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@-Facetious-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

wow, what a pace di..😆😆

moments back i figured that Armaan's a sweetheart 😳 and the real villain is Shanky😡😡

not that i'm complaining...i'm greedy for more😆😆😆

awesome update👏👏👏

cont sooooooooon..

- shivani

P.S. I love Maya😳...just adore that little kid....now dat she'll play a catalyst😆😆😆

hmm.........looks like Disha n Maya share a tough competition, but who wont? After all its Armaan baby😆

Edited by $h!V@n! - 17 years ago

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#122

Hey this is amazingly cool and i really loved it

Continue soon

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#123

okiess soo d babies came in wrong tym.... omg des babies na.. btwn i luv maya.. omg she is such a devil... keeps asking nythng nytym.. btwn y didn't armi choke up....
bt luvd her... omg jr anjie..
supersoon update.

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#124

wot a great updte omg

n maya is sooooo adorable n bi luvin her lol

missing kuch kuch hota hai lol

dat was sooo damn gd wooow

great updte asusul

continue sooon

luv niz x

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

awesome part kat👏

maya is adorable😆😳!

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sasya

@sasya

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#126

i really enjoyed reading this part,it was great👏👏

the maya wa behaving was funny,she is sweet........

armaan likes her alot,continue soon........

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Kaj!

@Kaj!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#127

awww...armaan n maya bits r so cute. shes so straight to the point. "y did u dump massi"😆

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#128

amazing psrt KAT di luved it

keep it up,

chandni

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nuts123

@nuts123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#129

great part... maya is so cute...hmmm, the last bit was quite unexpected though... ridz kissing him back??... and armaan pulling away😆...lol... his first move was made randomly... one minute he was talking to her, then the next, he was kissing her!!!😆😳😳

continue soon, can't wait 2 see wht cooks up b/w the two

Love,
Irsa

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#130

Wow Kat loving your update pace firstly!! Nothing pleases me more as i tell you!!😉 And it was such an adorable part!!

Ok loved the way Maya said she wanted to marry him!!! and Ridz sent her to him?? 🤣 The entire scene was such a cute one. Loved it loved loved it!!!😳

k she gave them a new place?? AA i mean?? Loved the way ur penning Ridz emotions Kat!!👏 Shes becum so very rigid. Ahh wud love to see how the ice melts!!

Ok u got in three khans,Akshay and now Troy and gabby??? Zac and cody......😆😆 Calling Ridz Gabby.....awesome scene there.⭐️

The scene at the grave was really touching....Kat really moved me!! Brilliantly penned down as usual!!

The parlour scene!! Kat u r really a genius....the heart thing...gosh how do u manage thinking of such adorable ideas??

Yep I loved seeing you win…as you had this cute sparkle in you're eyes…and looked so cute with ice cream on you're lips grinning… and after we would…Ice cream never tasted so good….." he raised his eyebrows a couple of times looking at her and winked to see her looking at her stunned.

Hawww that was really a cute one. kat ur really sum genius!! Ok Bi setting up Maya to be Anjali?? KKHH??? Kat u r really like surpassing ur already excellent ideas!! KKHH and we hav Kads-SRK here as AR?? 😆😆 Gosh this is really getting too good!!

Armaan taking care of kids?? He is such a sweetheart!! Haha Ridz cudnt take care of Maya....i can imagine!! Ok loved the kitchen scene!! Am glad Ridz saw that he isnt married though....finally....😳

The past helps us to learn from our mistake …and the future is always unclear…..But today is precious gift as why would we call it the present!…" Riddhima looked at him stunned as he smiled.

Kat thats the most beautiful line i ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh i have taken note of it now....its such a beautiful thought....i mean left me speechless here....Kat masterstroke really!!

Ahh the last bit....gosh now um way to eager to know her reaction....Kat love the way ur weaving this....and the guest appearances...by khans,troy, is simply jus adding an icing on a cake!!

Desperately waiting
love
Jia