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Originally posted by: cacoethes

finally read it😆

LOVED IT TIA 🤗

now Maan Singh Khurana is going to go and win his lady love back...i like!!!😳

Originally posted by: spln

yayyyy for your return, and for the update right away tia!

i finally got around to catching up on my pending readings =)

so maan and geet are finally coming around eh? about time - esp for maan!

but now there is shekhar (hopefuly a complete figment of the mind character who doesn't exist ll) and geet is off to mumbai - but then MAAN CAN'T LOSE WOHOOOO!

i bet everytime they are together it shall be showdown! 😆 there's no other way about it, just yesterday's episode when they were intntly becoming the 'non-fighting' companionable friends i went to myself, 'yeh right!' and there they were, proving me right the very next second! 😆 insufferable MaanEet!

oh well - looking forward to reading where this roller coaster is headed next!

ps: i'm glad dev can hook up with someone who doesn't have an ancient name from the bygone eras like nain tara now that jenifer courtez is in *hint* 😉

cheers,
nj

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

tiaaa!! main aagai!!!🤗 Uzma! 🤗

Part 6:

finallyyyy maaneet ney kuch work sey hath ker baat toh ke!!😲

i jus loved the way geet dictated him aur baghir kuch sunhay suite main laygai!!!!!👏woh to sirf Geet hi kar sakti hai...

"hum tum aik kamray main baand ho...." 😆😆😆 iss bar chabbi nahi khoee phirbe chabbi khoney kay baad wala scene hogaya!!😉😆Lolz.... yes! ohhh my----*faints*!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

poor maan, awww...he cudnt control himself any longer......maan soch raha hoga "behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de"😆😆

hmmm....yummmy!!!!!!---pehlay touch main itna romance---agay kay parts perh ker mujhe hospital na jaana parhay yaar!!! Hospital! Nahiiiin!😲

okies my fav dialogues!!

"Just shut the hell up, Maan Singh Khurana and for once in your life, listen to someone,"Geet bit back.

👏👏👏👏 finalli geet!!! yay kharus tumhara victim aur tumhara he mareez hai---jitna sunhana hai sunhao!!😆😆

"You never really knew how special you were to me, did you?"

awwww!!!😍😍😍😍😍 bologay toh pata chalayga na!! tumhare dimag main thori ghussi hui hai!!😆 Tubelight thinks Geet knows evrything!😆 His mouth hovered over hers as he said, "I don't know how to treat a girl, huh? What did you say back on the dance floor? Maan Singh Khurana can't please a girl? How can you say that? Have you ever tried it, sweetheart?" His voice was a hoarse whisper in her ear.

😍😍😍😍😍 uffff------kya punch pey punch lines mar raha hai yay!!😲😲😲 kaunsi drink maan ko peelai thi yaar---isko har din 4-5 doses charhaney chahyay!!😆

phir toh geet ki band bajh gai!!😉😉😉4-5 DOSE? Overdose ho jayega...😆 🤣

and OMG she confessed---laykin itnnaaa gussay main!!! bechari --he pissed her off soo much!!! chalo maan abh jaldi jaldi apni wify kay peechay bhaggoh aur phirse x-rated hojao!!😉😆Uzma, uh-oh.. u're getting naughty...

[[[[tiaa mashAllah congrats!! i noe maine jitna late tumhara yay part parha hai utni late meri wishes---laykin WOW gurl first class---👏

kya khaa ti hoo yaar?😆 laykin realli its zabardast news!! realli hope tum hamesha excel kero---aur sabko peechay chordoh!!😉]]]]Aw, thanks hun!

part7:

😲😲😲😲😲 wadda new and improved side of maan!! that vodka, rum or watever it waz has definitely done wonders on him!!😆😆😆---Pasand aaya na?😉tia yaar plz har din maan ko 4-5 doses deyti rehna!!😆

buh awww yaarr--maan waz sucha darling here!! he cares sooo much fer her!! finally he got a chance to show it!!⭐️Finally. dikhaya to sahi... laykin geet ki akkar abh tak gaye nahi!! abhi bhi itni naraz!! i think woh apni over the years frustration ko nikal rahi hai--pehlay chance nahi tha---abh mauka perh chauka mar rahi hai!!😉Yup.. she's totally fuming...

and lmao 3/4 litre milk charhadiya!!🤣 woh bhi haldi wala!!!🤢 i wonder usnay pehlay glass kay baad he puke kyun nahi kiya!! haha---imagine maan kay lap perh!!🤣Eeewww! waisay baarish kay timings kitnay perfect hai yaar--maaneet kay mood ko dekh ker apnay app ko adjust kerti hai!!! 😆 Maaneet aur baarish ka kismat konnection..🤣

my delicious dialogue!!

"Now, whose got an ego here?" Maan's taunt was rewarded with an icy glare. He shrugged and dropped the tux on her lap. "As you wish."

donno kay andar ego kuth kuth ker bhara hua hai!!😲 kitnay ziddi bhi hai yaar!! 😲

"Do you have any idea how stubborn you are at times?" he scolded her.

"Learnt it... Aachoo!...from you. Aachoo, aachoo!" she replied amidst sneezes

😆😆😆 acchoo achoo kertay huway bhi back answer kernay ka chance miss nahi kiya!! lagta hai dev ney iska brain wash ker diya hai!!😲😆 achanak sey itna change in chracter--kuch toh garbar hai yaar!😲😲

dha dha dhum!! hmm---dev ney kuch toh kiya hai yaar---😕Dev, yeah right...lolz..

waisay tia---tumhare ff main churailtara kyun nahi hai🤣 CHURAILTARA! *senses tia's expressions*

awww!! u miss her soo much!! lagta hai tumney uskay liyay koi special and surprise entry plan ki hai!!

haina??!!🤣Woh bhi chahiye?😲

doonoo parts aik dum jhakass thay tia---very well written!! mazzaa aagaya!!Thanks jaani!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

love u my choc mousse ice-cream!!

muazzz!!!

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

tia!!! m bk agen!!🤗

jus read part 8!!!

oh my---m ur fan darling---awesum piece once agen!!👏OH MY! loved the way u described maan kay dil ka haal---in the begiinin bit!!😳😳

poor guy, he cant really interpret his mixed feelings---buh atleast he realises kay kuch toh garbar hai!!😳 chalo m glad uskay brain ka heart kay saath kuch coordination toh hua!😉Thanks hun! Kuch aisa hi samjho...

oooooo and i sooo loved the way he cared fer her!! all night (almost😆) he waz awake and the way he got worried--aik dum hubby style--tooo gud!⭐️

loving his possessiveness buh at the same tym m soo hating the way he assumes things!!! lmao he actually thought kay geet sed ILU becuz she wanted to hit bk on him!! wah!!! how random!!😆😆😆 It's Maan, babe! U ska dimaag kaise chalta hai ye toh sirf woh hi jaanta hai...😆
waisay shyt yaar---not gud---maan ka too much influence hogaya geet perh!!😲😲 evn she started assuming things!! Ahan, sahi kaha...and OMG! she sed YES to shekhar!!! *nahiiii* *faints*

bad.....VERY bad...actually very very BAD!!😆

dev kaafi nahi tha kay maan ko abh shekhar ko bhi bear kerna parhayga!!😆 acha hai---kharus kahin ka!! line perh laanay kay liyay zaroori hai!!😉😆Thoda line pe laane ke liye zaroori hai....

aur oh oh---how can i 4get---the dream sequence waz beautiful!! awwww!! picture perfect fam!!! loved their baby!!!😳 tia yay dream kab tru hoga?!😍Ye toh Maaneet ke haath me hai, babe!😳

okies my fav dialogues now:

"Will someone tell me why have I been buried alive under a heap of blankets?" Geet shouted.

so that u can get well enouf to make maan's dream cum true!😆

"The nautanki queen has risen," he smirked.

😳😳😳 queen has risen by making the king fall on his knees on the floor---woh bhi puri raat kay liyay!! (almost😆)!!

a very well written and descriptive shot!!

love ur writin style my melted chocolate!!!! 😆Thanks my honey sugar!

muaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz !!!!

just came across...ur fan fic.....must say u are awesome...👏👏👏👏