AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

omg dat was great i luved it n

luv ridz lol shes a sly one clevr doh

pooor armi luved dis updte very nce

updte sooon plzzz

n thx 4 da pm

luv niz x

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

ha ha dat waz funny por Armaan i wonder wat else Ridz is lyin bout thnx 4 tha update an PM do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#123

really a nice one ⭐️ and sweet😳😳😳 and very funny😆😆😆 she knows hindi too gud😆😆😆 awwsome please continue it soon 😳and thanks for the pm😳

"Wo samne aye to nazro ko jhuka longa
DekhoNga nahi phir b tasweer bana longa
Aana ho to aa jao ruswayee nahi hogi
Dekhe ga nahi koi, palkon main chupa longa."

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

lollyyy.. hehehe.. omg poor armi became popat.. hehahehe.... ohh gosh!!!!!!! he spoke 2 atul abt her n den she landed up noeing d languge..
dat was an amzngg prt.. thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

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Harpreet

@gidha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

That was ace

Luved it

Plz do cont. and many thanks for the PM 😉

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#126

Haha ridzy totally shocked armaan..i had a feeling she knew how to speak hindi but just wanted to know what armaan was going to say...and i think he ended up saying way more than what he wanted her to know 😆
great great part! I loved it.
Thanks soo much for the pm!

Edited by Gotta_luv_KYPH - 17 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#127

omg that was fantastic!!!! ⭐️ 👏

i loved the way ridz put armaan in his place, i bet ridz's friend who is in the hospital is that girl from the first part and ridz will find out about her and armaan, blame him and try to take revenge or somthing 😲

do update soon😊

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Fahima..

@SillyAngel

Voyager

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Posted: 17 years ago

#128

Haha ,

Riddhima bhi kuch kaam nahi hai...and that Armaan can't he control himself sometimes lol jaab dekho ladkion ke barre mein baatein karat rehta hai!! Besharam!

Loved how it was a shocker at the end very well written!!

Please do continue very soon with a new surprising part lol

Thnx for the PM

Take Care

Luv

Afifa

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Taira

Hey i am really thankful to you for leaving this detailed comment because this will help me in future and u know wat i too hate things like this so don't worry there is not going to be anything of the sort here.

Thanks a lot for reading it and leaving this comment.

I'll be updating today

Thanks again and keep reading😃

Hey Taira... Thanx for d PM...

i m gonna read d latest part after a while... i just wanna say dat Thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much for assuring dat nothing like wat i mentioned above is gonna b thee in ur FF... i love u for dis... 😛... Now I m sure dat i will definitely enjoy ur FF...

& about "detailed comments" 😆... Dont worry, u will get it most of d time... i mean ask other FFwriters... dey will tell u about my thesis cum essays in d comment boxes... u will get bored of dem...😃😃 i m a blabber mouth u see...

Anywayz at d moment i m a bit busy, so once i read Part in few hrs i will surely comment...

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 17 years ago