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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
i loved it
esp the diary bit
brilliant...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
aww such a cute part loved it=)
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#63
loved the update relllly cute plz write more sooon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! waiting for completing my oder fffs
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 11: Picnic

It is a beautiful day and the Nanda family and the Godbole family were having a picinic in a resort in Lonawla. The resorts name was Golden Heaven Resorts. Kanya was sharing a room with Pooja.This was a scene in their room.

Kanya- Di yeh sab aapke vajah se mumkin hain.

Pooja- Oh Kanya!

Kanya- Sachmuch! Ranbir and I are in love! I never though we could be together! I always thought you would be mad at me because Ranbir loved me and all. So to make you happy I decided to marry Ayaan. I hoped that I would fall in love with him in future!

Pooja- Good girl!

Kanya- Pooja di? How did you find out about my feelings?

Pooja- Please don't be mad at me okay?

Kanya- Okay….Well that depends upon what you have to say anyways!

Pooja- I read it from your diary!

Kanya- Whattttttttttttttt? Aapko main chodoongi nahin!

Pooja- You told me you wont get mad!

Kanya- I am not! Actually I am! What else do you expect from me? You read my personal diary?

Pooja- Yupsy!

Kanya- I should have written in my CompDiary!

Pooja- CompDiary?

Kanya- Yes it is a new diary feature! It is very private and has some cool features to prevent people like you from reading my diary!

Pooja- Anyways good that I read it! Otherwise you and Ranbir "jiju" wouldn't have united!

Kanya- Whatever!

Just then Ranbir comes into the room with Aditya.

Ranbir- Hello Kanya! Hey Pooj!

Kanya- Hey! Hi Aditya Bhaiyyah!

Pooja- Hey guys! I mean sirs!

Aditya- Hello!

Ranbir- Kanya so lets go an enjoy this delightful visit!

Pooja- You are right! Lets go!

Kanya- Ttheeke- ttheeke! I will come!

Ranbir- That's wonderful!

Aditya- Yeah!

Kanya- I will just change my dressing!

Aditya- Sure! But you guys come soon!

Saying so Ranbir and Aditya go out of the room. Kanya changes into a white slip dress and leaves her hair open while Pooja slips into a blue frock! Then they go outside and Kanya runs and leaps into Ranbir's arms.

Kanya- Main kaisi dikh rahi hoon?

Ranbir- Bahut kharab!

Kanya- Tum toh bhoot jaise dkh rahe ho!

Ranbir- Accha baba mazak kar raha hoon! You are looking fabulous!

Kanya- I knew it! Tum toh mere baare main kuch bura bol bhi nahin sakte!

Ranbir- Accha?

Kanya- Haan accha!

Ranbir- Ttheek hain! When I saw you first I thought that you were a bhoot! You looked so horrid that I felt like vomiting! You voice is like demons!

Kanya- Accha?????? Then how did you fall for my masooom chehra?

Ranbir- Your heart is so beautiful!

Kanya- Thank you for the compliment but ab main tumhe nahin chodoongi Ranbir Nanda!

Saying so she starts chasing him and once she catches up with him she hits him. Then she gets hold of her hands and hugs her.

Ranbir- Kanya main mazak kar raha tha! Forgive me baba!

Kanya- Okay- Okay! I forgave you!

Then Ranbir bends to kiss her and was about to touch her lips when she moved her face away.

Ranbir- Kanya!!!! Please! I wanna kiss you!

Kanya- Ranbir you know my policy! No kissing before marriage!

Ranbir- Kanya but you kissed Ayaan that day!

Kanya- But that was out of emergency!

Ranbir- Kanya please please please please! Once time pleeeeeaaaaaasssssssee!!

Kanya- Ranbir no means no!!!

Ranbir- Okay haar maan liya! Tumhare saamne toh koi bhi ladka haar jaata hain!

Kanya- Accha? Magar aisa kyun?

Ranbir- You are so beautiful my darling!

Kanya- Thank you for the compliment but thanks but no thanks I WONT KISS YOU!

Ranbir- Okay! Chalo! Sab hamara intazaar kar rahe honge!

Kanya- Chalo lets go!

So they go over to where the rest of the family was. Then all of them play around and swim and stuff. It was a delightful sight! Then after an hour or so they all settled down to have lunch.

Mallika- Kanya tum vegetarian ho?

Kanya- Ji mama!

Mallika- Toh yeh do baskets main sirf vegetarian food hain. Tumhare family aur tumhare liye.

Kanya- Thank you! That is very nice of you!

Mallika- Toh Ranbir tum kaunsa meat khaaoge?

Ranbir- Jee mama thank you par main abse fullto vegetarian khaavunga!

Kanya- Ranbir magar--

Ranbir- Vegetarian is very good for health!

Reva- I cant believe this! Kanya this is so mean!

Kanya- Matlab aunty?

Reva- You know it was only two weeks ago that I was delighted about you being my bahu! Now I am heart-broken!

Kanya- Aunty actually--

A voice- Mrs. Reva Nanda! Don't worry you will get a better bahu than Kanya Godbole!

Reva- Who is that?

Voice- Should I show myself?

Reva- Of course!

Voice- Well I have been crazy about Ayaan since ages!

Reva- Show yourself please!

ENTER: Shanaya Kher. Hip beautiful and stylish. A very sweet person but a bit too whiny. She is Kanya's and Ayaan's college mate!

Ayaan- Oh no Shanaya!

Reva- Shanaya? You mean Shanaya Kher?

Shanaya- Yes!

Reva- Please sit down here!

Ayaan- What are you doing here?

Shanaya- I am here to marry you!

Ayaan- No ways! Go away!

Kanya- Hey Shan!

Shanaya- Hey Kanya!

So then they all talk and relieve old college memories. Then Kanya looks at Ranbir and feeds him on some french fries. Just then----just then-----------

BOOOM BOOOM BOOOM!

It was a gunshot which was aimed at Kanya. Luckily Ranbir had dropped the french fries and she had bent to take it so the bullet missed her and hit a tree. Everyone was shocked!!! No one could believe what had happened! Kanya huddles into Ranbir's arms and the rest of them especially Pammi was in tears.

Pammi- Hamare beti ko kaun maarna chahega?

Pooja- Mama yeh kya huwa?

Anand- Kanya tum ttheek ho na?

Ranbir- Baby are you alright?

Reva- Kanya?

Ayaan- Kanya are you fine?

Shanaya- Kans? You fine?

Mallika- Bahu! Are you fine?

Kanya- Yes yes I am fine!

Anand- But why would someone want to kill Kanya?

Ranbir- I don't know. Now lets all go from here and report this to the police. Then I will tell them to have the houses under police supervision.

Everyone agreed to Ranbir. The ride home was very silent and Kanya was shocked and couldn't say a thing. Pammi was in tears.

END OF PART 11

Pre-cap- Police is informed about this and the investigation starts.

Hope you guys liked this funny, romantic and scary update!

NIDHEYA

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Wow!!! Great update!! I wonder where you are taking us with this story.🤓😊 That was totally unexpected!!!😲 I hope it's not Pooja trying to kill Kanya.🤢 Please continue soon.😃 Thanks.
Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
i thuink it is poojas or ayans plan
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
nice loved the update plz write more soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
omggggggggggggg
dat was amazing
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
i loved it...
pls continue soon

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