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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rushtrip



yep.... i agree..it will be fun...i shall..do a separate post for you Two....Maan and Abs...
if i understand..you are an engineer....a software..kind? so that i can get the basics...for the background...nothing..else..there...

i want to ensure..i give a plausible meeting to the two of you...




Yup, computer engg. from the same university where Maan's Dadi studied (McGill University).
Born brought up in Canada, yet who knows her heritage very well. You know someone who will blend in India, and no one is able to say that she is from outside. Basically the total opposite of Sasha-Tasha!

The type who can be a double jerk to someone, but otherwise a super sweet person. One who can have a total yet controlled rage when someone tries to demean her, but one who is a thorough professional! Hmm is that enough? PM me if you want need more info!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i loved all the scenes !👏

so romantic . continue soon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
uffe m in dreamland after todays precap..
yaar...how far does 2mrw look
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: rushtrip



even i donno...but hope so....today's scenes are pure impromptu stuff...everything off the bat...
but..give me some ideas and sure will work on those
i like the nectar part....yummm transports me to write another..scene...sigh.,,,,,dreaming already.



Vrusahli....don't forget to include the reaction of the rest of the staff....Pinky, Aadi, Shasha, Tasha...etc....they were witness to the tasting scene....wanna see Shasha see more Maneet close moments and seethe with jealousy!!! Can't stand that skimly dresser!!! Wanna see if how Maan will react to a the cold shoulder that Geet will give him...cause she's still upset that all he cares about is the project...and not what experienced together last night!!!

Sorry my ideas are kinda dry...not as talented as you!!!!😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I think maybe Mr. chopra bring them to dance floor and tell them to dance together and he leaves...then geet just walk away and leave maan standing. Maan feel rejected and he drags her to dance floor again and start dancing..
I want to see jealous maan...he looks so angry in precap...I hope he smiles...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmm the night is young yet...

Mann watches Geet till she enters her house with such look of hunger as if he would eat her right there.
Geet sensing his stare all the way up the path to her house turns and give a small smile and wave before entering her house.

As soon as Geet has gone in...Mann slumps back on the seat with a whoosh as if all his breath has left him, closes his eyes and relives the moments..he has touched her hand and hair. he can still breath her perfume in the car and inhales deeply to fill his lungs of her smell. He wonders has any woman every smelled this good? then shakes his head, starts the car and head home with Geets smell and feel enveloping him and her images filling his head.

Geet as soon as closes the door sinks to the floor, puts her head back against the door and sighs...closing her eyes...lifts her hand up as in a trance to touch her lips that are still stinging for the kiss that did not happen...she wanted it so much when he leaned so close..
her head spins...and she has tears streaming down her cheeks...what is happening to me, why after all the things that have happened to me i feel as if i am protected, cared for even when he shouts at me..i remember the soft moments, the way he smiled at me tonight..the way he kissed me...the way...he touched my lips..
god..what should i do...
then hears a door open, wipes her cheeks and gets up..to go to her room before pinky or her father sees her as she is in no state to face anyone right now.

She goes into her room and starts removing her make up and do the nightly rituals of putting the clothes away and taking something out for tomorrow as if on auto pilot while the whole time the film of what transpired tonight runs again and again in her head...
Geet sighs and brushes her hair while looking in the mirror and stops as she remembers how Mann had touched her hair..and tucked them behind her ear..slowly she touches her left ear... and tucks a strand the way Mann had done...and then shyly smiles... with brush to her lips..
Geet dreams of Mann...all night with the kiss being the highlight of the flashback and wakes up with a start to the ringing of alarm..

Another day to face...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583



Yup, computer engg. from the same university where Maan's Dadi studied (McGill University).
Born brought up in Canada, yet who knows her heritage very well. You know someone who will blend in India, and no one is able to say that she is from outside. Basically the total opposite of Sasha-Tasha!

The type who can be a double jerk to someone, but otherwise a super sweet person. One who can have a total yet controlled rage when someone tries to demean her, but one who is a thorough professional! Hmm is that enough? PM me if you want need more info!



hey have started already if you happen to have seen the post.... will make the changes on the background..accordingly.... will pm you...let me know..if you think what i have written so far..is anywhere to what you would think....considering i dont know you
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosha

i loved all the scenes !👏

so romantic . continue soon😊


thank you. have added one more...
i am on a roll it seems..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: mayurworld

I think maybe Mr. chopra bring them to dance floor and tell them to dance together and he leaves...then geet just walk away and leave maan standing. Maan feel rejected and he drags her to dance floor again and start dancing..

I want to see jealous maan...he looks so angry in precap...I hope he smiles...



i am sure he will may be after they bump their heads when he pulls her...no no...i dont want to spoil a romantic interlude...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKANargis



Vrusahli....don't forget to include the reaction of the rest of the staff....Pinky, Aadi, Shasha, Tasha...etc....they were witness to the tasting scene....wanna see Shasha see more Maneet close moments and seethe with jealousy!!! Can't stand that skimly dresser!!! Wanna see if how Maan will react to a the cold shoulder that Geet will give him...cause she's still upset that all he cares about is the project...and not what experienced together last night!!!

Sorry my ideas are kinda dry...not as talented as you!!!!😕



hey every bit helps...
i am a little tunnel visioned..i did not include others much....will do so for the next day...scene..

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