The Dance: Maan and Geet - Feelings

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Geet: God, I am lost, his hands around me, I can't believe it. What is happening to me? What is Maan doing? Oh god, why? Why is he holding me? "The whole world is looking at us. Maan, please stop. Sir, aap eh kya kar rahe hain?" He tightened his hands a fraction more. God, what is he doing? His breath is fanning my cheek. She tried to pull away, he tightened his hold. God, he is so angry, he is not realizing that his anger is making us the objects of everyone's curiosity and interest. The other have almost stopped dancing. He is leaving me breathless. My heart is racing, my blood is sizzling. Maan, please stop!

Maan: Oh lord, he is angry, damn her for looking so divine. Damn him, for wanting to hold her and never let her go. Damn her for not getting anything right, damn him for wanting to overlook all her mistakes. He is besotted, that is what is wrong with him. He is drunk on her beauty. I will gouge out those eyes that even look at her with desire in their eyes. She is mine. Damn her for smiling at that guy. I will kill him! He pulled her into his arms. She felt so soft to his touch. Jeez, he is a gonner. She is so right for him, she smells blissfully. His hands tightened their hold. He could feel her tremors. the beat of her racing heart and the racing pulse. Is it true that she is as effected as him? He wants to ravish her there and then. He barely could remember where he was, what he is doing. All that he knows is he wants to crush her to him and never let her go.
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bDgT thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You are my passion and pain
I am just lost in you preordained
Come what may
I shall stand by you
Like I am your light and rain
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Posted: 15 years ago
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brig.. you're on a roll girl.....šŸ‘
I detect the affects of Maaneet Mania..šŸ˜†
Lord....the dance hasn't even happened yet and we're having sleepless nights, dreaming about it when we do fall asleep..... just imagine what will happen after the dance today....thanks a lot CVs for giving us the whole weekend to recover and come back to our senses.....if it's even possible to recover from a full dose of Maaneet love...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow, u guys are diving me crazy.šŸ¤”
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Posted: 15 years ago
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For the love of God ... Bri .... what r u trying to do ????? 😲

Slay us with your sizzling post ????? šŸ˜
I'm a goner girl ā˜ŗļø..... great job ... keep it up šŸ‘šŸ¼ ... hope to read more of this soooon ..... šŸ‘
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Sizziling..šŸ‘..
OMG I wish this happened sometimes..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazingly described. I think that's exactly what Maan will feel....except he won't be able to say it. lol

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passion passion passionā¤ļø
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love love love love it!!!
Maaneet will (hopefully) will feel exactly like that!!!
hope to read something more from you soon
love,
kally
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amazing bridge! u have really wonderful writing skills!

ayesha 😳

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