FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 138

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Posted: 15 years ago
part 45 ws soooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya, sorry for the late comment :(.. I had to go out and was back only after 10. i even missed the 9:30 telecast of Geet. My husband was teasing me saying that it's the first in last 2 months that you are not home at 9:30 on a weekday 😃..

So regarding the update .." Fantastic, Mind Blowing Awesome !!!!". I loved each and every line of it.. I loved how he cared for her.. Quoting word's from muskaan's FF " unke pyar se pyar hogaya hain"..Can a guy change this much.. I don't beliv.. and Geet too at first she was a but nervous but then she was cool.. she didn't spoil that night.. and true dear, me too wasn't able to count the number of kisses.. the way they lie down on the bed was so passionate .. taht was an intense romantic moment .. i was seeing all those moments in front of my eyes while reading your FF..

"He nodded his head in denial and said, "Not in this life!""

I liked it but would have loved more if he had said that in Hindi .. btw, I liked their entire conversation..

I liked the entire bed scene ... wish that will be shown in the onscreen too.. I think Cv's will be able to do it..

Dear, at first I thought commenting each and every line .. and I read more than 10 times... each time when I read it I will imagine MANEET and will end up without writing one line.. I was imagining Geet in pink saree and maan in white kurta 9 self designed) and light blue jean. I want him to wear some loose fitting costume.. Sweet heart, I admired maan's self control .. Geet in a saree, night, bed room and no lights..

I hope you didn't get bored reading my comment.. I haven't edited my lines.. just wrote down what it came in my mind..

Thanks once again for thsi Fantastic update and please please update sooon.. it's weekend so I think we can expect 2 updates daily 😃

Love you !!!



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586



hey nothing like that...sweetheart.... 😛



i was out for dinner with my family and now i'm back.... wow... that was
quite a long post .. took me quite some time to read..!!! lovely post i
thoroughly enjoyed reading ur comments...!!!!



i'm glad u took my words seriously.. i like it when people pick their
fav lines and scenes from my updates and when they are more specific
about what they liked in each update..

u know that makes me write better and i know what u expect and
accordingly take the story ahead...



so thanks a ton....!!!!! 🤗



u actually made a rough draft before writing this post??? awwwww... i
like it, i like the effort u took to comment.. thanks honey...!!!
muaz.... muaz........



i know there were too many kisses in this update... it was flooded with
kisses and no wonder everyone's been losing track of how many times they
kissed each other...!!! 😆



and yes, its been a little XXX rated too... i had to make it that way
because some of my readers wanted it... 😉



haahahhaha i like your irony in the speechless statement... but please
do comment the same way..!!! i like it... 😛



and yes, i'm glad u can sleep in peace now...!!!



yep, i'll be updating tomo... !!!!! 😃



thanks once again honey.... keep reading and keep commenting... increase
the size of your posts and u get to read more of maneet..... 😉



Soumya



yay!!!!!!! You read my comment...i was about to cry thinking that you didn't reply
then i saw ur reply
thanks Di....and don't worry from now onwards i will try to make comments as long as the previous one...😆

Please update quickly...
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Posted: 15 years ago
kya update hai yaar ,mar hi dala
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Posted: 15 years ago
soumi..just waiting for the update..mind blowing...just lost count
how many times ..my heart kind of skipped & skipped ...
uuuuffff!!!
just enjoyed every bit of it
love
muskan
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow so much kisses in one part
what are u trying to dear
and maan geet pinky whole part was awesome
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was really really really very nyc................
i had lost the count too............😉 it was superb.......................😊
i was blushing while reading................☺️ owsum yaar........👏👏
please continue soon............... waiting eagerly for another updte..................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update
i read it 100 times
i just loved it
please plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
updaTE QUICKLY 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeh kya kab kaise hua!!

Soms!!! yeh kyaa kar diya..I had thought I would update mine..but I got bowled over abhi!!

LOL..wow...LOved it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya yaar tu update kab karegi?

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