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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#141

OMG U did not stop dere!!

I luved the part...was simply excellent!

Maya's cute jealousy and the romance at the end was just fantastic!

And ur usual cliffhanger!

please tell me ur continuing dis 2day??

Cant wait 2 know whu the hell Muskaan is!

Do continue super soon...Cant wait 4 the next part!

-Marisha

Edited by perfectpiscean - 17 years ago

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Tania

@Sadaf.B

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#142

kat, muskaan better not be his girlfriend.. make her his sister, nani dadi or whatever you want 😆 or plzz find rahul for her!! 😉

I loved the part, i'm sure it's goin to be very interesting, even if muskaan is his gilrfriend..

Continue soooooon..

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Fahima..

@SillyAngel

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#143

WoW!!

updating almost everyday...awesomee!!!

Hey Kat...why the cliffhanger buddy?!?!...LOL

soo...Muskaan ehh...wonder riddhima will react...but i thought he was singlee...sadd

continue real soon....like tomorrow..hehe

luv

Afifa

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#144

omg!!!!

u didnt!!!!i koe for a fact muskaanz nt his gf..hes only doin tis cuz he wants R 2 keep away frm his...cuz he wudnt be able 2 stop himself again!!!!

OMG!!!!! nooooooooooo!!!!

gurl tis was d most stuck up part ever..i mean i was stuck wit end of d previous part...i wasnt breathing at all...u cn say dt..cuz i was skippin every bit..every 3/7th word or line...2 koe if tey gt close again or tey kissed..I PROMISE!!omg!! unbelievable..!!i had 2 reread all of it..cuz id skip a para or 2 n ten go bck 2!!!
awwwww!! d whole time i was like...its cumin...its ter..hold on..almost!! ......................n it never came!! 🤬😭

ahhhaaha!! gud 1 kat!! i luv yur fic!! 😆

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: missypatel
omg!!!!

u didnt!!!!i koe for a fact muskaanz nt his gf..hes only doin tis cuz he wants R 2 keep away frm his...cuz he wudnt be able 2 stop himself again!!!!

OMG!!!!! nooooooooooo!!!!

gurl tis was d most stuck up part ever..i mean i was stuck wit end of d previous part...i wasnt breathing at all...u cn say dt..cuz i was skippin every bit..every 3/7th word or line...2 koe if tey gt close again or tey kissed..I PROMISE!!omg!! unbelievable..!!i had 2 reread all of it..cuz id skip a para or 2 n ten go bck 2!!!
awwwww!! d whole time i was like...its cumin...its ter..hold on..almost!! ......................n it never came!! 🤬😭

ahhhaaha!! gud 1 kat!! i luv yur fic!! 😆

LMAO ....u made me laugh..... ok lets see what Bi and Maya do?

Love kat😳

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nuts123

@nuts123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#146

Another great part as usual Kat... well, i seemed to have reserved a spot for my comment, but can't find it...lol

anywyaz,,, continue soon, and i hope muski's not HIS girlfrend... but i'm guessing he's faking it so Ridz wud stay away from him...lol

Love,
Irsa

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#147

diii.. i just finished reading part 4.. haila...! i fainted! Riddhima and Armaan absolutely sizzle- i love maya and her trying to get them together all the time!

urrgh... Muskaan had to tapofy now! can't she not be armaan's gf but rahul's!

please do continue sooon!