AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x

Wow amaing ff....jus read the 1st part

i wonder who dat girl is wiv armaan...
at first i thought it was ridz but den she's a model...
hmmmmm?
anywez....
plzzzzzz continu soon
and do pm me wen u update as dis f sound intresting and exciting lol...
luv ya,
ridz,
.x.

Thanks
M glad u liked it and u'll know soon who the girl is.
Will try and update today
Thanks😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kash_lover

nice part!!

update soon!!

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hi Taira... thanx again for d PM... & i m sorry to reply sooooooo late... i m being quite busy these days...

Anywayz... hmmmmmmm so Riddhima is a Top Model...😎 dats nice, in fact very interesting...😛 OK so u hv given gud enough background of AR... well i was a lil apprehensive about d GIRL Armaan recently dumped... but now i m even more Anxious... i mean i m sure dis girl whoever she is is gonna create trouble for Armaan in future... i know dat Armaan is no gud at dis time... but once AR r together & if by any chance dis Girl intervened by any means, i wud hate it... 😡...
Y does it ALWAYZ happen dat D Hero dumps some XYZ girl & den Heroine comes into his life... once hero-heroine r together dat old XYZ girl comes back into their lives, then either she keeps blackmailing d Hero, or she comes wid a Baby saying "OMG dis is ur child, please accept d child..."...😡😡😡 & Well since our hero is a Hero so either he accepts d child n mother & leaves d Heroine behind crying & Sacrificing her love😭 or heroine accepts his Child & d other lady Sacrifices🤢🤢🤢 her love for our hero... wat d hell...👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼 its soooooo... its soooooooo yuck....😡😡😡 i m fed up by such plots... 😡😡😡... & to make a topping, in some plots d Hero-Heroine separates & den after a leap pf few years dey come meet each other knowing dat dey still love each other & both of dem r suffering from d pain of SEPARATION... Wat a Ekta Kapoor style...
i m sorry talk a lil toooooooooo much... but really i m fed up... i m fed up by such story plots...
Hope u hv something different on ur my Tiara... i m sure u hv something else... Coz ur writing style gives me a BETTER IDEA... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼...
Well d update was really nice... i liked AR's introduction & their background... so v r gonna meet 2 hard core professionals in future huh... i wud love to read how is d story gonna move...
Please update ASAP...
- Sheetal

Hey i am really thankful to you for leaving this detailed comment because this will help me in future and u know wat i too hate things like this so don't worry there is not going to be anything of the sort here.
Thanks a lot for reading it and leaving this comment.
I'll be updating today
Thanks again and keep reading😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
WHOOOOSHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! now dis gurl actually something so finally armaan gets someone to match his boots! gosh! must b so damn embarassed ya!!!!!!!!! me still laughing at da situation here!!!!!!!! god so he already blown away by da beauty!!!!!!!! now can't wait for more!!!!!!!!! armaan said so much to atul n she could make out everything !poor bloke! neways enugh of my pitying him!!!!!!!!! thnks 4 da PM !!!!!!!!! love aravi
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey taira got ur name frm the previous posts
thnx a tonne fr the pm
loved the 2nd prt srslky

armaan got smitten by ridz beauty that too in the first mmeeting
lo this gonna be very romantic i guess
ridhima super model n armaan business men perfect combination fr ppl to fall in love
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn waiting fr ur nxt update thoroughly
plz jaldi update karna.
Edited by suvrati - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey taira hows yaar .............omg yaar aftr readng ur prt seriously iws laughg sooooooooooooo mch yaar fst whn he heard tht nme omg he wntd 2 meet her hmmmmmmmm kabhi nahi sudhrega nd whn he saw her omg yaar his phne fell dwn he ws continuously staryng at her god wch ws dammmmmmmmmmmm gud yaar jst lvd it d way he answrd 2 atul in hndi omg poor hm lv at fst sght omg ayar seriously he ws hmmm lets see yaar i lvd it soooooooooo mch yaar......................jst lvd it........wht ws he sayng in hindi nd he thought she doesn't understnd bt whnn she met her dad nd said in hindi he ws totaly totaly shckd omg yaar dats means she understood evrythng ab tera kya hoga gosh nxt prt it wll be mre fun yaar cnt wait fr d nxt prt..........
plzzzzzzzzzz
cont soooooooooooon thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
Edited by yachna - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG i luved part 2....
first time i read dat armaans and ridz 1st meeting is sooo ordinary..well nt really buh i mean no figts and dat...
hahaha armaan's bad luck or good luck....ridz knws how to speak hindi....hahhha...i wonder wat he has to say now...
thnxks sooo much...and plzzz continu soon
real soon...i cant w8 4 next part....
thnx 4 da pm and plzzzz do pm me wen update
luv ya
ridz,
.x.
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 riddhima knew how 2 speak hindi! lol! so she understood watever armaan said! cool! lol! i m sure armaan is so embarrsed! its hilrious! u cracked me up! 😆 cntd sn and thank u soooooooo much 4 d pm!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part👏!
v. funny😆
update soon😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tiara
thanks for the pm sweety
aww this part was mesmerizing
wow yaar armi clean bowled by ridz in the first move only
hheheheheeheheh
n that she knows hindi well i thought so
poor armi heheheehhe
update soon

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