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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana_sajan

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Awhh okay:) I'm glad you liked it!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey dear...........congratulations on ur new FF..😛 n i luvd ur character sketch.......!! Already looking fwd to the next update....
Keep rocking ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awhhh thank you Armu4eva, I'm really happy that
you liked it:) You are very sweet:D

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Posted: 15 years ago
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post part 1 soon.. and do i need to say abt PM?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice idea! Sounds exciting! Can't wait to read it!!!
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Nice intro
Plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry for the delay && this is NOT good at all... I just wrote random
things. 😳

Anyways lol- Chapter One!


She was sitting all alone at the Train Station. She has just come back from Agra *completed all her studies* and she is waiting for someone to pick her up. Time passed by, and no one was coming to collect her. she thought to herself "yeh kya?.. Kahan hai sab lokh?, Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai." A voice from behind shouted " Eh chori!" *Singing a song* She turned around, and he looked head to toe... He was just shocked, at her beauty. She was frightened. " yeh kya? Aap akeli ho?".. "Nay woh... woh mai.. woh" * She was all scared* "Yeh woh yeh woh kya"? He came forward... She went back... It constantly kept happening "She went back.. he came forward!" It came to a point where she could not go any further.

Meanwhile- He arrived, "suno".. Ji sir... Get the car ready, we will be going to dheli once my passport's have come through.. "woh sir, ghari kharab ho gayi hai.. and you do not want to travel by taxi... So the best option is if we go by Train"... Kya???? Tum pagal toh nay ho gaya? Sir par... "No, we will not travel by Train, no chance." Please sir.. that's the only option we have left!". You can go by Train, but i am NOT! *In a funny way* The announcement was being made at the airport: "Ladies and gentlemen, we are sorry to delay your waiting, but we think that everyone is struggling to get home or where ever they need to go... but we think the best way to reach your place is going by TRAIN. Sorry for the inconvenience. Oh great, excellent... now we have NO choice but to go in the Train.. Haan sir " thats what i have been explaining all that time" He replied, Chup! * In a cute way*. Go and get the Train Tickets. Ji sir! The Train began.. (Everyone was just staring at him). Yeh kya? "Why is everyone looking at me?" Sir, because it is your fist time travelling from a Train. He replied "Okay!" The train stopped, "sir chaliyeh".. Kahan chaliyeh? (People started to laugh) ... Sir, Hum Dheli pohoonch gaye hai. Ohh, phir chaliyeh.

Geet all petrified, *Mujhe koy bachayeh... Ehh!, keep your voice down.. No HERO will come to save you.. Sir, "look there, ekh adami, ekh larki ko thaang kar raha hai"... Aur mein kya karo .. Shall i save her? *In a angry tone* Ji sir.. aap us koh bachayeh! He turns around and give's him the dirty looks " Are you Mental? You seriously need your brain checking today, have you ever seen me helping a girl? Ney na, toh phir"? Sorry sir. Chaliyeh sir? " Aur ney toh kya? Hum yaha beteh gai"? Nay sir, chaliyeh.

As they were leaving,she scremed! Helpppppppppppppp! He stopped " what was that noise?" Sir, that girl who was screaming".. He thought to himself " Why did her voice touch my heart?" Sir, aap ney kuch kaha? Oh, nay toh.. Chaliyeh! He kept thinking "Woh awaaz"... He ran and went to see who that girl was.. He saw glimpses of her! He slowly opened and closed his eye's.

Precap- They both bump into each other.

Sorry about my Urdu! I have to keep practicing!
Also i am sorry for the mistakes!

Hope you like it 😳 Thanks Sadie:)


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Edited by SweetRozie123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omggg!!!! Rozieee!!! Thats Fab!!!
Loooveeeddd!!!
Dont Worry About Your Urdu/Hindi Its Perfect!!
Cant Wait What Happens Next! xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great start! Please add me to your pm list! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww that was LOVELY 😳😳! I knew it would excellent! :) Loved how he said why does this voice touch my heart! You and Sadie are very good with dialogues. please update soon! :)

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