'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Priya

@-Priyaa-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#801

yeh lo. koi update nahi? not even a short one? yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hain Pallo di? Main subha se ab tak IF pe nahi aya . socha tha ki saara din bahar ghumke ghar aake tum logo ki updates parhoongi par tumne toh update ki hi nahi. Very bad.

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omera

@maryam91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#802

TOO GOOD!!

Haha 'runaway bride'.😆..soo funny when Geet punched Maan, he didn't see that coming..haha

Can't wait for the next part..😊

ps..thnx for the pm

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 15 years ago

#803

what the heck i love this Geet & Maan 😳😳😳........they r hu tu tu players 🤣 srry gal me commenting so late 🤗thnk u4r such fab update jus luv thw way u penned down the dialouges😳😳😳

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Mariam Ahmed

@sweet-and-cute

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Posted: 15 years ago

#804

great going........update sooon......i am waiting....

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Heena

@wintersunshine

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#805

😭😭😭😭😭😭 Tum bin jeeya jaaye kaise? Kaise jeeya jaaye tum bin oh Pallo ke FF....😆😆😆 i know that was HORRIBLE lekin I am really missing your MAANEET version... jaldi aao, update karo, we are dying here to comment.... you knw u said my comments were bad for your blusing control, lekin yaar your FF toh kya baataoon... I am so addicted that even during class am checking for updates😆😆😆😆 O Mere Khuda, Dil hua fida, na jaane yeh kab hua.... Pallo Ke FF ne mere dil pe kabza kar liya🤣🤣

🤗srry for being so greedy........ :D

Heena

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Tum yahaan? Kaise ? Kab? Kyun?" she blabbered and sat down next to him on the bus roof top.

"Bataoonga...magar first...Let me salute you. That was the most accurate slipper-shot I have seen in my life!" he grinned at her and lifted his hand to a voluntary salute to her for the first time.

"Geet, Main tumse pyaar nahi karta...toh yeh toh nahi hua ki I don't care for you. I

"Oh the runaway bride...wow!!!" Maan smiled.
He was fully wet. "Geet tum kar kya rahi ho?" he yelled.

"Mogambo.........Happy dressing!" he heard her tinkling voice and her footsteps exiting the bathroom.

Thanks yaar I freaking love these smileys!!!!
Love ya lots
yaar ....I wanna comment long but kya karoon? PC CARSHED
Ta Da Kaboom!!!!
I AM DEAD MEAT NOW!!!

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: tes_v1
Oooooh!

I'm sooo loving Geet's treatment of Maan! 🤣 Poor dude! 😆

Ahem.. Ahem... Maan's getting too naughty... First with the key thing and then kissing Geet! 🤣

Geet is in full revenge mode! 😆

Btw, wat's wid you? Delayed and short updates? 😔

PC CRASHED YAAR TIA!!!!

UPDATE KAISE KAROON?

Thanks for commenting!
can't even reply back properly...am at a internet centre...where they r charging like mad!!!!

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07
Pallo!! I love this part!! It's just so much of fun! 🤣...

Enjoyed every single bit of it..just wished that it was longer!!..Love how Geet blushes at every single touch of Maan's...and Maan...HAHAH! Love this naughty, flirtatious side of him...That kiss on the cheeks was SWEEEET!...Arre yaar just one question...bus jerks and she flies ON TOP of him..? 🤣...Nice one there! 😆...

You've got really good dialogues in there! Esp those lines consisting of Maan and Geet bickering! TOO good!

The starting bit with he throwing her slippers at the thief, classic Geet act! 😆

Gosh you have to update soon! Don't keep me waiting! I would love to read Maan coming out in that pink PJ..😆

Haila Vini u missed d keys bit😉
Thanks yaar for commenting my darned PC crashed....I think that stupid HOTPIX POLL TOOK TOLL!!!
Neways can't even reply lon...they r charging like crazt per minute here!!!😆