AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

I agree........Armaan's so evil but it seems interesting

update soon and pm me wen u do

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

hey omg yaar dammmmmm intrestng yaar
armaan sch a devil hw could he omg yaar
bt who ztht grl omg yaar disgustng yaar bt intrestng
i would lv 2 read mre.......
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna

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@-Facetious-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

hey taira 😊

thanx for the pm..

Bingo ya, i got blowed by the teaser only..😳

so i'm here to let u knw that i've booked my place in here for the ride u'll take us 😉

luv,

shivani

Edited by $h!V@n! - 17 years ago

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hearme21

@hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Hey rocking intro! Love this baddie Armaan. I am guessing the girl is Ridz. The poor girl is heartbroken :(
Cant wait for part one!
Do PM me!

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nightstar

@nightstar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

armaan is so heartless....i feel so bad 4ridz...plz upd8 sun n pm me if possble

Edited by sacred shrine - 17 years ago

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madhsar

@madhsar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

heyyyyyyyyyy hiiiii !!!!!!!!

thanx for d pm honey.......

n i must say d intro was just fantastic.......u've already set my mind racing as to wat will happen in d story nxt.........very very curious to read dis story....eagerly awaiting d nxt part......plzzzzzzzzzz update soon.....n pm me if u can........

loads of luvvvv

maddy

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sasya

@sasya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

ur introduction was great and i am sure the coming up parts will be greater,hope to read them soon.

armaan was soo mean,i cant understand what made him do that,and i guess the girl is ridhima

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Harpreet

@gidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Wow interesting concept plz do cont. soon 😛

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heezy

@heezy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Taira sweety it seems to me like you've been a silent reader for far too long... you should have written this years ago! LOL

Loved the intro, very shocking start, Armaan messed up someone's life? Can this be our very sweet and adorable Armaan Malik the rest of DMGians have turned into the perfect human be the same Armaan Malik who's slept with 9 out of 10 girls? LOL i loved that line hehe

Do let me know when you continue next, I'd love to see where this story is heading... and btw.. you sure your writing for the 1st time... hoenstly it doesnt seem it 😃

Lubna 😳

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

really a different one 😉nice one 👏⭐️interesting i feel very bad for ridz 😭please continue it soon and thanks for the pm

"Har Qadam Pe Farishton Ka Lashker Ho Sath Tere,
Har Qadam Pe Teri Hifazat Khuda Kare,
Ho Tuje Nasib Esa Uruj Dunya May.
K Asman Bhi Teri Qismat Pe Naz Kare."

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago