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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#101

Hi Taira... thanx again for d PM... & i m sorry to reply sooooooo late... i m being quite busy these days...

Anywayz... hmmmmmmm so Riddhima is a Top Model...😎 dats nice, in fact very interesting...😛 OK so u hv given gud enough background of AR... well i was a lil apprehensive about d GIRL Armaan recently dumped... but now i m even more Anxious... i mean i m sure dis girl whoever she is is gonna create trouble for Armaan in future... i know dat Armaan is no gud at dis time... but once AR r together & if by any chance dis Girl intervened by any means, i wud hate it... 😡...

Y does it ALWAYZ happen dat D Hero dumps some XYZ girl & den Heroine comes into his life... once hero-heroine r together dat old XYZ girl comes back into their lives, then either she keeps blackmailing d Hero, or she comes wid a Baby saying "OMG dis is ur child, please accept d child..."...😡😡😡 & Well since our hero is a Hero so either he accepts d child n mother & leaves d Heroine behind crying & Sacrificing her love😭 or heroine accepts his Child & d other lady Sacrifices🤢🤢🤢 her love for our hero... wat d hell...👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼 its soooooo... its soooooooo yuck....😡😡😡 i m fed up by such plots... 😡😡😡... & to make a topping, in some plots d Hero-Heroine separates & den after a leap pf few years dey come meet each other knowing dat dey still love each other & both of dem r suffering from d pain of SEPARATION... Wat a Ekta Kapoor style...

i m sorry talk a lil toooooooooo much... but really i m fed up... i m fed up by such story plots...

Hope u hv something different on ur my Tiara... i m sure u hv something else... Coz ur writing style gives me a BETTER IDEA... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼...

Well d update was really nice... i liked AR's introduction & their background... so v r gonna meet 2 hard core professionals in future huh... i wud love to read how is d story gonna move...

Please update ASAP...

- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 17 years ago

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Shania

@x-Ridzzie-x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#102

Wow amaing ff....jus read the 1st part

i wonder who dat girl is wiv armaan...

at first i thought it was ridz but den she's a model...

hmmmmm?

anywez....

plzzzzzz continu soon

and do pm me wen u update as dis f sound intresting and exciting lol...

luv ya,

ridz,

.x.

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#103

hey

thanks for the pm sweety

whoa it was a rocking part

sorry for late comments papa had disconnected the net for 2 days

but will comment in detail later on running out of time

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Taira

Hey thanks for reading my FF

I have read a lot of ur FF and i have loved all of them so every complment or criticism of yours means a lot to me.

Thanks😊

LOL babes.... serious what am i going to say😲....

lol im not here to judge but enjoy ur creative mind like everyone else..😆

Please update soon and the more u experiment the more you will learn...lol im still learning

Love Kat

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#105

really interstin start!

i m already lovin it!

armaan is such a playboy!

he is just so cheap, chi! i

m glad dat gurl is nt ridz!

n ridz is d best model, cool amzin!

i m totally lovin d concept!

its really awsum!

plz do cntd sn and can u plz do pm me whever u hve updated?

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

hyyyyyyyyy!taira!!!!!!!!!!!! now dis one was absolutely charming!!!!!!!!!!!! njoying every bit of dis ff !@ luved ridzy-armi relationship !!!!!!!!!!! chooo chweet!!!!!!!! n yeah thnks a ton for da PM hun!!!!!!!!!

so she all ready to sweep armaan off da floor wid her killer looks!!!!!!!! gurl me expecting some love sparks dis time! n me so sorry as couldn't comment having some trouble wid my broadband neways it was rocking! n 4 now better update sooooooooonnnnnnnn!

luv

aravi

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: aravi
hyyyyyyyyy!taira!!!!!!!!!!!! now dis one was absolutely charming!!!!!!!!!!!! njoying every bit of dis ff !@ luved ridzy-armi relationship !!!!!!!!!!! chooo chweet!!!!!!!! n yeah thnks a ton for da PM hun!!!!!!!!!

so she all ready to sweep armaan off da floor wid her killer looks!!!!!!!! gurl me expecting some love sparks dis time! n me so sorry as couldn't comment having some trouble wid my broadband neways it was rocking! n 4 now better update sooooooooonnnnnnnn!

luv

aravi

Thanks soooooooooooooooo much.......

Will try and update soon and i hope u get wat u want wen they meet for the first time.

Thanks for reading and commenting on it .............it means a lot to me

😊

Edited by Taira - 17 years ago

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi
really interstin start!
i m already lovin it!

armaan is such a playboy!

he is just so cheap, chi! i

m glad dat gurl is nt ridz!

n ridz is d best model, cool amzin!

i m totally lovin d concept!

its really awsum!

plz do cntd sn and can u plz do pm me whever u hve updated?

Thanks a lot

Yup Armaan is kind of a playboy but his complete character is yet to unfold.

Will try and update today😃

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Catwoman

LOL babes.... serious what am i going to say😲....

lol im not here to judge but enjoy ur creative mind like everyone else..😆

Please update soon and the more u experiment the more you will learn...lol im still learning

Love Kat

I know you are here to enjoy but all that i mean to say is i'll really value ur comments in fact i value every person's comment here. So will be glad if u too will criticise or compliment my work.😃

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey

thanks for the pm sweety

whoa it was a rocking part

sorry for late comments papa had disconnected the net for 2 days

but will comment in detail later on running out of time

Thanks a lot

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