Maneet, FanFiction_Chapter 2 updated. - Page 4

Thanks waq:)
and yeah i'll add you :P

xx

great start...

plz continue n update soon...

n plz add me to ur pm list!!!!

Thank you Anufa:)
Awhh i will:D

xx

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

I'm loving this FF 😃
Please update asap and add me to your P.M. list!

hey

great ff, very interesting
i wonder if maan will save geet now 😃
do continue soon
btw can you please add me to your pm list? thanks

Maheen xx

pl include me in ur PM list...

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey

great ff, very interesting
i wonder if maan will save geet now 😃
do continue soon
btw can you please add me to your pm list? thanks

Maheen xx

Awhhh, thank you soo much! Your comment means alot too me:D
Awhhhh!!! && of course i'll add you too my PM list- but when my friend
comes online then you'll be added because she is the one who adds people!

I'm really glad you enjoy my fan fiction:)

Take care x

Originally posted by: revav

pl include me in ur PM list...

nice FF......👏👏

reva😳

Awhh! Of course i'll add you:)
Thank you soo much for commenting and liking! I'm glad you liked it:P

Take care x

I am so sorry for the late update! This time I will try to make the conversation clearer because I know for a fact that my first chapter was confusing at who is saying what. By the way- In my first chapter when I was saying "HE" that was Maan! && when I was saying "SHE" that was Geet, lol- I think you guys already know that! But I didn't want anyone to know yet, but because it's quite confusing- I think I'll just have to use proper names.

Maan's secretary will be called Ayush, in my following chapters!

There will also be Geet's family members introduced in my chapter;

Geet's cousin- Brijj

Chapter 2

Ayush- Sir Chaliyeh... We are getting late!

Maan- Okay, chaliyeh.

As they were walking, Geet quickly ran towards Maan and hugged him from the back- (all in tears) Please help me ;'(

Maan turned around in an angry looking face and pushed Geet of her back! && Geet fell onto the floor. The Gunda from behind laughing and saying "What did I say to you? No hero will come and save you, so there is no point running onto people backs."

Ayush- Is Larki KO aap chood doh, what has the poor girl done to you? *saying to the Gunda*

Gunda- Why, should I let her go? She is so beautiful that any one can harass her. You should be thankful, it's only me and NOT my other friends, Uff if they were here, I wonder.......

Maan grabbed the gunda's collar before the Gunda's says another disgusting word out of his filthy mouth... and Maan said "Warna kya"? You have just crossed your limits and who are you to say or do anything to people... How dare you!" and pushes him onto the rail way track && starts to hit him blue and black. <<< *LOL- I know that does not make sense* "Blue and black"! Maan walked off and left the Gunda on the rail way track.

Geet- Suniyeh *hinting at Maan*

Maan just ignores Geet and carries on walking.

Geet again runs after Maan and says "Suniyeh".

Maan angrily turns around, before he could say something they bump into each other , Geet falls onto Maan and they have a cute eye lock moment*

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Meanwhile, Brijj arrives at the Train Station and is looking for Geet. He asks a group of people around the Train Station "have you seen this girl"? Everyone he asked said "no". There was this old religious man sitting on the bench and he said to Brijj "Who are you looking for"? Brijj turned around and showed the old man Geet's photo and replied "Mein is pagal larki ko dood raha ho". The old man looking around and shockingly spots Geet. The old Mans eyes open wide; Brijj says "kya hua?"... The old man still in a of shock && Brijj looks exactly were the old man eyes are looking, Brijj turn around and see's Geet with Maan *because they are still in a eye lock moment*. Brijj all embarrassed because people were taunting at what Geet and Maan were doing. Brijj quickly walked as fast as he could and claps his hands going round and round in circles; Brijj calls all the people at Train Station and raises his voice and shouts "GEET" (Geet's name all echoing)... Geet quickly gets up and is shocked to see Brijj and all the Train Station people; Brijj humiliates Geet and has an argument with Maan, which ends up in to a fight, Geet tries to stop the fight but as she gets in between them Brijj pushes Geet onto the floor. Ayush tries to get Geet up from the floor, but Brijj stops Ayush from helping Geet. Brijj gets hold on Geet and drags her to the car. Maan sorts his collar, and angrily leaves the train station.

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Geet's family members are so excited to see Geet because she is returning home after 4 years. Geet's mum... Has the arti plate ready to welcome Geet back home.

Geet's mum- The car is here.

Everyone is standing outside the house.

Precap- Everyone is shocked- and Geet gets slapped.