Nice update pallo!!!!!!!Can't wait for the next part.
And a very happy friendship day to you!🤗
Farzu happy friendship day gal!
thanks for commenting
luv ya
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Nice update pallo!!!!!!!Can't wait for the next part.
And a very happy friendship day to you!🤗
Originally posted by: Blueberry_07
Heya Pallo! Really hope your PC can function properly soon! Just take your time to update...and we'll be waiting..:D Happy Friendship Day to ya as well!..🤗 And what a treat! I read both parts..and this is deffo more Palloish..😉...LOVED it! The fact that Maan remained in that pink kurta..throughout the dhaba scene..was so cute!..Hahah..and that Sardar jee...oh bless him for giving just one lassi...😳😆....Seems like Maan is feeling smth as well....finally we got abit of sign..though it is very mild..😆..
Can't wait to read how he's gonna face his mates, in that outfit, back at the camp..😆..That'll be fun to read! 😛
tum kuch bhi likho.humein pasand aa jata hai...
the edited version was very good...........................i guess the cafe owner is really a moron.............stupid guy...........thnxxxx deari will pray tht ur PC will recover soon..thnxxxx once againgr8 updatereva
awesome update!! can't wait for the next part!
and happy friendship day to you too 😊
i hope your pc gets better soon!!
Fabulous as always Pallo!
Good thing you edited! This had some real fun about it. The word 'dhaba' has become nostalgic! Haaye.... Do I see Maan developing feelings unconciously?
Loved the edited version...
Must say that u are an awesome writer....
Can't wait for the next part...
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