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Posted: 17 years ago
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so any ideas for da nexxt updates?
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my microsoft word isnt working so i find it diff to update. sumthngs rong wid da thingi

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nxt time i'll update i thru da net so it wont be tht big!
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Part 10: Functions

Kanya is sitting in her house getting ready for the sangeet function. She is wearing a blue salwar and her hairstyle is her hair left loose. She is looking very beautiful. She looks at the mirror and smiles. Pooja enters the room.

Pooja- Kanya arent you rushing up things??

Kanya- Of course not di! I am feeling very happy and excited for my new life that will start day after tomorrow.

Pooja- I feel very happy for you. At least you are getting married to someone who loves you. Just think about me! Ranbir doesn't even love me.

Kanya- Don't worry di! I'm sure he will fall for you if you try real hard.

Pooja- Hope so. Well did you hear? Harpal is very serious about Aarushi!!!

Kanya- Really? That's wonderful!!!!

Pooja- You are looking like an angel.

Kanya- Thank you.

Pooja- Anytime.

They are silent for a very long time. Both the sisters have tears in their eyes.

Kanya- Kya huwa?

Pooja- Ab tum bhi chale jaaoge toh main ghar pe akeli hongi na?

Kanya- Harpal bhaiyyah honge na??

Pooja- Arre woh toh Aarushi Nanda ke pyaar main pagal hain na.

Kanya- No problem. December main toh aapki bhi shaadi hogi phir hum phir se saath honge na? It's just a matter of time!!!

Pooja- You are right! But I will miss you a lot. Tumhare bina yeh ghar bahut hi adhoora hoga.

Kanya- Di please don't make me so emotional huh!

Pooja- I am making you emoitional?? You are the emotional person in our family!!!

Kanya- Okay okay. Maan liya ki galti ki! Ab please maaf karo!!!

Pooja- Maaf kar diya baba. Acha chalo. Sab tumhare intazaar kar rahe honge. After all we have to leave for Nanda mansion soon nah??

Kanya- Haan di aa rahi hoon. Do minat ruko. Bathroom jake aati hoon.

Pooja- Okay. But come soon huh.

Kanya- Ttheeke.

Pooja goes away and Kanya goes into the bathroom.

SCENE SHIFTS TO THE NANDA MANSION

Ranbir is sadly looking at the mirror while Aditya enters the room.

Aditya- Kya huwa bhai?

Ranbir (suddenly looking at Aditya)- Kuchh nahin.

Aditya- Kanya ke baare mein such rahe ho na?

Ranbir- Uske baare mein kyun sochu bhala main?

Aditya- Kyunki tu usse pyaar karte hain!

Ranbir- Main pyaar'..Why??? Main Kanya se kyun pyaar karoonga? Woh toh mere saath natak kar rahi thi pyaar ki. Sabke saamne she told me she loved me and then the next moment she told me she was acting???? What does she think of herself? She's such a''..such a'''''.

Aditya- Please koi gandi gaali mat de use. Bichari. Mujhe toh lagta hain ki woh bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hain??

Ranbir- Aditya bhaiyyah now you have lost it!!!! This is not a film please get it into your thick, fat filmy head that this is not a film!!!! In a film you get the one you love even when she loves someone else!!!!! Kanya loves Ayaan just get it!!!! She loves Ayaan not me!! Cant you see how much they are in love???? Cant you see?? Are you blind??

Aditya- Mere bhai'..

Ranbir- Mere bhai my foot! Just get out of the room! Please get out. I am not in the mood to talk to anyone.

Aditya- Ranbir'.

Ranbir- JUST GET OUT!! ARE YOU DEAF??? CANT U UNDERSTAND HINDI YA ENGLISH??

Aditya- Okay.

Aditya goes out of the room upset. Ranbir is fuming and is boiling. He feels like taking something and throwing something and break it. He sees a can of coke and opens it and pours it over his head. Outside Ayaan hears the whole conversation and goes inside his room, locks it and calls up Kanya.

Ayaan- Hello Kanya?

Kanya- Hello Ayaan!!!! Kya baath hain? Mujhe miss kar rahe the loverboy?

Ayaan- Kanya I cant marry you??

Kanya- Are you crazy? Kya huwa??

Ayaan- Kanya chachu tumse bahut pyaar karte hain.

Kanya- Please don't bring that topic up again.

Ayaan- Kanya please understand. Today he fought with Aditya chachu. They have been best buddies since ages!! They have never fought! Today he yelled at Adi chachu just coz he pointed out that you may be in love with him.

Kanya- Ayaan please.

Ayaan- Kanya tum chachu se pyaar karte ho na?

Kanya- Of course not!

Ayaan- Kanya please don't lie to me.

Kanya- I am not lying Ayaan.

Ayaan- Kanya please. You can lie to everyone but you cant lie to me. I know you since we were in KG!!

Kanya- So-what-?

Ayaan- See the way you are stammering itself says that you love chahcu!!

Kanya- Stammering- I-am-not-stammering.

Ayaan- Kanya you stammer only when you are lying!

Kanya- Ayaan please don't.

Ayaan- Tell me you love chachu na?? Tell tell tell na!!!!

Kanya- Ayaan'

Ayaan- Tell!!

Kanya- OkayIloveRanbir.

Ayaan- Kya kaha? I didn't catch you!

Kanya- Iloveranbir.

Ayaan- Slowly bata na!

Kanya- I love Ranbir.

Ayaan- I knew it!!!!

Kanya- Ayaan please but I wont marry him.

Ayaan- Lekin kyun??

Kanya- Di. Pooja di. I cant betray my sister.

Ayaan- But by doing that you will be betraying the man you love right? And after all'..

Kanya- Ayaan please. Don't force me. You are my best friend. Don't cheat on me huh! Okay okay rakthi hoon. I will see you in a half an hour.

Ayaan- Okay bye. See you!

They both keep the phone down.

SCENE SHIFTS TO THE GODBOLE HOUSE

Kanya and her family get into the bus and they go the Nanda Mansion.

THEY ARRIVE AT NANDA MANSION

Ranbir, Aditya and Siddharth along with Reva, Mallika and Aastha are there to welcome Kanya and her family. Reva runs to Kanya and gives her a hug.

Reva- Kanya you are the best bahu anyone can have!! Laakhon main ek ho tum!

Mallika goes and pulls Pooja near her.

Mallika- Laakhon main ek nahin do!!! Pooja bhi sabse best bahu hain.

Ranbir- Will you all please stop arguing and go inside???

Mallika- Ranbir beta tujhe kya ho gaya?

Ranbir- Mom please.

He goes inside and Kanya looks and feels guilty.

Reva- Guys please come inside. Lets start the mehndi function.

They go inside and they have the sangeet function. After the function they go home and sleep.

NEXT DAY AT NANDA MANSION DURING THE MEHNDI FUNCTION

Kanya is looking very beautiful in a red lehnga. She is looking more like a pari than ever. She is also looking very happy. Pooja is at the Godbole house looking at some of Kanya's stuff and she sees her diary. She opens an entry and reads it

DIARY ENTRY

23rd August

Dear Diary,

Kya batawu? Aaj kaise ajeeb din tha. Aaj mujhe Ranbir Nanda se phone aaya ki woh chahta hain ki main uske agle serial ki heroine banu. Jab maine mana kiya toh unhone mujhe Ashoka Palace bulaya. Waha toh poora andhera tha. Achanak se lights on huwa or main dekha toh har jagah meri hi meri tasveer thi. Main sochi ki serial mein mujhe laane ke liye yeh koyi blackmailing formula hoga. Phir Ranbir mere paas aakar on his kneels unhone mujhe bataya ki woh mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain aur unhone mujhe shaadi ke liye propose bhi kiya. Bahut hi romantic proposal tha. Par main Pooja di ko dhoka nahin de sakti toh maine use mana kiya aur waapas lautne par sabko bataya ki main Ayaan se pyaar karti hoon. Ayaan mere saath shaadi karne ke liye raazi hain. Kal woh log mujhe dekhne yahaan aane waale hain.

Tumhari,

Kanya

Pooja is shocked when she reads the entry. She wanted to read stuff about the Ayaan-Kanya relationship but she was really shocked. Now she reads the next days diary entry.

24th August

Dear Diary,

Aaj shayad meri zindagi ka sabse dukhbhari din tha. Aaj Ayaan, Reva Aunty, Ranbir aur saare ki saare Nanda family mujhe dekhne yahaan aaye the. Jab main sabko juice pila raha tha tab Ranbir ne mujhse I love you forever and'.kuch kehne waale the jab maine juice Ayaan ko de diya tha. Phir baad main sab ke zabardasti ke wajah se main aur Ayaan baat karne ke liye kamre main chali gayi. Wahaan main use thanks bol rahi thi jab Ranbir andar aa gaya. Tab Ayaan ne mujhe kiss kiya. Us kiss main koi emotion tha hi nahin. Phir jab poora Nanda parivaar ghar ja raha tha maine Ranbir ke aankhon mein aaso dekhi. Yeh mujhse raha nahi gaya. Main andar bhag gayi aur rona shuru kiya. Tab mujhe yeh ehsaas huwa ki main bhi Ranbir se pyaar karti hoon. Bahut karti pyaar us se main. I love him too much diary. Par main Pooja di ke liye yeh sacrifice kar rahi hoon.

Tumhari,

Kanya.

Pooja is more upset when she read this entry. Then she flips the pages and read the entry for the party night.

30th August

Dear Diary,

Aaj Ayaan ke great granny Big D ne humare liye ek party organize ki thi. Usme hume apne parnters ke saath romantic song gaana aur naachna tha. Ayaan aur maine Meelon Ka gaana gaya. Phir Big D ne rules badla aur kaha ki main Ranbir ke saath aur Pooja di Ayaan ke saath gayenge. Ranbir aur maine Bakhuda Tumhi Ho gana gaaya. Uske baad maine Ranbir se I LOVE YOU kaha aur yeh bhi kaha ki di ke liy main tumhare saath nahin reh sakti. Phir maine sab se kaha ki main natak kar rahi thi. Ranbir ka dil toot gaya tha. Diary main us se meri dil ki baath batana chahti hoon. Par kaise? Ek side par meri best buddy behan hain aur doosra side par woh jis se main bahut pyaar kati hoon. Kya karoon?

Tumhari,

Kanya

Pooja has tears welling up her eyes after she reads this entry. Then she slams the book on the floor and runs out of the house.

SCENE SHIFTS TO NANDA MANSION

Everybody is sitting near the mehndiwaali. The mehndi waali has just finished putting mehndi on Kanya's hand-

MW- Aapko apne hone waale pati ka naam nahin likhna kya?

Kanya- Ji baath ye hain ki'..

Pammi- Kanya Ayaan ka naam likho. Pyaar badta hain.

Kanya- Par mama.

Ayaan- Kanya c'mon!!!! You have to yaar!!!

Kanya- Okay. Mere haath mein Ayaan likhiye.

MW- Jee.

MW starts putting the mehndi when Pooja storms into the house.

Pooja- Mehndi waali!!!! RUKHIYE!!!!

Kanya- Di?? Arre likhne do na???

Pooja- Tu chup rahe Kanya toh hi acchha hoga.

MW- Ttheeke memsaab.

Kanya- Di baat kya hain?

Pooja goes upto Kanya and slaps her TWO across her face.

Kanya- Di yeh??

Pooja- Haan! Tu ise deserve karti hain!

Kanya- Di maine kya kiya?

Pooja slaps her two more times. Then Ranbir comes into the room. Then Pooja is about to slap her once more when Ranbir stops her.

Pooja- Aap mujhe kyun stop kar rahe hain?

Ranbir- Tum function kharab kar rahi ho isliye.

Pooja- JHOOT!!!!!!!!

Ranbir- Jhoot matlab??

Pooja- Jhoot matlab jhoot. Aap mujhe isliye rok rahe hain kyunki aap Kanya se pyaar karte hain.

Ranbir- Dekho bakwas mat karo!!!

Pooja- Kyun kar rahe ho yeh tum dono??? KYUN??

Kanya- Di main''

Pooja- CHUP!!!! Kanya I noe you also love hime. Tum yeh isliye kar rahe ho na kyunki tum mujhe dukhi nahin dekhna chahti?

Kanya- Di'.

Pooja- Tujhe kya laga? Main Ranbir se pyaar karti hoon? Are woh to ek crush tha!!! Ek crush! Ranbir ki is behaviour ne mujhe usse woh crush hatane ke liye majboor kiya Kanya. Aur tujhe laga ki tujhe dukhi dek kar main khush hongi? Main itni selfish nahin hoon.

Ranbir- You mean?

Pooja- Haan Ranbir jiju!!!!! Kanya bhi aapse pyaar karti hain!!

Ranbir- Sach Kanya??

Pooja- Of course yeh sach hain!

Kanya- Par di aapko yeh baath kaise patah hain??

Ranbir- That means you love me!!!

Kanya- Di!!!!

Ranbir falls on his knees and starts proposing her all over again.

Ranbir- Kanya I've loved you like I have not loved anyone else. I love you more than Romeo loved Juliet, more than Majnu loved Laila, more than Akbar loved Jodhaa. Kanya please! Please marry me! Will you?

Kanya (with tears in her eyes)- Yes.

Ranbir- Yes????

Kanya- YES!!!!

Ranbir carries her and hugs her tight. Then all the family members question pop up 1 by 1 but Pooja, Ranbir and Kanya answer all the questions! Pooja refuses to answer the question about how she noes about Kanya's feelings. The scene fades for now.

END OF PART 9!!!!

GUYS NO PRE-CAP THIS TIME COZ I WANT IT TO BE A TOTAL SURPRISE FOR YOU ALL!!!

NIDHEYA

Edited by nidhieya - 17 years ago
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just simply loved it. i loved the way ranbir got mad at aditya . u brought evrything to life.


thanx for pm.
Edited by yogitz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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anytime!!! glad tht u liked it!
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what's up with ur incomplete posts?????????????

it is driving me insane.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just the best 😉
i m so emotionel because of you know 😭
conrinuew son
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it was super duper!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwwwwwwwww i wanted a precap
plz plz plz plz atleast pm me ur update plz
plz plz pz plz plz
i can't wait!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
sure sure i will pm u guys!!! thnx for liking it....srry 4 not giving a pre-cap i want it to be a really romantic update with lots of oh-so moments!!! I havent decided nything right now but i want it to be really good and nuice

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