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Tia

@tes_v1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Jenifer.
Tia, Tia, Tia! Finally read it, just in the nick of time.

Woah, what can I say? Like others, I actually don't mind your Dev. He is kinda charming in a cool sorta way. Obviously I want Geet to be with Maan but I don't mind her conspiring with Dev a while to get Maan to notice. I sense some good scenes on the way so without further ado, bring it on!

Jeni-Jen-Jen!

Ah! You read it! Sorry for pestering, but I somehow feel my update to be incomplete widout your comments! 😳 Yup, ur ryt, some goooood scenes coming soon! I was waiting for your comment, now I'll go and update!

love ya! 🤗

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Tia

@tes_v1

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: geet.a
Hey!!

just read it!!

awesome awesome!!

I'm really loving it :D

So..Maan isn't interested in Girls...hmm..that might be..but he def cares a lot about gEet..oo..do continue love

Hey Geet!

Thanks dear! Yup, there's a real realization come for Maan soon!

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#183

you updatd yay!!!!! So i'm really enjoying maan's jealousy ..haha i hope that doesn't make me a bad person :P lolz soo cute maan is pining over geet.. lol it took Geet getting married for maan to realize that... gosh boys can be soo slow sometimes... lmao.. dev is hilarious... hez is totally enjoyin torturing maan.. and i totally love geet and dev's friendship..they are gonna be an adorable bhabbi and devar 😆😆😆 ... and geet kiss was soo cute and innocent 😛😛 loved it!!! I absolutely loved the whole update ..can not wait for the next update!!! ohh please add me to ur pm list!!!

p.s. i loved how you describes maans sweat pants... hahaha dhotii pants.. just love it!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

jealous Maan... waiting for the next part..

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

wow! i loved how you described MSK's reaction so well, please do continue soon!

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

Alumni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

wowow. jealous maan! awesome update though and thanks for the pm!

~Naina

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Some one is jealous. I loved Maan's reactions. If only Dev were like this in the show. Please continue soon. I can't wait to see how Maan comes to the realization that he is in love with Geet.

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#188

hi tia

really loved ur update

the kiss was so perfect!!

update plz

luv

muskan

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Fabulous! Oh, Maan was jealous......lolz......but refused to accept it.....duh! Lolz.....Geet and Dev are scheming to get Maan to confess his feelings......I loved Dev here......he is too good.......so mischievous........lolz......I am loving the trio! The way you penned Maan's anger, frustration, confusion.......it was beautiful. Loved it completely! Do continue soon.

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Roshni

@Roshni.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

OMG!!
Tia, it was just wonderful! I love those reactions Maan is giving!!
Oh boy! He is jealous!
Geet actually kissed Maan? I think I'm blushing too imagining all possible things!

Continue soon Tia! Excellent write up!

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