'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 82

Originally posted by: Tressa

hi pallo

Nice update.... wid nice dialogues.... & rocking chemistry....

thanks for the treat.... waiting for d next one....

thanks yaar
luv ya

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Loved the update! Enjoyed every bit of it especially Maaneets bickering and how Geet kept on blushing while Maan kept on flirting.

And Geet helping out the guy... Aman? Throwing her sandal lol that was such a classic Geet act!

Cant wait to read more, do update soon.

Anjali

Hi anjali thanks a lot for commenting!
Am stuck ma PC CRASHED!!!!
Unable to update

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Part 18:

Since there weren't many funny dialogues, I'm going to skip this section for this part. Sorry.

One dialogue I really thought was cute was "Aur haan, maine hamesha socha tha ki jab pyaar hoga toh woh ladka mere pipeline pe chad ke khidki se aayega mujhe milne ke liye....Yahaan toh kuch aur hi ho gaya..." she giggled."

Another one which really touched me was ""Geet mujhse mat poonch. Aur mujhe batana bhi mat tu kahaan jaa rahi hain. Kyunki agar mujhe bata diya toh main kabhi bhi jasbaat mein aakar Daarji ko bata doonga...Isiliye...tu chali jaa yahaan se..." he stood up with full force."

Comments:

I liked how Brij popped outta nowhere and I liked how he was being so supporting. He's such a wonderful brother. With such a heavy heart, he's letting his sister runaway. That's really sweet of him. NT makes my blood boil. Can you teach her a lesson? Put cow dung on her or something. That would teach her a lesson. Geet is pretty brave. I loved how she climbed up the pipeline and wanted to say goodbye to Maan. The cutest thing in this entire part was when Brij told Geet to runaway.

Part 19:

Dialogues:

"Aman...stop checking out the girl. A thief is running away with your luggage and you are busy letting your eyes run over some chick...Preposterous!" he thought to himself.

"Arre kya woh sacchi mein wahaan baitha hua hain?" she looked questioningly at Aman who was busy staring up at Maan.

Geet looked at the guy standing next to her "Chal phut le khote....Aur thank you bolna practice kar "

She turned a hue of pink...she could him pressing against her. "I love it when you go that colour but Geet those are my keys...not uhm uhm..." he joked. ' I couldn't stop laughing for a couple of minutes. I didn't really expect that comment from Maan. I also love how Maan knows exactly what Geet was thinking.

"I swear Maan...I will murder you with this pink colour!" she hissed.

"Agar Pyaar dikhana tha toh aise dikhaati..." Maan recovered from the punch and pulled her close sealing her cheek with a burning kiss. Geet stood there numbed to the toe-nail.

On the hanger hook was a pair of kurta and pyjama...XL size, baby pink in colour with cartoon flowers!!!!!

Comments:

They are sooooo meant to be together. Seriously, their married life would be soo fun. Anyways, getting to this part. I kinda expected Maan to follow her yet at the same time, I was shocked that he was sitting on top of the bus. When you wrote that we would be introduced to new characters, I thought and the beginning of this part, I thought that Aman would be her new love-interest. Way to keep me on my toes. I like the fact that Maan keeps on kinda bringing up the point that she loves him but he's always going to protect her. He also keeps on clarifying the fact that he doesn't lover her at the moment. I have a feeling this journey is going to be quite interesting. I absolutely love this banter. They're always at such ease with each other even when the situation is kinda dire. Want to read the next chapter of their journey. Update soon, pretty please?

Note: Sorry about replying soo late. I read part 18 when you sent the PM but I was being a lazy butt and kept trying to wait until the next day to comment. My b :/

Yaar want to reply real long to ur comment but ma PC carshed and am at a cafe where they r charging like mad!!!!
Thanks neways...
will try ma level best to update soon😃

oh man that suckz Pallo di. i know how u feel. stupid machines.

Originally posted by: _Monu_

pallo wonderful updt n as always too funny!!....n also rocking ending

can image maan's face when he saw those clothes..lol

now they r in the army base..wow..

cant wait 4 next

cont soon

love yaaa

mmmuuaahh

Thanks dear
luv ya

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omggg wowww that was an amazing update

i loved it!!!!

cnt wait for more

continue soon

thanks shaz
luv ya
PC CRASHED it is gonna take time to update...
sheeessshhhhhhh!!!!!

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

yeh lo. koi update nahi? not even a short one? yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hain Pallo di? Main subha se ab tak IF pe nahi aya . socha tha ki saara din bahar ghumke ghar aake tum logo ki updates parhoongi par tumne toh update ki hi nahi. Very bad.

YAAR PC CRASHED !!!!! I feel handicapped!!!!
will try ma level best to update soon
Plz understand!😭

Originally posted by: aqsa2006

TOO GOOD!!

Haha 'runaway bride'.😆..soo funny when Geet punched Maan, he didn't see that coming..haha

Can't wait for the next part..😊

ps..thnx for the pm

thnks 4 commenting
luv ya

It's ok pallo di. i understand.