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Kaj!

@Kaj!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#151

lol maya discussing her massi's sex life now. y dont u have babies n all lol 🤣 cute

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#152

Hi Kat,

Amazing part as usual....

Loved the scene the kitchen scene,.....& then Ridz thinking about what would have had happened if she had gone the Anjali way was just too right....people do regret doing & not doing some things....

maya is too much.....jealous of little disha cos Arman can;t give her any time......perfect Anjali's daughter, no wonder Vicky was her dad & not Atul, hehehehe

Now with this Muskan being Arman's GF, I have some theories....

don't think she is really his GF, cos Maya wanted to marry Arman & even asked him, so I am guessing this could be maya & bi's pplot

Maybe Arman think Ridz is giving herself to him, cos she is lonely, not cos she loves him. so he himself got muskan to play his GF, to find out Ridz's true feeling towards him

I think Arman really likes Ridz, cos he repeats her words, 'still love you', & also he wouldn't just kiss her for nothing, but then again, I am confused, the 1st kiss was intiated by Ridz & even the 2nd too...then again she kissed his cheek when he was leaving not the other way around

ok, I give up, I am totally confused & am going insane....please do continue soon....

take care

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#153

now now di me extremely sowieeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! just couldn't comment on da last 2 parts!! actually my silly broadband giving me trouble 4 ages now!!!!!!!!! but both da parts together were actually a treat b'coz reading two new updates dat too by kat dat to back-2-back !yummmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!

now ridsy trying to get back wid armaan!!!!!!! i mean di how do u do it!!!!!!!!!!wid every ff of urs i fall in luv wid ur "macho-man" all da more!!!!!!!1 how can a guy b soooooooooooooo understanding n sweet n caring n practical!!! da list too long!!!!!!!!!!!!!

neways di u just got me so hyper!!!!!!!!!! guess!! "da KAT EFFECT"n now was it so necessary for muski to enter da perfect frame just at da rite moment??????????? i mean things were just starting to get better but no here cums his GF introducing herself to his ex wat a situation i say!!!!!!!!!!! only u capable of such stuff!!!!!!!!!

seriously me finding her in a negative shade but may b she acts as a catalyst to ignite some looveeeeeee-sparks!!!!!!!! but we can never tell wat r u upto!!!!!!!!! ok me read dis rite now n will b tossing in my bed sleeep just won't cum to me! just kidding !!!!!!!!!

n no complaints as we r bestowed wid an amazing update almost every next day!!!!! n yeah forgot to mention maya happens to b an absolute sweetheart!!!! she actually playing a cupid!!!!!!!!! hope da arrow strikes da love chordS of dere hearts soon enugh !!

luv ya ton$$$$$$$$$$

aravi

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Fahima..

@SillyAngel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#154

continue pleasee!!!

where is ur update for today?....remember everyrday updates?😆

lol just continue soon with ur FFs

luv

afifa

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@spln

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#155

oki late comment from me again kat....but here u go....

first....YAAYYYYYYYYYY ridzi falling ...nah i mean realizing she never got up after falling once!!!i love it when the guys in ur fics pull themselves away n the girls run after them u just make that whole plot so so so enticing!!!!

oki next....boy wht is this guy???he liked trained all his life how to handle babies or what????um sure he's give most new mothers a run for their money, including his own cousin ritu!!!! chirag gota take lessons!!!!

last....i cant stop my silly grin from displaying non stop in each scene maya comes....the kids got some punk lady....if she like this now, what she gona do to the guys when she in her blooming teens!!! awsome character sketch its one of my fav from u...i think minnie from the royal rajputs n maya here...tough competition between the two!!!

overall me loved the part....n well muskaan...somehow dint bother me much...um sure he pulling off another mindless idea to try n keep her away....but how long dude!!!thats the question!!!

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cheen

@cheen2005

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Posted: 17 years ago

#156

Ok so just read all 4 parts and OMG I have no words, I was soooooo into the story that I printed it and was reading it around my friends too hehe

this is an amazing plot and pleeeeeeeeease update soon, i reallllly wanna see why armaan called muski his gf, which like everyone else i also think is a lie as he doesnt want ridzi to go against her dad n realized she "still loves him" so doesnt wanna break her like that again!!!

but yea i really cant wait...ping me when u update...thanks 😃

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

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Posted: 17 years ago

#157

OMGsh!!!! Nooooo!!! Everything was soooo perfect but the end!!!! No yaar Muski can't be Armaan's girlfriend!!! 😔😔😔 Ridz is gonna be sooo hurt!!! Oh man...I hope AR get 2gether soon...I'm sure Maya's gonna be an awesome matchmaker..lol...Like little Anjali in KKHT...Can't w8 for more...Do cont. soon...

Love,

Ananya

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#158

KAT!

I Just finished reading all the parts to this FF...WOW, I don't know how many times I've told you this but you are a seriously good writer...I love the storyline of this FF too... i love how Maya is trying to bring Armaan and Riddhima together..and I love how Maya gets jealous on seeing Disha..lol..its too cute...Continue Sooon!

Anita

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desi_angel101

@desi_angel101

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#159

K so after reading its in his kiss I've officially become obsessed with ur fics... I read thru all of life support (brilliant it actually made me cry when it ended) and then I c that u posted another bedtime ff (whoever sucked lol u into this thank u sooo much) n u cud not imagine how happy I was!! I read thru all four parts and luvd them... U have such a cute storyline going here with maya trying to get them together soo sweet... She asks the cutest not to mention the right things at the wrong time like when she asks how come armaan broke up with ridz that was really funny... Hmm but the million dollae question is why exactly did he break up with her?? Oh god plz don't tell me there's an evil person here too! Lmao I don't think I can take another heart attack... Anyways ghatia jokes apart this is such a sweet, simple and beautiful storyline and I'm really enjoying it... Needless to say plz update soon!

Luv Richa

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#160

Kat dii
this fic of urs is simply fab👏

i luv luv armaan ridz chemistry and physics😆...................but above all, there phycology is above my mind.............they both think so differently jii..........but for each other😳

The whole moments b/w ridz and armaan were so cute and luv luv them😃😛

maya is so sweet and with bi, playing mission "Kuch kuch hota hai" i like the sound😃

See, how will this plan work..............but really, maya is an amazin child.................outspoken and broadminded and yes, as NJ said, after minnie of its is his kiss, i luv maya's character.................NJ, really a tuff fiht going on tooo😳

Armaan luving babies and his way of handling them is so much lovable, i luv when he was making Disha take a bath😆

cont soon dii

luv ya

lolz
ana😳😃