AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Kareena

@***Krinz_dmg***

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

heyyyyyy
dat was a gud intro
but arman gosh! cheap or wat
wana no who that gurl was
snt soon
n thx 4 da pm
tc krinz
xxxxxxxxxx

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Wow your FF sounds really interesting!! please continue soon! 👏 Could you please PM me when you update? 😳

Avanti

Edited by forevercharmed - 17 years ago

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Bissu

@Bissu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

mindblowing intro.

if that girl is ridz. aahhhh

continue soon!

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vanita

@suvrati

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

omg what an introduction
totally frm wahat i read earlier this is so different
ok wanna read more
continue soon
plz add me to ur pm list

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

oh wow!! sounds very interesting..!! armaan's a jerk so far in this one.. it's different.. looking forward to reading more..! pm me when u update if u don't mind..!

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zara

@zara.

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

hey nice FF!!

do continue soon n thanx for da pm!

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

ahhah i liked it much!!

i like Az charac...hez potrait as a no nonsense..use n throw kinda guy huh!!lol thtz a 1st of him for sure..!!

cont sweetz! :) thx for d PM!

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Hey thanx for d PM Taira (Is dat ur name... sorry i dont know whether it is...)

Well d Introduction is a nice count... Sounds really interesting... 😃... But like other readers, even i m curious to know who is D GIRL... Well i know most of us already know it, but still may b u have got something else on ur mind... Anywayz, whoever she is, just hope she is a true personality & may b u cud make her d reason for a change in Armaan's character later...😃

Very well written... Please update next part soon to kill our curiousity...

- Sheetal

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

that was a superb intro really different, thanks for the PM- im looking forward to reading more of your ff, - loved how you have shown Armaan in adifferent persona

Sania