (r these your subjects)





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