Mann - the jealous lover - delicious! - Page 2

I was think on simliar lines as you! Maan seems super pissed and the reason jeaolus...thank you mr. rahul!!! CAn't wait for the passionate tango/salsa tom! Please be tom!!! BTW: love your attention to detail it's spot on!!! Now I'm even more excited!!!!

SOOOOO realistic, I can actually see this happening LOL

oye hoyeeeeee......toh aap bhi aik writer hain....kamal ki dramatization ki har yar, fida kar diya....aapkay aik scenario ko parh kar meray shaitani dimag nay endless scenarios nikaal liye hain....kudos for an extremely well written bit of your take on the scene that could happen tomorrow....how very professional of u, I thoroughly and immensely enjoyed that bit about Rahul making small talk with Geet and then dancing with her while Maan just glares and burns with jealousy unable to do anything right this very instant.......I was imagining it all in my head while reading and thinking about what sexy expressions Maan would be throwing out at the defenseless public especially to the ever so naive Geet who is always unable to understand Maan's behavior...................in my words.............it was superb, luved it.

Originally posted by: mahi0809

oye hoyeeeeee......toh aap bhi aik writer hain....kamal ki dramatization ki har yar, fida kar diya....aapkay aik scenario ko parh kar meray shaitani dimag nay endless scenarios nikaal liye hain....kudos for an extremely well written bit of your take on the scene that could happen tomorrow....how very professional of u, I thoroughly and immensely enjoyed that bit about Rahul making small talk with Geet and then dancing with her while Maan just glares and burns with jealousy unable to do anything right this very instant.......I was imagining it all in my head while reading and thinking about what sexy expressions Maan would be throwing out at the defenseless public especially to the ever so naive Geet who is always unable to understand Maan's behavior...................in my words.............it was superb, luved it.

thank you so much...
you see what Maneet do to me? i am usually not the mushy kinda person..but the precap since its been aired..has short circuited my brains into this...whooshy..romantic fool who keeps smiling at the oddest times and has started typing at lightning speed.

WOW< gr6 take, continue frther, n must say u r 2 good pen it down😊

Originally posted by: sarita21992

WOW< gr6 take, continue frther, n must say u r 2 good pen it down😊

thank you i have written some other scenes on manneet and a short story on Mann...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1422331 - short story
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1422166
do check it out and comment pls

Vruashli....can you believe aaj office mein inta busy thi...ke i haven't seen the episode yet...and i wont get home for at lest another hour.......I miss Maan an Maaneet....dying to see him seething with jealousy!!!😭😭

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Vruashli....can you believe aaj office mein inta busy thi...ke i haven't seen the episode yet...and i wont get home for at lest another hour.......I miss Maan an Maaneet....dying to see him seething with jealousy!!!😭😭

oh it was a heart stopping episode. Mann's expressions were absolutely adorable and seductive...

enjoy yourself...i have been on cloud nine..and have not written much today...

Wow, nice description. I am sure this is how it will go today.... although in between the dance Maan will lose all his anger and just enjoy having Geet in his arms. After the dance, hot angry Maan will be back.

Jealous maan ha ha ha