Maaneet Scenes M&B style! Others added 8/11 - Page 8

omg i just watched the precap and then ur stories, now i'm in heaven, they are amazing, keep writing more

Originally posted by: Sigma

omg i just watched the precap and then ur stories, now i'm in heaven, they are amazing, keep writing more

thank you i will give it my best...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hey have started already if you happen to have seen the post.... will make the changes on the background..accordingly.... will pm you...let me know..if you think what i have written so far..is anywhere to what you would think....considering i dont know you

Vrushali...is this a private post for Abs...or can I read it too.....curious to see how you build Abs scene...her characterization!!! And then I'll feel like I know a a star tooo...ABS....you the heroine...and I feel so special to know you ...atleast on IF!!! LOL!!!

Mann as he drives home had only thots of Geet..
but once he reaches home..slams his car door...brushes off the effects of the magic of Geet and walks purposefully into the house fighting internal demons.

Par...sapno ko kaun rok sakta hai...

Mann in his dreams....

Working on the project file he recalls Geets words...Garden hoga sir and bachcho ke khelneki jagaye...and he sees...Geet pregnant with a kid and two calling her mummy from behind him...and then hears Geet say..
mujhe nahi..papa ko do...and he gets angry as to who the father is and sees Geet walk to someone who has is back to him(in his mind;s eye) and wants to beat the guy up..as Geet puts her arms around him and give him a kiss on the lips....and it is Mann...

Mann wakes up with sweat and heavy breathing and wonders what was that a dream or nightmare...
geet and i married with kids...no this is not possible...take a drink of water and sits on his bed with his arms folded behind his head and thinks of all that happened tonight and resolves to keep his distance from Geet...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm the night is young yet...

Mann watches Geet till she enters her house with such look of hunger as if he would eat her right there.
Geet sensing his stare all the way up the path to her house turns and give a small smile and wave before entering her house.

As soon as Geet has gone in...Mann slumps back on the seat with a whoosh as if all his breath has left him, closes his eyes and relives the moments..he has touched her hand and hair. he can still breath her perfume in the car and inhales deeply to fill his lungs of her smell. He wonders has any woman every smelled this good? then shakes his head, starts the car and head home with Geets smell and feel enveloping him and her images filling his head.

Geet as soon as closes the door sinks to the floor, puts her head back against the door and sighs...closing her eyes...lifts her hand up as in a trance to touch her lips that are still stinging for the kiss that did not happen...she wanted it so much when he leaned so close..
her head spins...and she has tears streaming down her cheeks...what is happening to me, why after all the things that have happened to me i feel as if i am protected, cared for even when he shouts at me..i remember the soft moments, the way he smiled at me tonight..the way he kissed me...the way...he touched my lips..
god..what should i do...
then hears a door open, wipes her cheeks and gets up..to go to her room before pinky or her father sees her as she is in no state to face anyone right now.

She goes into her room and starts removing her make up and do the nightly rituals of putting the clothes away and taking something out for tomorrow as if on auto pilot while the whole time the film of what transpired tonight runs again and again in her head...
Geet sighs and brushes her hair while looking in the mirror and stops as she remembers how Mann had touched her hair..and tucked them behind her ear..slowly she touches her left ear... and tucks a strand the way Mann had done...and then shyly smiles... with brush to her lips..
Geet dreams of Mann...all night with the kiss being the highlight of the flashback and wakes up with a start to the ringing of alarm..

Another day to face...

Acha hain...ke us Khadoos ne se apne app se to admit kiya hai.....ke Geet ka jadoo us per chaal gaya!!! Poor Geet....she was brought to tears thinking about a kiss that she wanted but didn't happen....man so like a girl....I tell you....why are we made this way....and men so different???

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Vrushali...is this a private post for Abs...or can I read it too.....curious to see how you build Abs scene...her characterization!!! And then I'll feel like I know a a star tooo...ABS....you the heroine...and I feel so special to know you ...atleast on IF!!! LOL!!!

oh read on...her life...as we know it is going to change..so to speak.... i shall try my best to put the spotlight on her and you guys...be the adoring fans of our new IF heroine....

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Mann as he drives home had only thots of Geet..
but once he reaches home..slams his car door...brushes off the effects of the magic of Geet and walks purposefully into the house fighting internal demons.

Par...sapno ko kaun rok sakta hai...

Mann in his dreams....

Working on the project file he recalls Geets words...Garden hoga sir and bachcho ke khelneki jagaye...and he sees...Geet pregnant with a kid and two calling her mummy from behind him...and then hears Geet say..
mujhe nahi..papa ko do...and he gets angry as to who the father is and sees Geet walk to someone who has is back to him(in his mind;s eye) and wants to beat the guy up..as Geet puts her arms around him and give him a kiss on the lips....and it is Mann...

Mann wakes up with sweat and heavy breathing and wonders what was that a dream or nightmare...
geet and i married with kids...no this is not possible...take a drink of water and sits on his bed with his arms folded behind his head and thinks of all that happened tonight and resolves to keep his distance from Geet...

Yeh right bachoo....I'd like to see this happen...distance from Geet.....one look at her and one memory of those lips.....all that resolve will go right out the proverbial WINDOW!!!😆😆

*gasps* *faints* this stuff is waaaayyyy more hotter n sexier dan mills & boons. M not gonna sleep tonite! Maneet r haunting my dreams too. *faints again*

good job... Waiting for next scene :)

~Krati~

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oh read on...her life...as we know it is going to change..so to speak.... i shall try my best to put the spotlight on her and you guys...be the adoring fans of our new IF heroine....

Will it be in this same thread or a separate thread??? Dying to read it...Abs...ready to be a heroine???Who bhi maan ki saath....oh man...I thought I could handle this....but I am jealous now......Vrushali....will you include me some little part....maybe Abs's friend from America....you know the NRI types...totally opposite the real me???😆