A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 62

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Posted: 15 years ago
absolutely amazing,
next update sooooooooooooon plz
aur ha yaad rakhna weekend par sirf aapke ff ka sahara hai
so plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.......
ur wondeerful writer darling,
lov ur post soooooooooooooo much
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey gr8 update...loving every word of it......

just keep writing lik this👏👏👏
reva🥱
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb post. So Maan is guilty that he was not paying geet attention in Tasha's drawing? 😆😆😆 how cute, so are the tears in geet's eyes for his undiluted love and the misery he is facing just to see her faling in some stupid sketch. So sweet of him. looks like kiss bug is in the air of mannetan land, where ever you go kisses are greeting us. nice to see them expreessing their hearts murmur's to one another. When shall we expect the next update dear?
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Posted: 15 years ago
cold water in HOT chesst uhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was actually hot
the office thingy was so cute
Geet- MAan Singh Khurana...aap mujhe paagal kar doge..was so perfect
loved it
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
update soon
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
YOUR FANFICS IS THE BEST ONE I HAVE EVER READ!!!! AMAZING JOB!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!

Khushi :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sweet update Geetu! love ya!
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Posted: 15 years ago
please update soon
please bring in more romantic scenes
love you
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys!!

Okay, so here is the update!! hopefully you'll like it!

Geet walked out and met Tasha and Sasha, in her own cabin.
She walked resolutely upto them- full of confidence that gave her eyes a beautiful glow..

Tasha and Sasha were talking about the change in MK and Geet walked upto them

Geet- Tasha!
Tasha jumped and looked around to see her..

Tasha- Tum ? What are you doing here? It's not like you need to work.

She throws the notepad on the table doodle-side up and says

Geet- You upset my husband today. You upset my boss today. He spent his important time dictating notes to you and you insult him.. I don't care about what you portrayed me as because..well, it's true, I AM clumsy..But to portray MAan like that was a sign of disrespect.

Both look confused

Sasha- What are you talking about? Don't we have any freedom of expression?

Geet- Of course you do Sasha..but what Tasha did today disrupted work. He dictated slowly- if he is kind to you- there is no way that you should be unkind to him.

Tasha- Silly girl..He is MK, he is always in a bad mood..

Geet glared at her and said

Geet- well..It's your job to make things alright now. You can make as many doodles as you want...but beware that if he sees them, he might fire you..No, being who he is he WILL.

Sasha- kyun? Firstly, he is overreacting way too much..obviously, your influence. Secondly, you don't have any right to yell at ME- This company's senior architect.

Geet- Oh really Sasha? I am yelling at you as the WIFE of MAAN Singh Khurana. So, that's not Geet..but MRs Geet Khurana for you..understand? Now Tasha, go to him and apologize. He respects everyone- and if you do something that is an obvious disrespect towards him- well, then, I think you should apologize...for your sake.

She leaves, and they both look at each other

Sasha- Ughh.. MK got so upset over WHAT? God, I don't get these two these days. Tasha, you upset him, just go say sorry and I will handle the rest. This Geet has no idea how much MK cares about her. Well, I'm not going to help her.

Geet goes back to MAan's cabin to find him exactly when she left him..
She smiles and

Geet- Maan..MAAAN!
Maan- haan? woh main..
Geet- koi nahi. Please sit down. Tell me what is to be done at the party

MAan- oho..you leave it.

Geet- you mean I can't do it?
MAan- uh..no Geet..It's just that..
Geet- Maan..

Tasha knocks and then enters to see Maan and Geet

Tasha(thinks)- she's still here?

MAan(says bitingly)- kyun? Ab koi aur doodle dikhane aayi ho?

Geet -Maan..stop it.

Tasha- woh..Sir, I'm sorry that I disturbed you with that. Silly me.

Before Maan can say more cruel words to her,

Geet- It's okay Tasha

Maan glares at Geet..who glares back and

MAan- hmm..koi baat nahi..

after she leaves

Maan- Geet.what did you do that for?

Geet- she hurt you. I won't let anyone do that.

Maan just looked into her bright eyes

There is a knock on the door,

Vicky- Bhai..

He comes in and

Vicky- Bhabhs? Aap yahan?
Maan -well..she is my secretary you know..

Vicky- But..wow..It's like you both are magnets..One is never without the other..

Maan and Geet blush

MAan- Anyways..Vicky, I was wondering if you'd like to throw a massive party..something great which will amaze everyone and yet be very unique
Geet has thrown two parties- both were really...ahem..good

Geet goes into flashbacks of the two parties- in which both of them had fought and had some really passionate moments..so does Maan..

Both look at each other.. and

Geet- haan haan Vicky,You know..HE absolutely LOVES the parties I throw..anyways, I will leave you two alone to work out the details..Says bye to both and starts to leave

MAan looks at her and then she comes back, whispers something in Vicky's ear which makes him smile and Maan fume..and then she leaves

MAan- What did she say?

Vicky(still smiling)- kuchh nahi bro..let's get down to work?

MAan(still angry but refusing to show it)- hmm

Finally the day passed and time came for MAan to come home..He had decided he needed to spend more time with Geet or else he'll go crazy..and she kept teasing him.never allowing him to be sure of what she was feeling..

Geet was waiting for MAan to come home. She knew she had annoyed him in the office..she hadn't meant to but the child in her hadn't been able to resist.
She decided to take a long bath and so when Maan came back from office and came into Geet's room, she was not to be found...but it didn't take long for him to figure out where she was

Maan- yeh Geet bhi na..God..Itna bura gaati hai..I love her to death but her singing is something which I cannot deal with..

He knocks on the bathroom door but she is unable to hear him because of her singing..

Maan- GEET!!

Geet stops singing..

Geet- koi hai kya?

As MAan is about to answer, she starts to sing again

Maan- Oh God..PAagal hai..

Geet being Geet hadn't bothered to lock...he will talk to her about it later..right now, he entered...to find her in the tub, eyes closed, covered with bubbles- smelling of lavender and looking like Aphrodite...except for the bad singing..

Geet was having so much fun she didn't notice his presence.

He slowly took off his shoes, and the tie, his shirt. He was wearing his jeans( Hoshiyarpur waali) and moved closer to her...so close she could feel extra heat near her face and her eyes flew open

Maan(whispered)- Chup
Geet was staring at the Greek-God who was her husband, unable to say anything..

They had a sizzling eye-lock and Geet was so glad she had bubbles covering her.
Saneness returned and she lowered her eyes

Geet- Maan...Apke bathroom mein paani nahi aa raha ki aap yahan aa gaye?

MAan- HAan? Geet..Tum itni zor se gaana gaa rahi thi..I could barely think!

Geet- well..I can SEE that..considering you have..

She looked up and down at him

Geet-..um..stripped...

MAan(put 1 hand on his hip)- Are you checking me out Mrs Khurana.

Geet- Get out right this instant Maan Khurana nahi toh main chhillaungi until Dadi comes

Maan- Tum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho..

Dadi had been knocking at her door, but getting no reply ahd walked in and then said

Dadi- Geet..aap kahan hai??

Maan- Dadi?!! my God...
ab main kya karu??


Ugh..I am sorry you guys..I have to leave urgently..will update more at night, I promise..xoxo

Sorry if this was boring..dont know what i was thinkng..

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was to short 😡
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up wit da update
i love reading ur update
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahahahahaah dadi hamesha ghalat time pr atee hey woo bathing together lolss

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