AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
omg dis ff sounds really gd
really kin 4wrd to readin dis

arman cheap or wot

omg cnt wait 2 read mre updte sooon plzzz

luv nizma x

Thanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: ttimpy
bow wow........................... taira...................u ve changed the entire persona of armaan mallik .................i never thot that i wud ever relate the word meanie with him.................

nice change though......just want to know who that girl is..................

pl. PM when u continue...............

Thanks a lottttttttttttttt😃

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

ditto yaar

yahan humara armaan kitna bhola bhala aur cute sa hain n in ur ff hes such a ************************* (fill in the bvlanks) hehehehe😆

but seriously ur ff had a gr8 start n ya plz do change his char later on dont like him like this😉😆

i mean its entirely ur wish but plz see to i its just my suggestion

n do pm me when u update😉

👏

Hey thanks so much for your encouraging words and the applause and as for Armaan's character........you have seen just one side of it so wait till you dicover wat kind of a person he really is.

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: krati.mehra
I agree........Armaan's so evil but it seems interesting
update soon and pm me wen u do

Thanks

Originally posted by: yachna
hey omg yaar dammmmmm intrestng yaar
armaan sch a devil hw could he omg yaar
bt who ztht grl omg yaar disgustng yaar bt intrestng
i would lv 2 read mre.......
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna

Thanks a lottttttt Yachna for reading it😃

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!
hey taira 😊

thanx for the pm..

Bingo ya, i got blowed by the teaser only..😳

so i'm here to let u knw that i've booked my place in here for the ride u'll take us 😉

luv,

shivani

Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Shivani for this sweet comment😳😊

Originally posted by: hearme21
Hey rocking intro! Love this baddie Armaan. I am guessing the girl is Ridz. The poor girl is heartbroken :(
Cant wait for part one!
Do PM me!

You'll know soon if she is Riddhima or not.

Thanks for reading it😊

Originally posted by: sacred shrine
armaan is so heartless....i feel so bad 4ridz...plz upd8 sun n pm me if possble

Will try and update soon.

Thanks

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: na2339

Taira sweety it seems to me like you've been a silent reader for far too long... you should have written this years ago! LOL

Loved the intro, very shocking start, Armaan messed up someone's life? Can this be our very sweet and adorable Armaan Malik the rest of DMGians have turned into the perfect human be the same Armaan Malik who's slept with 9 out of 10 girls? LOL i loved that line hehe

Do let me know when you continue next, I'd love to see where this story is heading... and btw.. you sure your writing for the 1st time... hoenstly it doesnt seem it 😃

Lubna 😳

awwwwwww...........thats soooooooooooooo sweet of you.

Thank you so much for reading it and then leaving such a lovely comment

Yup i m writing for the first time and with your sweet words i feel really comfortable and motivated. Thanks so much

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: madhsar
heyyyyyyyyyy hiiiii !!!!!!!!
thanx for d pm honey.......

n i must say d intro was just fantastic.......u've already set my mind racing as to wat will happen in d story nxt.........very very curious to read dis story....eagerly awaiting d nxt part......plzzzzzzzzzz update soon.....n pm me if u can........

loads of luvvvv

maddy

Hey thanks a lot maddy for reading it and commenting on it

Your words encouraged me a lot

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: sasya
ur introduction was great and i am sure the coming up parts will be greater,hope to read them soon.
armaan was soo mean,i cant understand what made him do that,and i guess the girl is ridhima

Thanks a lot for encouraging me

Originally posted by: gidha
Wow interesting concept plz do cont. soon 😛

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a different one 😉nice one 👏⭐️interesting i feel very bad for ridz 😭please continue it soon and thanks for the pm

"Har Qadam Pe Farishton Ka Lashker Ho Sath Tere,
Har Qadam Pe Teri Hifazat Khuda Kare,
Ho Tuje Nasib Esa Uruj Dunya May.
K Asman Bhi Teri Qismat Pe Naz Kare."

Hey thanks a lot but don't be so sure about the girl being Ridz

Originally posted by: angelnevelie
hey nice FF!!
do continue soon n thanx for da pm!

Glad u liked it..........thanks a lot

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ***Krinz_dmg***
heyyyyyy
dat was a gud intro
but arman gosh! cheap or wat
wana no who that gurl was
snt soon
n thx 4 da pm
tc krinz
xxxxxxxxxx

Thanks a lot for ur encouraging words😃

Originally posted by: forevercharmed
Wow your FF sounds really interesting!! please continue soon! 👏 Could you please PM me when you update? 😳

Avanti

Thanks a lot 😃

Will def PM u

Originally posted by: Bissu
mindblowing intro.
if that girl is ridz. aahhhh

continue soon!

Thanks and you'll know soon if that gal is Ridz or not

Originally posted by: suvrati
omg what an introduction
totally frm wahat i read earlier this is so different
ok wanna read more
continue soon
plz add me to ur pm list

Thanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: armaanaddict
oh wow!! sounds very interesting..!! armaan's a jerk so far in this one.. it's different.. looking forward to reading more..! pm me when u update if u don't mind..!

Thanks a bunch for ur comment

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: missypatel
ahhah i liked it much!!

i like Az charac...hez potrait as a no nonsense..use n throw kinda guy huh!!lol thtz a 1st of him for sure..!!

cont sweetz! :) thx for d PM!

Thank you

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal
Hey thanx for d PM Taira (Is dat ur name... sorry i dont know whether it is...)

Well d Introduction is a nice count... Sounds really interesting... 😃... But like other readers, even i m curious to know who is D GIRL... Well i know most of us already know it, but still may b u have got something else on ur mind... Anywayz, whoever she is, just hope she is a true personality & may b u cud make her d reason for a change in Armaan's character later...😃

Very well written... Please update next part soon to kill our curiousity...

- Sheetal

Yup my name is Tiara and thanks a lot Sheetal for the lovely comment

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva
that was a superb intro really different, thanks for the PM- im looking forward to reading more of your ff, - loved how you have shown Armaan in adifferent persona

Sania

Thanks a lottttttttttttt

Originally posted by: twinkle94
amazin intro interestin concept do cont soon! plz fel free to PM me!

❤️twinkle!

Thanks

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Rejected
wow sounds good from what i read continue soon cant wait to read more

Thanks a lot😊

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal
WOW Taira... loved part 1... simply great

ok, so Armaan's the typical flirt... but who was the girl? Ridhima?...well, i hope so...lol... o boy! he called her ugly!... 🤢.... how mean!... well i hope he feels bad soon, nd the check he gave her... well i think she should keep it or something for later.... o man i've alredy started planning out this story in my head😆,...lol... loved the concept

continue soon, nd pm me please

Love,
Irsa

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment

You'll know soon if she is Ridz or not

Thanks again😊

Originally posted by: hibos1
a very good beginning,...Armaan being so mean is new,.....please continue....

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
nice consept...........keep it up.............
❤️MONA

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
hey gr8 intro! cant wait to read more! plz pm me when u cont :)

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox
amazing start
nice concept

update it soon

plz pm me whenever u update

Thanks a lot for ur comment

Will update soon

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH
Heyy great first part!
I'm definitely sure that the girl was Ridzy....and armaan bhi na...what a jerk...I had a feeling that it was armaan when I was reading it.
Omg he called her ugly...how dare he...ya know I bet he's soon going to think that she's one of the most beautiful women he's ever seen lol.
Hun you've already got me hooked...please do continue soon.
Thanks soo much for the pm...I hope you'll be able to pm me when you post the next part?
Amazing job once again

~Mira~

Thanks..........Don't be so sure about the gal being Ridzy coz u never know😆

Thanks again

Originally posted by: aravi
hyyyyyyyyy! count me in n armaan being so rude! can't stand it! but i wonder who da gurl hapens too b?????????? neways do PM me da next tym u update!!!!!!!
luv aravi

Thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Originally posted by: Tas
woww..gr8 start....hmmmmm hope tht girl is nt riddhima...w8ing to see armaan transform into a sweet person...hehhee..actually he is good in any character..pls update soon.

I agree totally

Thanks😃

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