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Originally posted by: bshah856

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Originally posted by: uzmakhan

Tia darling!!!!🤗 Uzma darling! 🤗
wow gurl---as I expected---ur ff is realli realli spell-bounding'm hooked'I don't think I wud be able to get off my chair unless I finish it all off!!😲😲😲😲Aw hun, Im sooooo elated to hear that! and plz bear wid me---this ff is fantabulous!!!'I hafta comment on each and every part!!Aw, sure no probs! I'd love that!😳

Part 2:---dev is sucha sweetheart!!😳😉 M actually developin a soft corner fer him after readin this!!😲 Fer once (atleast in ur ff) he isnt thinkin abt himself! Hez soo concerned fer geet!---⭐️
aur wohh saddo maan on the other side!! Sucha crazy workaholic!!🥱 This maan sounds worst then the serial maan!! Lmao!! M serious!!!'😆😆😆😆
m guessin he tuk geet fer granted🤢'as if woh uska asset hai'and no one can ever take her away'or as if shez bound to stay wid him---😕
buh ooooooooooo---jealousy!! Yummy---smart idea gurl!!😉😉😉 Thanks! Ahan, Maan was thinking exactly like that and so Dev had to act Cupid. His brother was blind towards his love but he wasn't!

"Geet," he held her by the shoulders, "have you tried jealousy? Believe me, it works wonders. Maan has never ever seen you with any guy, right? Your mistake, babe. Maan knows he owns you, he doesn't ever have to fear seeing you with any other guy. You don't even accept my date offers so he's relaxed. Believe me, if there's one thing a guy can't stand, it's seeing his girl on another guy's arm." lmao--this is too gud!! 👏

"Dev, you better behave because this time it's Geet and if you mess with her..." Maan let his warning threat hang in the air.
awwwie<3 now that's like my maan!!! Yay huwi na mardoh waali baat!!
Hope maan realizes his love soon and I get to read tons and tons of x-ratedness!! 😆😆Oh yeah, that'll come ahead!😉 Part3: awww 'I feel so bad fer my darling now!! Bechara!! How much hes missin her every moment!!! This quote kept lingering my mind wen I waz thinking of maan in the first bit "u don't realise the importance of sum1 unless they are gone"----
buh lmao---deveet are doin an amazing job!!! U are makin dev sound like a hero in here gurl!!⭐️ Me loving it!! Never in my wildest dreams I imagined him being a cupid fer maaneet!! Tumhare ff main bhi nahi!!😆😆😆 Innovative and unexpected, haina? lolz...😆 okies my fav dialogues here: Geet merely nodded. Dev looked at her with an amused expression and said, "God, someone's blushing! I didn't know girls still did that."

Hahahaha-naye zamanay main merd blush kertay hai dev!!!😉😆

Dev laughed. "Torture? I wish I were there to see bro's face when you kissed him. That would've definitely been an expression worth a million dollars. After all, it isn't everyday that the great MSK is kissed by a girl."

Oooooooooooo---she kissed!! 😍Ballay ballay---maan kay toh totay urh gaye!! 😆😆Geet had to do something!

Part 4: OMG!!! The new entrant waz geeet!!😲😲😲😲😲
tia, CVZ ki tarha tum bhi aik dum unexpected cheezain sochti ho!!😲
and yay they both tied!! Glad maan dint loose werna who "sach main pagal hojata"😆
buh poor him!! How embarassed he might haf felt wen geet hugged dev instead of him!🤢
I really hope dev doesn't start developing feelings fer geet in this process'..lmao m thinking like kekta serials now!!😆😆Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!!!! Aisa nahi ho sakta!😆

Oh my fav dialogue: "Lady, it's Dev Singh Khurana's services that you have employed and they always come with an assurance of giving you your value's worth," Dev said solemnly

Excellent dialgoue!! Very well wriitten!!Thanks!---man these khurana's are way too proud of themselves!! Onli difference is, that sum show it by actions while others do it by words!👏Oh, you bet! Khuranas, they are after all! Loved this bit!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Part 5: tia ki bachi!!! Ur soo mean to my poor baby!! Awww'.i feel like cryin fer him!!😭😭😭Aw, even I felt bad writing that bit par kya kare Maan is a tubelight to uska fuse to udana hi padhta na? and ewwww yuck yuck yuck!! 🤢🤢U made me h8 dev all over agen now lol!! Saala kamina!! Waz the gurl he kissin realli geet??😡🤢Oooooohhh, calm down, babes! Maybe it isn't that bad after all! ohh shyt yaarr'I can jus imagine maan's expression seein his geet like that!!Fuse ud gaya, aur kya?

Buhh oooo'the dance waz lovely👏---maan in tuxedo😍😍😍'.OMG---*drools* and geet in red sari!! Wow!! Raw hottness!! Yum yum!!!Yumm, isn't it! I', glad you love it!

Ahhhhhh!!! Hez bleeding!! Nahiii!! Geet where are u!!!---🤢🤢🤢

My fav dialgoues:😃

Geet rolled her eyes and was about to walk away when Maan pulled her close as a soft music filled the hall. Their gazes collided and for a long breathless moment, Geet felt trapped under his intense, deep-brown gaze. Maan held her close with his hands on her waist as they started swaying to the music. Geet's skin tingled where his hands touched her bare skin. He swirled her around and pulled her back. Pinning her to himself he asked, "Why haven't you been answering my call?"
Uffff-----daym this bit!! Awesum! Thanks again!

Geet pretended that this new bit of information didn't mean a thing and continued, "So it's jealousy on your part, is it? Delhi's most eligible bachelor, Mr.Dark Temptation can't please a girl. Headline worthy, isn't it?"

Hahaha'I m loving this devish side of geet!! ⭐️Sumtymz I feel maan deserves such attitude'cuz no1 has the guts to talk to him like that'atleast his lady love can knock sum sense in and sum stubborness out! 😕😉😆 You bet! Geet ke alawa kaun kar sakta hai aisa? It's only her copyright!😆
loved the party---except that grossy deveet bit!! 😡🤢

tia u haf got realli amazing writing power!! how u haf written it all, ur vocab, description of the sight---its truly amazing---i can immagine it all---jus perfectly---Aw, thanks babes! I'm happy to know that!😳love u tonnnnsss!! Love you too!

muazzzzzzz!!!