Part 18:
Since there weren't many funny dialogues, I'm going to skip this section for this part. Sorry.
One dialogue I really thought was cute was "Aur haan, maine hamesha socha tha ki jab pyaar hoga toh woh ladka mere pipeline pe chad ke khidki se aayega mujhe milne ke liye....Yahaan toh kuch aur hi ho gaya..." she giggled."
Another one which really touched me was ""Geet mujhse mat poonch. Aur mujhe batana bhi mat tu kahaan jaa rahi hain. Kyunki agar mujhe bata diya toh main kabhi bhi jasbaat mein aakar Daarji ko bata doonga...Isiliye...tu chali jaa yahaan se..." he stood up with full force."
Comments:
I liked how Brij popped outta nowhere and I liked how he was being so supporting. He's such a wonderful brother. With such a heavy heart, he's letting his sister runaway. That's really sweet of him. NT makes my blood boil. Can you teach her a lesson? Put cow dung on her or something. That would teach her a lesson. Geet is pretty brave. I loved how she climbed up the pipeline and wanted to say goodbye to Maan. The cutest thing in this entire part was when Brij told Geet to runaway.
Part 19:
Dialogues:
"Aman...stop checking out the girl. A thief is running away with your luggage and you are busy letting your eyes run over some chick...Preposterous!" he thought to himself.
"Arre kya woh sacchi mein wahaan baitha hua hain?" she looked questioningly at Aman who was busy staring up at Maan.
Geet looked at the guy standing next to her "Chal phut le khote....Aur thank you bolna practice kar "
She turned a hue of pink...she could him pressing against her. "I love it when you go that colour but Geet those are my keys...not uhm uhm..." he joked. ' I couldn't stop laughing for a couple of minutes. I didn't really expect that comment from Maan. I also love how Maan knows exactly what Geet was thinking.
"I swear Maan...I will murder you with this pink colour!" she hissed.
"Agar Pyaar dikhana tha toh aise dikhaati..." Maan recovered from the punch and pulled her close sealing her cheek with a burning kiss. Geet stood there numbed to the toe-nail.
On the hanger hook was a pair of kurta and pyjama...XL size, baby pink in colour with cartoon flowers!!!!!
Comments:
They are sooooo meant to be together. Seriously, their married life would be soo fun. Anyways, getting to this part. I kinda expected Maan to follow her yet at the same time, I was shocked that he was sitting on top of the bus. When you wrote that we would be introduced to new characters, I thought and the beginning of this part, I thought that Aman would be her new love-interest. Way to keep me on my toes. I like the fact that Maan keeps on kinda bringing up the point that she loves him but he's always going to protect her. He also keeps on clarifying the fact that he doesn't lover her at the moment. I have a feeling this journey is going to be quite interesting. I absolutely love this banter. They're always at such ease with each other even when the situation is kinda dire. Want to read the next chapter of their journey. Update soon, pretty please?
Note: Sorry about replying soo late. I read part 18 when you sent the PM but I was being a lazy butt and kept trying to wait until the next day to comment. My b :/
Edited by Nirali92 - 15 years ago
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