A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 63

loved as always and looking forward to the next update!!

dear geet
thank you 👏👏
the last scene was so funny and.......😆😉
waiting for next part😳
best of luck

just uploads it asap ........cant w8 to read further plzzzzzzzz

bdw this wz an aweusm update
thank you

Nice update

Liked the way Geet bashed that Sasha n Tasha

She really liked annoying Maan

Vicky also supports her in that

That bathroom scene was hillarious

She thought of Dadi n Dadi was there

Lets c whr Maan will hide😆😆 now paka Geet will be laughing seeing him in that state

short and sweet update...............nevertheless nice one..................

geeeeeeeeeet..........
abrupt ending😡
... update soooooooon dear cant wait... 😲

Omg i am too excited
having a serious adrenaline rush
lol
pelase update soon before i die thinking what happens next

I'm so sorry for the abrupt ending guys..had to go out for dinner..it being sat and all..wasn't on purpose...

Ok, without further ado..

Dadi- Geet...aap andar hain kya??

Maan puts his hand on Geet's lips to keep her from saying anything and whispers

MAan- Geet..please..Chup..Main kya kahunga Dadi ko..

Geet looks at him mischievously and whispers back

Geet-umhm

Maan removes his hand and she speaks

Geet- Maan..Ek toh you came here..now you don't want to be even discovered..haha..hmm..what will you do if I keep my mouth shut?

Maan- Tum is waqt shartein rakh rahi ho? You're blackmailing Maan Singh Khurana??

Geet- Haan Maan..I'm black mailing you...now tell me..nahi toh..

Maan- kya doon Geet..? What is left of me?

He stares into her eyes intensely and for a moment, Geet stops breathing..

Geet- Maan..stop it. Don't flatter me..

Maan- then tell me what do you want?

Geet- um...I want you to...

Maan doesn't understand the sudden embarrassment of Geet..her sudden shyness..

MAan- Geet?!

Geet- MAan..I want you to...stay here..

She whispers this very coyly, and his heart skitters..

He bends down, so that their faces are on level, and whispers back

Maan- you don't have to really blackmail me regarding that..I don't want to go either..

Maan thought of lightening the mood a bit because he didn't think he could control himself...he needed to get out or he would do something...ahem ahem..uncontrollable..A flood was rising in him...a flood he had to control..the intense desire this woman evoked in him. No, not only desire. Desire and respect.

Devotion- a word Maan Singh Khurana had never been on the giving end of..He had aroused the feeling in many..but he felt as if...devotion was one of the many ways he could describe to himself what he felt. There was very little he wouldn't do for her...and he wondered if he should give her time or start showing her that...

Geet- Maan..woh main...

Maan- Geet..You want me to stay? Hm...but

Maan's phone rings...

MAan- uff..kaun hai is waqt?

Geet- Mr Chopra..

Maan looks..it indeed is Mr Chopra

Maan- Yes Mr Chopra
MR C- MR Maan..Aap busy toh nahi the?

Maan- haan..woh..actually tha toh..I will call you later..

Geet has started laughing out loud...and then shows mock-anger

Geet- Maan..Are you sure Mr Chopra and aapke beechh kuchh..

Maan glares at her and walks out... but Geet holds his hand to stop him..

Maan- Geet..mera haath chhodo

Geet- Nahi chhodungi...Toh..?

MAan walks back..and says

MAan- toh..I won't be responsible for what I do..

Geet shuddered at the passion and promise in that one line and immediately let go.

Maan left...his clothes still in her bathroom

Geet decided she had had enough of bathing for one night.

She got up and wrapped herself in a towel when Maan walked back in..

Geet- MAAN!!

MAan- Woh main...kapde..

Geet- exactly Maan..maine kapde nahi pehne hue..

Maan immediately lowered his eyes and said

MAan- jaanta hoon...woh..main apne kapde bhool gaya tha..

Blushing profusely he leaves

Geet dresses at full speed into her suit and goes to Dadi to talk to her

where she finds Maan and Vicky

Vicky- aayi bhabhi..Dadima..What do I tell you..these two have been together since morning..wherever one is, the other lands up...

Vicks and Dadi wink at each other.

MAan and Geet look at each other and both start at the same time

MAan- aisa nahi..
Geet- aisa nahi...

Both Vicky and Dadi start laughing..

Dadi- But..Geet..I came looking for you in your room..where were you? MAan aap bhi apne room mein nahi the

Maan- Dadi..Geet ka toh I don't know but I came seedha to your room..right now..

And then he gives Geet a look full of mischief and challenge

Geet- Dadi, woh main bathroom mein thi...us time sunai nahi diya.. I'm so sorry..

Dadi- koi nahi...I had come to discuss about your honeymoon..

Vicky- where would you like to take Bhabhs, bhai?

MAan and Geet- 😲


LOL..okay that's it guys..I wanted to tone down the intensity a little bit..Give a romantic side to MAan...cuz show mein toh zaada nahi dikhegi for a long long time.. 😭

I'm so anxious about what's gonna happen

Okay...
and guys..is it okay if the track goes sad for sometime? not long..but some time?

LEt me know!

love to all

🤗 🤗 🤗........geet sweety....m so total fida over your writing.......lovely update........cant. wait any longer for the next one........please update asap...
loads of love ❤️ ❤️
mayuri ❤️ ❤️

hey geet so sorry for ll these late comment.......😭 😭
actually i was out of town...so couldn't be there on forums.....hope you missed my comments and me of course.....